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By : TrulyWished
  • From SarahTaylor on June 06, 2008
    I've only just started reading the manga as I found FMA when animecentral ran the whole anime at xmas. From this story I can tell it is very different from the anime and I am so looking forward to reading it.
    I really like this story and look forward to the next update, however long it may take. I like how you haven't rushed the relationship between Roy and Ed, it's nice to find a story that lets them take things slow (although I do love the RoyxEd smut too-what fangirl doesn't?!?!)
    I have no idea what the code is but that could have something to do with my headache, lack of sleep, the fact that it's 3:30am or a combination of the 3 XD
    Keep at it and I await the next brilliant installment.
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  • From Azumichan on February 29, 2008
    Chapter 2 review I think, it was short and to the point so no worries, nice solid chapter
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  • From Azumichan on February 29, 2008
    That . . . Ed, I love how mature you have made him out to be, of course I would expect Ed to that humble and such, and some parts are a little out of character but nothing extreme. The story is written well and original, thanks for submitting it.
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  • From EmbersEye on November 19, 2007
    Brilliant. I'm often a little lost as to what events are actually taking place because your description of action is sometimes unclear. However, I love this fic and your portrayal of Ed and Roy. Please continue.
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  • From on November 03, 2007
    I remember reading this a few months ago when it was only two chapter!! I'm glad you updated! XD I really love this story!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 30, 2007
    I just finished reading this and I really enjoyed it! I haven't read all the manga eaither! but have gotten up to where they go up North! I think you are doing a fine job with it! I really think you have a good plot idea and could expand on it if you wanted to! I also think you are doing a great job on building up Roy and Ed's relationship slowly.

    Keep it comming!

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  • From SadlerGirl on October 26, 2007
    AWWWWW
    I am so happy and I really really needed this today.
    I just love when you put stuff up.
    It's always a great read.
    so happy I am babbling , so I am going to stop now , but so cute!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Daniela on March 14, 2007
    I don't think i've posted a review for this story before but I just wanted to say that i like it, like the rest of your stories. I like the way Ed and Roy interact with eachother and just about everything else about it. i cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - kuragari on March 11, 2007
    awwwww.... I loved it!! keep up the excellent writing!!! can't wait to see an update!!! later!

    ps. I hate envy
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  • From nomdeplume on March 08, 2007
    I enjoyed this chapter. Very nicely done, and the fact that Ed is still having flashbacks, even at moments when he is thoroughly enjoying himself with Mustang.. And as far as the television thing, the series isn't exactly accurate in the way their technology works, or they wouldn't have high quality color photos that could manage to capture candid shots of like the ones of Elysia Hughes. So, I don't think it has to be exactly the same as our world. (Heck, I included an ultrasound machine in mine for that reason).
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  • From ANON - tallia on February 27, 2007
    give in Roy, give in...haha ^^ but wow! awesome story, haven't read one like that in quite awhile, please keep it going, please. :D
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  • From TruElle on February 17, 2007
    I like the way your developing the relationship between Roy and Ed. Their confusion about what they are starting to feel towards each other and their refusal to talk about it is brilliant. Also CainRiza is very original and working really well in the story. Please keep going, can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hikaru_9 (aka Hikaru!) on February 17, 2007
    That was a very cute chapter! The going through the candy and gifts was my favorite part, though i don't think they have TV yet in their world. I'm pretty sure it's still limited to black and white motion pictures. Cain and Riza is cute! He needs more love, i think they'd work great together! lol! Looking foward to more.
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  • From nomdeplume on February 14, 2007
    I like where this is going. The Riza/Cain pairing is a different one. I love that the two guys both remember they kissed, but won't say a thing to one another. I just wonder how, as things progress, Ed's going to deal with the memories, and if he's ever going to tell anyone.
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  • From squallstorm on February 12, 2007
    I LIKE IT!! XD haha anyway I'm intersted in where this is going so update soon

    kiki
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