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By : Robyn
  • From Katiefoolery on February 06, 2007
    That was an amazing chapter - steps taken forwards and backwards and more questions raised. I like the way you're showing subtle changes in character; it feels very natural rather than being forced. The very last scene may have been short, but I think I liked it best for the way their characters were suddenly reversed and the way Vegeta was almost feeling actual joy for a minute there.
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  • From DetoxAngel on February 06, 2007
    More! More, please, for the love of god write more!
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  • From ANON - TheMistressMystery on January 28, 2007
    I really really liked it! Pleeease continue! I want to see Veggie-chan chained up and not able to break himself free *smirks* Ooh, he'll get SO mad when he finds out!
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  • From Robyn on January 25, 2007
    Chloe,

    Your impatience has been duly noted. However, it will have no bearing on the outcome of this story.

    Macha

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  • From ANON - Chloe on January 25, 2007
    Um... No.
    This is not at all as exciting as I thought it would be.
    Spiral far surpassed this.
    Do you really think anyone gives a flying fuck about your weird little village in the jungle?
    What is it's purpose?
    Why am I supposed to care? Am I?
    Make this stupid jungle go away. Bring it back to where we all want it.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 23, 2007
    Wow. That was good. I like how you describe the scenery and the personalities. Keep it up.``
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 23, 2007
    Good chapter usual. I just love the way you write. I was glad to see Vegeta back to his fiesty ways. I'm interested to see if this situation will escalate. Whoever is threatening Vegeta and his family could be quite dangerous. I'm also excited to see the interactions between Goku and Vegeta when they finally plan to meet up and use Goku's...hmmm...new objects. I loved the fight between those two. Vegeta just would not stop. What an obsessed saiyajin! Haha. Well...good stuff. I love it!
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  • From ANON - ChibiHoshi on January 23, 2007
    oooOooooh, very nice, Macha! Definitely can't wait to see more!!
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  • From Katiefoolery on January 23, 2007
    This journey of Goku's is quite fascinating and I'm keen to see the end result of it. Vegeta seems completely unchanged by the whole situation, so I'm also intrigued to see if Goku will be able to affect a positive change there. I'm enjoying your writing very much and I particularly like the insights you offer into these characters.
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 10, 2007
    I made sure to read this as soon as I saw you updated. I was happy when I saw the third chapter was up! Well...very good as usual. I kinda liked this little side story, and I'm even more anxious to see where this goes now that Goku has the.....tools...to work with. I wonder if Goku is excited to use these or feeling a bit apprehensive. The fact that he will have Vegeta pretty much rendered helpless could be a bit rough on the kind hearted Goku and I can't wait to see where this goes. Will there be hurt feelings, will there be angst, or will both saiyajins be pleasantly brought closer? Ah...it's late, and I can just keep going on and on about the amazingness of your writing, but I should end it before this becomes paragraphs long. I am also excited to see what Goku will learn from this as Nabou said...and perhaps Vegeta will learn more about himself as well. Yes...Great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Irol on January 03, 2007
    wow this is a turn of events, i hadn't realized you had started this. nice, i like it.
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  • From ANON - Chibi Hoshi on December 29, 2006
    I simultaneously love you and hate you, Macha. LOVE that you have a new chapter up, LOVE how wonderful it is, how you described the scene between Goku and Vegeta, made us notice involuntary actions, movements, sounds, and his enthusiasm for Goku's release at the end. Hate the cliff hangers you leave, and that it's just never enough!! But over all, it was AWESOME! More, woman! *SPORK*

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  • From ANON - Noel on December 26, 2006
    Once again....Dude .... too good!!! I WANT MORE hahaha I'm a fic slut
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on December 26, 2006
    I loved it. This story always makes you want to read more and more. I'm excited to see how the next events will unfold. Really great writing, as usual. I just love all the...Vegeta angst! It makes me smile...and cringe...and I just can't wait to see what happens next. GREAT STUFF!
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  • From DietDirtyPop on December 21, 2006
    Ahh yet another wonderful story from the great Macha. I have finally com back to the world of Fanfictions. :) even updated Dominus De Cupiditas. Would you believe I was gone so long that I had forgotten much of the styles? I saw beautiful stalker was up. That's pretty awesome. But this is your story sorry...As always I give you mad props. Wonderful it is. Wonderful. Drop me an e-mail or im sometime.
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