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By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - milky on January 04, 2007
    Oooh! I like there being, you know, BACKPLOT between Archer and Roy! It makes their hatred and rivalry even more interesting. And I like how Roy is really starting to be more helpful to Ed, and Ed is still trying to be out and about in the world despite issues like the hormones and the growing evidence. What happens when he can no longer hide how he looks? That's going to be difficult indeed.

    And yay to Al getting a kitten and to being the intelligent one here - Riza and Maes will bring up a lot of bad memories for some. Maybe those can be middle names?
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  • From ANON - Monica on January 04, 2007
    Yay!! another great chapter glad Al and Ed turned out all right ^^ can't wait for the next chapter! -gives you cookie-
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  • From ANON - Keba-kun on January 03, 2007
    Ooo...i love this! *droll* Ed...pregant...girly figures...XXDD I really do love this story! ~Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - milky on January 03, 2007
    Ah, intrigue! I like the idea of Ed attempting to get close to Wrath, attempting to temper his own anger...only to have Envy show up and mess everything up. And I like the idea of Ed in Archer's hands, and in need of medication! What will happen next! :O
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  • From ANON - Monica on January 03, 2007
    Wow... I L-O-V-E this story it's different, which is sooo bloody brilliant! Please update as soon as possible and I'll give you a cookie ^^ Ja!
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  • From ANON - Onyxlight on January 03, 2007
    Very good bluff to cover the hormones WAY TO GO ED!!!

    I am loving ths fic thurs far.
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  • From Kasarin on January 03, 2007
    Oh my god... That was amazing!! I'll admit that this is the first time I've read a MPreg story but wow... this was awesome.

    Your writing style makes it so fun to read to. You portray the characters greatly too. I'll admit the first hints of RoyRiza made me twitch, the fact that it fell into a RoyEd (eventually right?) really got me into this story. What can I say, I love my RoyEd.

    I have to say that Archer made me shiver. Great portrayal for him ­­>> He scared me before and I think you just doubled that fright XD This is a good thing of course.

    This story is really touching. I was almost in tears a few times as I read. Roy's reply to Izumi asking if he pampered all his subordinates like that made me laugh. This story is the perfect mix of everything.

    I can't wait till you update this. I'd really love to read more. Are there any possibilities that you e-mail me when you update?

    Once again, great work on a well-written story.
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on January 02, 2007
    The plot thickens! I like how you included that they searched Ed's bag and found the hormone medicine. It's hard to keep up with the little details when writing and you're doing a fine job of it!
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on January 02, 2007
    *sob* It was so short.....no!!! It also has a little cliff hanger... evil...

    Though seriously, my geuss is that Mustang was trying to to call up Gracia for some reaso or another and Elysia anwered the phone.

    The new chapter was a treat as always..but it was short.... *cries*

    As for names.. i dunno, i'm not good at that stuff *Hikaru! is not a writer and she knows it...* If you wanted them to be an homage to the deceased in Roy's life, you could have names that were similar and obviously taken from theirs. Liza and Michael were what popped into my mind.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - DeityOfDeath on January 02, 2007
    Please continue~!!!! I can't wait to see how Ed and Roy's relationship grows.
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  • From ANON - TwilightHUnter on January 02, 2007
    ::mutters:: It cut off my review. Do I ramble that much? >.>;;

    Anyways, as I was saying, 'My opinion. You go with whatever you feel is right.
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  • From ANON - TwilightHunter on January 02, 2007
    You and your cliffies. Though, honestly, I know it could be a whole lot worse. So I'm not complaining. ::Grins:: I'm thrilled you're getting chapters out so quickly, even if I don't always review. ::snugs::

    Since the children's names were brought up, I think I'll add my own opinion, if you don't mind. ^-^ I honestly wasn't surprised to see that those were the names you picked, and I understand the need to make Roy feel like shit (it's just so -fun- to do), but if it were me, I would change them later on. Possibly right after the children are born? ::Thinks:: The way I'm seeing it is, that whenever Ed and Roy call them by their names, they're both going to remember Riza and Maes. They could easily (and perhaps unconciously) compair the children to their late friends. What if Riza turns out to be this girly girl who loves flowers, hates guns and dogs, and is a meek girl? She is -always- going to be compaired to the first Riza. As will Maes. The children will sense the compairison, since we know they'll know about the first Riza and Maes, and it could be painful for them, and everyone involved. Or perhaps I'm thinking far too hard on it. xD

    No, I don't know -what- to name them, but perhaps something -based- off of the names Riza and Maes might be better than calling them that. They're their own person, and yadda yadda. My opinion.
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  • From ANON - Asha Crone on January 02, 2007
    I have really enjoyed this story, please continue.
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  • From ANON - raindrop150 on January 02, 2007
    i kno theres a resonable explaination for roy saying.. cutie... but i still just wanna yell "BASTARD!!"...
    anyways.. YEY for updates! cant wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on January 02, 2007
    Stop it! You're making me look bad! (Or worse than usual) *L* I'm kidding, it's a great chapter. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it, nothing that jumps out at me. If you're looking for names, there are some really good name dictionaries that are really useful for meanings and such. keep it up!
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