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Reviews for Jaded

By : Robyn
  • From ANON - Jinx on November 14, 2011
    I am certainly not used to the extent of the violence, but I just had to find out more of what was going on. It's a very interesting plot and the story flowed brilliantly. You have always been one of my favorite DBZ writers and this compliment could never do you justice. I loved how this story turned out. Thank you so much for posting this story for us to read! I hope you continue to write here, so that I may read all of your works. Have a great day!
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  • From ANON - Toby Oaden on August 10, 2011
    I didn't want to read such a long story in one night, but you made me do it. :D This isn't exactly the type of story I read- not a fan of real world intrusions or extra characters- but it's also the kind of story for which I've been looking, and didn't quite realize it.
    Gokuu and Vegeta were my first slash couple and have remained my favourite for the 14 years I've been in love with Dragonball Z.
    Also, for the five hours it took me to read the whole thing, I listened to over half the playlist without even knowing it. Depeche Mode has been my go-to band for Gokuu/Vegeta stories for years!
    So, yeah. This was a wonderful read (despite the negative Chi Chi aspects, though I've come to accept that in this kind of story). I think the parts I liked even more than the sex were the interactions between Vegeta and Bra. There wasn't enough of that in the series. :C
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  • From ANON - Kayla on April 08, 2011
    Mann..I wanna talk about ch. 8 n 9 even though I'm starting 10...I think it's 8 n9 the train wreck ones...won't give away anything..but this is my favorite line “Baby, why do you make me do these things to you?” Oh my gosh! I held my hand over my heart at this line..ah..so sweeetttt! I loved these two chapters..loved loved loved them! I love this whole story..well I haven't read it all yet obvisously..but I know that it will end awesomely. You're an extremely talented writer..the intensity of the two stories..Spiral n Jaded..are ah-maze-zing! Just wonderful! I mean words cannot express how amazing these stories are..the way the words flow and describe each scene perfectly. Oh My! I'm totally speechless n jealous at how good you are. lol but your awesome..that's all I can think to call it is awesome..such a stupid word..but how do you describe something that makes you feel the amazing wonderful feelings I get from reading your stories? I mean really..damnn..lol Ok I'm done gushing..for now. :D
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  • From ANON - Kayla on April 07, 2011
    Oh my! I'm loving this story..I was so excited when I found the sequel to Spiral...I've only read some of it so far..but can't seem to tear myself away from it..it's amazing..You are amazing!..Wow..I really can't say any more right now...I'm like speechless at how good this is so far :D
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on March 08, 2009
    Amazing story!!! You even kept them both in character(don't ask me how).
    I'm going to go look at your other stories now, I hope they are just as good as this one has been!
    =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on July 18, 2007
    Even though this story is over I had to tell you how glad I was that you finished it. The story was wonderfully thought out and the resolution was beautiful. I wouldn't have minded seeing the boy's reactions, Bra's to their's and revenge for Chi Chi's underhanded trick, but there was not lack as it all ended. Thanks for the amazing story.
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  • From ANON - rdk on July 07, 2007
    My, isn't Bra the insightful. Interesting. I like the parallel.

    Oh and obviously I can rest easy now since it doesn't look like Goku lost everything.

    Thanks for a great read.
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  • From ultistarmon on June 22, 2007
    My favorite part is when Bra takes her tree out and plants it. Its just such wonderful imagery. Also, Vegeta answering telepathically at the end was great. It shows just how connected they are.
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  • From KnightSun on June 22, 2007
    Macha, it is now 1:10 am, i started reading this soon after you left, be thankful, cause i know i am. An amazing story! Feed your ego till she's fat and happy. And if you think i'm gona be reading anhythign else tonight, not even Your ego is big enough to keep me awake.
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  • From Katiefoolery on June 19, 2007
    Gah, I just wrote out a review and lost it in AFF's stupid moment of downtime. :( I'll just try and remember what I wrote...

    I'm sad that the story had to come to an end, but I think it's the right ending for the story. Things might not be completely resolved, but it's just enough to be satisfying. The final exchange between Goku and Vegeta was full of just the right amount of hope and those last two lines were perfect. And I loved the symbolism of the bonsai again - that was a nice touch. Thank-you so much for writing this story - it's been a compelling and addictive read all the way through.
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  • From cueball2 on June 19, 2007

    Awesome ending!!!!!!


    Things finally worked out well, except that Goku will have to repair his relationship to his youngest.


    Which will succeed in time. :)


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  • From ANON - Vegetachik7 on June 18, 2007
    It's...over? Sad eyes. Wow....so...truly amazing. Really, I am absolutely in love with the Spiral/Jaded series. Love it love it love it! I was not expecting that car crash with Bulma. It was like one of those car commercials where you're just not expecting to see a another vehicle slam into the side of another's car. Wow, shocking! And I love it that Vegeta was still worried for her. He is such a dynamic character and you always do a great job in portraying him as the honorable, prideful saiyajin he is. I like how this ended and I like the dialogue between Vegeta and Goku. They are a great couple. ^_^ Wonderful! Great chapter, great stories, great everything!
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  • From ultistarmon on June 18, 2007
    YAY, another chapter!! The End?? Will you do another story or is this it? I love the ending to this one. Its much happier than I expected it to be. Which is a good thing because I'm a happy ending fan. I enjoyed this story a lot, although I didn't think I would. I usually don't go for this kind of stuff, but you made tasteful enough that it didn't bug me too much.
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  • From LaRieaux on June 08, 2007
    Long time no hear from...how are you? I see you've posted many stories since the last we've talked. Send me an email when you get the chance. I'd love to hear from you.
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  • From ultistarmon on June 07, 2007
    HOLY SHIT!! I forgot just how much I liked this story until I read it again. I really hope there is an chapter update SOON. Like I said before, I can't wait to see the confrontation with the "Bulma found out" thing. Hope Goku gets to keep the stuff he made at the forge. Anyway, please put up another chapter soon.
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