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Reviews for I Hate Being Right

By : Ulrike
  • From AlphaLightBearer on February 20, 2018

    this was an amazing and disturbing journey. very well written. the emotions you portraid throughout the story were VERY well felt.

    thank you so much for sharing your art! and i'm off to read the sequel! :D


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  • From ANON - Boneheart on August 31, 2015
    This story was amazing. So much suspense & everytime it looked like poor Vegeta would be saved, he ended up back in danger. The ending is tragic, but I've found you started writing a sequel to it on Fanfiction.net. I'm about to start it, hopefully Vegeta won't die this time. This story really did make me think. You're an incredible writer, this is definitely a favorite story. Thank you so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Ryven on July 18, 2013
    Good job on this darker then what I normally read, but it made me think something. There are actually people out there in Vegeta and Yamcha's role, and suddenly even though I put up with a lot of people's emotional baggage, it suddenly made me realize my life is no where near that bad. I don't know if I should thank you for writing it or be mad, so you know what I'm simply going to congratulate you on pointing out in so many words yes, Life is not fair one bit. Sometimes your the quote bitch and sometimes your the one in charge..
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  • From ANON - LadyAlucard on June 10, 2012
    This story is really horrible.
    And I don't necessarily mean that in a bad way. But certainly not in a good way either.

    It was disgusting gruesome, nauseating, repulsive and so many other things. Yet it was very well written and, despite my disgust with the perpetrators and me feeling the terrible fear and humilation the victim went through right along with him, I just couldn't stop reading.
    I must shamefully admit that I'm usually not against reading a bit of torture and upsetting me is not easy, but this story took humilation and non-con to a new level.

    I was especially upset about Yamcha. When Vegeta bumped into him on his way to freedom, I honestly belived in a good ending, and somehow I feel that if this had really happend in the DBZ universe, then Yamcha WOULD have helped Vegeta from the beginning. I mean Vegeta must have looked horrible and that alone would have promted a good guy like Yamcha to help him. No matter how much of an asshole Vegeta could be. This was the only moment that seemed a bit OOC for me though. The rest of the story you seemed to stay frighteningly accurate to their Characters. Especially Vegeta.

    Due to me being a bit of a pansy I would have wished for a Happy End (however happy this could have ended anyway), but I suppose not every story can End in a happy ever after. Your ending makes me wonder what happens afterwards though? Cause eventually both Vegetas and Yamchas absence has got to be noticed, and surely the others would go looking for them.


    Anyway, even though me review seems so negative, I certainly enjoyed reading it and you seem to be a talented author. Is there any chance of you writing other DBZ stories focused on Vegeta in the future? I would really like to read the if you do... though probably not one like this ever again.
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  • From ANON - Youni on May 02, 2011
    I read your fiction in entirety today. You made me cry. This end is so good, but also so much revolting. Horrible even. But I liked this fiction, because as you say it, that shows the cruelty of the man well, than the life is not fair.
    That disturbed me XD
    Good luck for the future ! :D
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  • From ANON - CheekyHolmes on June 02, 2010
    Wow. I'm deeply disturbed, intrigued, and my mind is running a mile a minute. You couldn't have described the horrors of human nature more beautifully (in a kind of sick, perverse way). What I would really like is a sequel, but I don't know if that'll be happening anytime soon, or at all. Cheers!
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  • From Camui on November 30, 2009
    Gah, I shoulda known there wasn't gonna be a happy ending. :( haha. But! I did indeed step out of my shell. Envisioning everything that you wrote out... you weren't overly detailing things but you made a clear picture to show exactly what was happening. It's like, as I read along, I could literally daydream and see what was happening. (daynightmare? lol)

    The character development was huge. Though I suppose I'm probably not the only reader/reviewer that would like a sequel... with less violence (still violence, but less), and more love. And sex? Lots of sex. I enjoy that. But some love, too. But, you're the author, it's your call, as readers we can only be thankful with what we're given, haha.

    Hmmm... on that note, I bid you, and your story, good night. I truly did enjoy this.

    ♥
    Camui
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  • From MasterofPie on November 14, 2009
    i did enjoy it ... hoping for something a little happier but I think I prefer this ending over a happy ending

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  • From ANON - dinamicus on November 11, 2009
    Well, I like this.I didn't want they killed Vegeta...That hurt.But the ideas in the ending ... they're very good.They are the obverse(?) of the ideas from the beginning. It was clever



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  • From coconut81 on November 11, 2009
    Wow. I definitely didn't expect that ending, but I like it--it's shocking and unsettling. Great story, can't wait to see what you write next!
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  • From Pixelgoddess on November 10, 2009
    Ooo - not the ending I expected. Very intriguing and difficult. Vegeta dying is disappointing (because I never like main character death) but it is true to the story. I don't see how he could have NOT destroyed the planet if he had survived - his pride would have allowed nothing less. Then there would have been the potential battle between him and Goku, and what if Goku had figured out what had actually happened. I think what bothers me the most is Yamcha being captured. The circumstances don't ring quite right for me - I find it difficult to believe that, as a fighter, he would let his guard down so completely. He knows they are dangerous - he might have hesitated to kill, but I don't think he would let their attack through his guard. I do wonder where the other Z fighters are - maybe they'd ignore Vegeta, but I can't see them ignoring something happening to Yamcha. Yamcha's ki would alert them to something going on. I'm kind of hoping for a sequel :D - rescue Yamcha and bring Vegeta back without memory of what happened. Just think of all the Yamcha and Vegeta angst that could create. :P Well written and I can't wait to see what story you come up with next.
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  • From whiteraven9361 on November 03, 2009
    I love you story, can't wait to see what happens next. you are a good write and you show the dark side of the a human beautifully keep up good work
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  • From glasseyeviolet on October 27, 2009
    No!! Vegeta cannot die! not on my watch! XD Really awesome, and graphic might I add. I did not expect that. I cannot wait for the next chapter ^^
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  • From coconut81 on October 25, 2009
    aaaaaaargh cliffhanger! Amazing, can't wait for the next update!!!
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  • From ANON - dinamicus on October 25, 2009
    Cliffhanger!

    How I'm going to bear wait any longer?


    Another great chapter, btw.

    I must confess: I hesitated to read it. I feel that death surrounds Vegeta, and I'm not sure I can bear see it


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