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Reviews for For Her. For Him.

By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on January 14, 2007
    and, loved this one just like your inuyasha one. I like how the pregnancy has been explained, although I'm sure many people have said so already...yeah, awesome, one of the few believable male pregnancy stories around. nice! The date scene and their friends finding out was hysterical. I liked the 'shopping like guys' moment. the one thing i have a hard time envisioning is the pregnant belly with an aroused male...but I think that's just because it's so hard to visualize! ANyway, looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - E on January 14, 2007
    Awww!

    -Sniffles and pouts-

    So close! Yes... I'm still reading and I love this fan-fiction so much, you doing great at keeping it moving pretty fast, thats just what I like and I think part of the reason I'm still hooked. I find myself looking at this everyday BUT! I also ready this because you have kept everyone in amazing character, which is understandably hard.

    You have done very well.

    I love this chapter though, because.. Well... The mishap...

    I love it!
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  • From Kasarin on January 14, 2007
    Yay, Archer's gone. Jackass, asshole, freak. And would you look at that he has a band of freaks under him *rolls eyes* You're having fun with this, I can tell. What a way to make Roy and Ed's life complicated.

    I really liked how you took it slowly, taking into account that Ed is really sensitive *thumbs up* Update soon!
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  • From ANON - milky on January 14, 2007
    Oh I god, I adore you. First, for Havoc being so protective of Roy. All the guys being protective of him, really. For Roy throwing Archer out on his ass. And for them not going all the way yet, for Roy taking his time and for Ed being so sensitive and the two of them about to spend the night together. Much love for this.
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on January 14, 2007
    So sweet (Ed and Roy) Archer's still a prick.
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  • From ANON - Kumiko-chan on January 14, 2007
    ah man! i was so ready to kill archer! doing that to Roy, i mean really, gah!! good chapter! cant wait to find out what happens next! i will be patient and wait for the next chapter! (>*.*)> "yay!"
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on January 14, 2007
    what can i say? i loved that chapter! even with archer in it, it was awesome. i love how their relationship is progressing. keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - ChemicalGunLove on January 14, 2007
    sorry i've sorta of been lingering around your story just reading not reviewing, for that im sorry.

    I have couple things to say to you:

    First, You are an amazing writer. You draw me into the story so much. The way you discribe things...makes me feel like im their. You decribe emotions very well. This whole story is wonderful, i love it so much.
    I love where this story is going. You don't make them all happy and everything going perfect...there are twists and turns. I love it! It is a great plot. Everyday i sign on and look for an update. No lie. I always find one too. Thats another thing, you are so great with updates. I don't know how you do it but I always see you updating within almost the next day it seems. and as a fan of yours and reader i have to say thank you. Because i hate it when i have to wait a million years for an update.

    This story is cute, sweet, different, suspenseful and i never know whats gonna happen next. I love how you don't rush to fast into things. I have never really read a Roy/ed Male Preg before...after reading this i went off to find somemore and I can say that they were not as great as yours.

    I have tried writing M Preg and I have to say it isnt easy (from one writer to another) I mean, people may think it's just writing but theres so much you got to do. Believe me i know :]

    And your story is fantastic, it's perfect I love it. Don't listen to anyone telling you otherwise because their just jealous of your writing abilitys ^_^

    Well, I'm looking forward to the next update.

    Archer needs to go die....really. Make a chimera eat him. lol


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  • From ANON - kuragari75 on January 14, 2007
    YAY! GO ROY! about time Archer got thrown out on his ass! I hate him... woulda kicked the crap out of him for touching the cat... but nice catch Fuery!! oh! and I like the way things are going with Ed and Roy. SO SWEET! great fic!!! *anxiously awaiting next chapter*
    Kuragari
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 13, 2007
    Woah, the devil is knocking at the door. Didn't see that coming. Man i hope Ed can hide or SOMETHING. What is Archer's strange motivation here? Roy better seriously watch out. Anyway, it was a good chap. Fast too! Update soon.
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  • From Kasarin on January 13, 2007
    Archer, two words for you: Get. Lost. Please and thank you :P What a grand way to ruin a perfect night. I'm just wondering if Archer is trustable. I mean a present from him can never be a good thing. Can it?

    Okay, I'm done ranting. Onto the comments. XD I like how Havoc got the credit even though they all thanked Gracia silently. And Ed's gift was so cute x3 Really nice of him. You wouldn't happen to know when Roy's birthday is would you?

    Update soon. I wanna see what'll happen >
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on January 13, 2007
    Poor Ed, his face must have been on fire when had to ask the doctor about sex!
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  • From ANON - Kumiko-chan on January 13, 2007
    ah! great continuation! i cant wait to read the end of this! when do ED HAVE THE BABIES!?!?! they will be so cute and strong i bet. lol (>*.*)> *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on January 13, 2007
    was this the story where roy and archer had a past? can't remember (as i'm keeping tabs on one other fma story), but i can honestly say i did not see that coming. and wtf did archer bring that fucking moves? i don't even want to think about it, though i'm dying to know, really. and, oh god, please don't have archer finding out or even suspecting about ed. that would tear me apart!! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - milky on January 13, 2007
    Oh no the plot thickens! Archer is snooping around, and that can't bode well for Roy! I really can't wait to see what happens next.

    Also, I loved the part where Ed was getting a little too squirmy on top of Roy, very hot!
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