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Reviews for For Her. For Him.

By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on January 07, 2007
    the sceane you set is nice, as always, and i enjoy the fact that ed has to gripe and gripe about going on the date then *poof* he's there and hes great with it. do i smeel denial? mmm that can only mean one of two things: slow, intricate plot or suprise!sex :p

    keep up the awesome writing!
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  • From TrulyWished on January 07, 2007
    Aww, that's so sweet. Of course, maybe taking Ed to a place where Roy's so well known might not have been the best idea.
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  • From Kasarin on January 07, 2007
    Oh crap ­>< Who saw them? It sounded like he/she seemed to have noticed that Ed wasn't a girl! >< I hope I'm paranoid *looks around* Roy's gestures are cute, he can be such a gentleman when he wants to be. Though, if I were a guy, I'd pity Ed. I really would. But you can't help but chuckle a little at the way you write these things. I like how Ed whispered "Screw you" to him XD Ed can't help but be Ed. Awesome work as usual!
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on January 07, 2007
    Woot! the date begins! But who is the unseen observer...? Find out next time! On DRAGON BALL Z!!!

    Ahem, sorry... eheheh...

    Really like what you've done with the date so far. Poor Ed must feel so conflicted, on one hand, he's been fantasizing about Mustang, on the other... he's being treated like a GIRL!! Lol.

    Loved the bit about the girl's bathroom! Another detail that just adds to the story that most people wouldn't think about TO add.
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  • From ANON - milky on January 07, 2007
    Hmm, I do like the reactions from the people around them, considering Ed is very youthful AND knocked up - even if he's passing, there are indeed gonna be some stares XD Hopefully they make it home in one piece!
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  • From cuylerjade on January 07, 2007
    The end was so sweet! *wibbles* I love the way that they are slowly, so slowly, falling in love. ^__^ *glomps roy & ed* they needs more luvin! ^__^ Beautiful job so far! More! More! XD
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  • From Kasarin on January 06, 2007
    XD Ed agreed without knowing it! Nice one! Roy's lucky Ed didn't kick him or something. I can't wait to see how the date turns out.
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  • From Kasarin on January 06, 2007
    Oh my god the names fit perfectly. At least Ed has someone to talk to now other than Roy. Please don't make it so that the first lemon is ArcherRoy ;-; I might cry. Great work as usual.
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  • From Kasarin on January 06, 2007
    *twitches* Wow, you make Archer worth hating XD I loooooove reading this. Your writing style makes it so much better. *goes off to read the other chapters*
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  • From ANON - milky on January 06, 2007
    Yay! I am so glad you're addressing the question of Ed going stir-crazy. Him going in disguise is really the best plan, and allows Roy to accompany him easier. (Heh, Roy might take heat for having knocked a girlfriend up, but well.) Hopefully this will help him feel a little better.
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  • From ANON - milky on January 06, 2007
    Hmm, I like Ed having to react to the changes he's going through. Especially for somebody so used to being fit, it's going to piss him off to get larger. I'd imagine before long he's going to start having to keep a lower profile though, maybe not go into the office so much...he's not going to gain weight like a guy normally would, and people will think it's weird. Maybe 'extended medical leave'?
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  • From ANON - Asha Crone on January 05, 2007
    I honestly do like your story and I love mpreg. I just happen to think that a good review needs to include a mention on the technical aspects and plot points as well as "KEEP WRITING LOLZ".
    I do hope you continue, cause its a fun read. I have no real experience with pregnancy, but about how far along is Ed now? I forget when you can start feeling the baby and I have no idea if you can really feel them doing flips. *shrugs* I know my niece kicked in a particular place, but it felt like a light flutter.
    (Yeah, I nitpick, but I really do like the story)
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 05, 2007
    I liked these chapters alot! I also like that you update so fast, yay! The names are CUTE. I like it alot. And the way the relationship bewteen Ed and Roy is developing is almost beleivable. Good job. The next chaps are gonna be interesting im sure. Ed in drag lol. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Monica on January 05, 2007
    OMGosh! that was such a sweet chapter! lol poor Ed, well he should look on the bright side ^^... I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on January 05, 2007
    Wow, i don't check for like a day or two and you put up like 4 chapters. I'd have to say my fav out of this set would be the falshback chapter between Archer and Mustang. Flashbacks can be diffucult and tedious, but i thought yours was fantastic. Breaking up the present with the past was a smooth move, and well done. Neither setion of the scene was too long,m and it flowed ver well. I commend you, it was very enjoyable.

    I also like the names you chose, much better than the crap i could have come up with... but that's one of the reasons i gave up writting, no creativity. That and i suck...

    It's nice to see this story grow, i think it's really coming along now. Looking forward to more!
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