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By : nomdeplume
  • From TrulyWished on January 19, 2007
    Poor Roy, killing himself over something that was already forgiven. I totally forgot about Hohenheim, I always seem to miss him somehow. Sneaky.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 19, 2007
    so many things going on!! this was an awesome chapter. as for wrath... i have no idea what you can do with him either. unless you want him to die, like in the movie (and if you haven't seen the movie and i just spoiled it for you, i'm so sorry). or you could just have him realize that as a human, he'd be weaker than he is currently. anyway, again, nice chapter, i look forward to the next one!!
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  • From Niia on January 19, 2007
    OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! Three times my jaw fell down, 1. Al got to know about Ed and Roy, that was almost scary!
    2. Their father is back....not good, hope Ed doesn't miscarry because of it. And then when Roy told the Rockbell's he killed Winry's parents. *sniff* Honesty, I couldn't have come up with a better way! Winry was mad but forgave Roy....awww *sniff*
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  • From milky on January 18, 2007
    I love how resourceful Ed is. Seriously. Creating a "fat suit" to hide his obvious strange body type, sneaking out to kick some ass - that's definitely Ed. I was a bit worried when he didn't immediately rush off to save Al earlier, truth be told...but now that he has I am so very very happy. And hopefully Roy's learned a lesson too!

    ...never let Elrics have free reign XD

    Also, apropos of nothing, I hate AFFN's new log in policies.
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  • From squallstorm on January 18, 2007
    ok so chapter 26...you've lost me here I'm afraid...why does Ed have to kill alchemists? or do you mean Holmculi (sp?) I don't get it very well...??


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  • From KumikoChan on January 18, 2007
    i still am anxious to see how this turns out i check every night to see if its been updated
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  • From OpenDoor on January 18, 2007
    Hey, It's E.

    Love this chapter. -Sorry about the spelling in this, the room is spinning and I don't know why.-

    Enough of my health.

    I like the role you have given Wrath and the ending was sweet to this one. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From KeiraOvad on January 18, 2007
    Amazing work, i can't wait for the next chapter and for the babies to be born ^_^
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  • From Niia on January 18, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW! *sniff* *still mad at Ed for going out on his own and Roy or drinking* but they made up and finaly a cute 'I love you' *cheers* I like the way Wrath is, calling Izumi his mother like he should and helping Roy to save Ed. No...I love the way Wrath is, he is such a cutie
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  • From TrulyWished on January 18, 2007
    Poor Greed. Wrath is such a sneaky little guy. It's too early to think of anything intelligent to say other than excellent job.
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  • From oukokuhatsu on January 18, 2007
    OMG!! I AM SO IN LUV WITH THIS FIC!!! I EVEN GO BACK TO REREAD IT JUST SO! I CAN HONESTLY SAY I HAVE READ IT LIKE 5 TIMES! NO LIES! I LUV IT! WHEN I GO ON HERE UR THE FIRST I CHECK TO SEE IF IT WAS UPDATED!! I LUV IT! IT HAS EVERYTHING TO KEEP IT GOOD! KEEP IT UP! UR BIGGEST FICFAN!^^
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  • From animecrazd on January 18, 2007
    wow! I could kiss you with the way the brought them back togethere and you didn't make them stay seprated for 3or 4 chapters yes. I'm so happy I think I told you before how I love how you are keeping and yet not to the anime story line.I love your wrath and and just everything about this chapter was gggrrrrrreat! Ok I need sleep but I had to stay up to read this.
    Oh and you say your not good with the sex sceens but I love that they are not romance novel blah they are real and you put alot of what they are thinking or at least Ed and they may be a little undetailed but so hot and I can feel the love and that I think is the most important thing.
    Thanks again.
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  • From IsabelleMae42 on January 18, 2007
    awe the end of this chapter, yeah for fluff ^_^ I really like that you are still sort of following what happens in the show, but if you do will Ed still end up in Germany in the end like the show? Also because I am completely useless at remembering if you said it how many months pregnant is he supposed to be at this point?
    I really can't wait for your next update, I'll be checking ever day!
    Great work!

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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 18, 2007
    i am satisfied with how this was resolved. j/k i loved that they kinda made up. i also love how wrath is playing for both teams (in the non-sexual sort of way) i can't wait for the next chapter!! (i say that way too often...)
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  • From animecrazd on January 17, 2007
    You almost stopped my heart with Artcher showing up. You had some hot shit going on with Roy and Ed too so unfair.
    He is such a sleaze kissing Roy yuck! what present too only a sick fuck would do that. I want to see bad, bad things happen to that man.
    I loved your Roy/Ed makeout with Ed's resistance because he feels fat and I love Roy answer of Don't care it just seemed to fit like he wanted to comfort Ed but only could manage the basics a frazes to do so. I love how embarrised Ed got at the end. Poor Ed not only a teenage boy but unexperienced too. Well I'm sure Roy can help with that.
    Pregent Oral sex was just awesome and Ed taking the moment in hand and give as good as he gets was just love. It was so realistic how ed couldn't lay on his back I remember that very well from my own prepy days. I laughed out loud when Ed asked the doctor about sex. Oh I thanks I'm a little embarrised about how I though Ed was going to give birth. I think this is the first time I read where he grew a hole, but I think that makes just as much sense after all he grew a womb so why not.
    Then when Roy told him about the Rockbells and then Ed's reaction to what Roy said was just so moodsingy. I'm yeah I can see where he would be upset. I loved it and I'm worried is Ed going to leave after everthing else after forgiving him for killing the Rockbells. I hope Roy does something to stop him.
    can't wait for more.
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