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Reviews for For Her. For Him.

By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - raindrop150 on January 24, 2007
    YEY! there is nothing better than leaving for two weeks and having a bazillion chapters of this awesome story waiting for me to read and love them! Once again im totally in love with this story! and pregnant!ed is just so freaking awesome! i love everything so far, and im so proud of roy to have some straight out to the *remaining* rockbells and hohenheim deserved to be shell shocked from all the info.. **mutters..crazy bastard* cannot wait for new chapters! oh and have you thought about posting this on livejournal?
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  • From ANON - kuragari on January 24, 2007
    *fangirl shreik* well done! update soon please! love it! LOOOVVVEEE IITT!!
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  • From ANON - nette on January 23, 2007
    awwww this was a short chapter *pouts* but i still liked it. i wonder if roy has any more plans for our fullmetal *wink wink* but anyway. i want to know wat will happen when roy and hohenheim finally talk. and wat ever happened to envy and the gang. must have more story....good job though...i luv ur fics esp. the sesshy/miroku one. btw when u gonna update that...dont leave me hanging lol. ok i'll stop ranting now...peace
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  • From TrulyWished on January 23, 2007
    Eck, getting up all night sucks, even more when it's not you and they jostle you on the way by. And yay, Roy gets to do the parent talk thingy, even if he means to confront him on other things.
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  • From ANON - Asha Crone on January 23, 2007
    Fun story, though do you mind if I point out a few things?
    You have a bad habit of switching speakers mid-paragraph. You need to start a new one each and every time. It keeps the readers from being confused.
    There was what I would call OOC in this chapter- I don't think Ed OR Roy would ever call out to any kind of god or gods, in the middle of sex or otherwise. Both are athiests. In the anime, Pinako seemed more willing to defend Mustang but that could be because she didn't know who killed her son and daughter in law, and Winry was the one ambivalent about forgiveness.
    Al... well, I have no idea how Al would act. I think he would tend to be more accepting, but that's personal interpretation.
    That's all I could find. ^_^
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 22, 2007
    Damn, that was good, son!!! I was waiting for that moment! It was worth the wait. Ed and Roy are starting something special, that makes me happy after all the crap Ed has to go through. Can't wait till the babies are born! Anyway good job. Update soon.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 22, 2007
    okay, i read this last night, but i was too tired to review, but i loved this chapter. i would have thought ed, being nervous, would have reminded roy not to use the wrong hole, but it's a negligent detail that really doesn't need to be there. again, i thought you did very well describing ed's first time, and lord knows it's going to be better for him once the kids are born, ne? looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - animecrazd on January 22, 2007
    WOW
    That was so hot! I think that was the best preggy sex I've ever read.
    A forgiving not voilent Winry, understanding Pinako, What your intentions Al and a shocked Hol. was awesome.
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  • From ANON - nette on January 22, 2007
    all i have to say it about freakin' time we got a lemon. lol. nah but for real i luved the last couple of chapters, esp. when ed gave his father something to remember him by (what a hit!) can't wait to see what happens next. all i have to say is i luv this fic XD
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  • From Niia on January 22, 2007
    Wow! That was sooo good! I liked the first version of the former chapter but I have to admit this one is better somehow. Hehe, the boys finaly got to it! And Roy was so nice and good and loving to Ed! Awww. Damnit it I was a guy I'd let Roy be my first any night ;)
    It will be fun to see if Ed will have that 'I had sex for the first time' kind of glow.
    I really admire you, not understanding how you find the time! But you do and that makes me soo happy!

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  • From TrulyWished on January 22, 2007
    Bout halfway down, Roy crawls on Roy. *L* Otherwise, looks good, a sweet first time, lots of love.
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  • From ZaKai on January 21, 2007
    Well, this is a rather interesting story so far. I’m not really an mpreg fan, but I saw your story many times and finally the summary moved from the “Hm, sounds kinda interesting” place, to the “Maybe I’ll read that someday” place, to the “what the hell, I’ll check it out” place. I’ll admit I didn’t read it in one sitting (as I rarely really read other people’s work anymore), but I’m definitely glad I took the time to read it.

    I was sad about Riza’s death, as she’s one of my favorite female anime characters of all time, but I thought it was a great plot device. I’m glad you didn’t have Ed and Roy just all of a sudden start dancing in the sheets. I think it’s great when authors focus on character development. There’s such a difference between just throwing lemons in there and using them to enhance the story. I really think you’ve done that, so good job.

    Another thing I really like is the fact that it isn’t some separate story, but runs parallel to the happenings in the series; going as if this is what would happen if...

    On another note, I think that Maes and Riza were fine names for the child, I also think they work well as middle names. I think what you ended up with was fine too. *shrugs* I mean, you’re the author.

    Good job with keeping up with this story. I think it will be interesting to see how you continue this story and bring it to a close.

    - Z

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  • From milky on January 20, 2007
    Aw, I am SO glad they came out to Winry about this whole mess. Though I don't know, Winry's information dump at the end seemed a little sudden. I like Ed apologizing to Al about not rushing in head first after him too, that was lovely. And also, I'm probably crazy, but I think Ed is still hot even when pregnant XD;
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  • From cuylerjade on January 20, 2007
    This chapter seemed a bit rushed, but was very good nonetheless. Everyone seemed a little bit too understanding, IMO. (I would be all like O_O No Way!!!, but that's me.. hehe!!)

    ^__^ Luv it and can't wait for more!! :D
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  • From animecrazd on January 20, 2007
    Yes, Yes, YES! I've become to like night life. At the end of a hard day you save me with Preggy Ed, emo Roy, Protective little brother Al, and frogiving Wrinry and Pinko.
    Then you through in Ed kicking his dead beat fathers ass. yes all is good with the world. Now through in some lemons and we can all have some pie for dessert.
    This was a good week thank you.
    P.S.
    Fat suit Ed is just something I picture when I boss is ranting or when my teacher is boring Just to funny. Little Fat Ed kicking Greed's ass is just to funny to be sad sorry that is just horroriable because you were trying to have this serious moment and I just could stop laughing. It did hit later when Roy was being a comforty for Ed.

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