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Reviews for For Her. For Him.

By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 01, 2007
    I'm diggin this story alot and i'm glad you wrote several chapters so quickly. About the babies' names though, whoever it was, saying that naming them Maes and Riza was lame was in turn, retarded. I mean, pls, it's logical the guy would want to name them after the two ppl he cherished. Doesn't matter if it's corny or not. It makes SENSE. Anyway, you do what you do. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - milky on December 31, 2006
    Ahahaha, poor Ed - caught between a noisy couple and a hard place, as it were. And I am really really curious to see what's going to happen with Wrath!! And LOVE for the recognition that Al wasn't really mad at Ed, and that Ed knew that. The two are far closer than that - Al was just away taking care of business. Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Asha Crone on December 31, 2006
    ^_^ Your writing is improving. I was going to say something about your dialogue but you fixed it yourself and I wanna hug you for it.
    This is a very interesting story, I've enjoyed it a lot. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on December 31, 2006
    This is really good. You chose a very creative way to do an mpreg, plus the rest of the plot is interesting. Ed's mood swings are funny and touching at the same time. I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Onee-sama on December 30, 2006
    I think naming the twins Maes and Riza is perfectly fine; but if you feel the need to change the names, go right ahead! This is, after all, YOUR story, not the readers'. We are merely bystanders.

    Good chapter! I feel like we're seeing a little more into Ed's mind right now, which is cool. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on December 30, 2006
    ...er... i didn't mean to insult you.. I'm sorry! I try to offer concrit at times but..um.. i have no tact. Please don't be angry. That's why i typically lurk and don't leave reviews, cuz stuff i say could be taken the wrong way when i really don't mean it to be mean.

    I really do like the story, and i'm amazed that you update so quickly. I especially liked the scene on the train, living in an apartment, i can sympathize with Ed... like when the people next door are having 'giggle sex' in the bathtub... ugh, it's so unzesty...

    The little line about the guy not lasting very long and that probably being why the girl was so quiet was AWESOME! I laughed. I was thinking that, and then you said it, and it just made the whole scene perfect.

    So um... please don't be mad at me, i didn't mean anything by it!!! *bows in supplication*
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on December 30, 2006
    ooo teh mystery! teh angst! teh ... seperation? oh noes boys! stay safe, and make it back to each other soooooon :P
    *big fic love*
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on December 30, 2006
    Yay, new chapter! As far as names go, they're your babies, you can call them anything you want to. Though I personally prefer coming up with new names, but it is up to you. I like Riza and Maes too.
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  • From ANON - kikiko on December 30, 2006
    Love! Love! how fast your updating...are you a machine?!! You must have this already writen!! I don't care I love it XD

    watch out for your use of " " at the begining and ending of a convertation bit, and sometimes if you break it up...you forget to singal the return to talking by adding the quotes.

    kiki
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on December 29, 2006
    ooo! The plot thickens! Dun dun duh!!! I like how you're incorperating events from the show like the discovery of Wrath. Very nice! These means we get to see more of Izumi!! Yayness.

    I did think the whole naming the kids after Hughes and Hawkeye was a little lame and overdone, but i suppose it was necessary to make Mustang feel like crap for treating Ed 'like a vessel.'

    But overall, still enjoying the story! I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - milky on December 29, 2006
    Oooh, I like how this is tying into canon now! Hopefully Ed can survive meeting Wrath...
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  • From ANON - milky on December 29, 2006
    I like the picture of ed being angry with his hormones making him cry - especially receiving estrogen shots, he'd be especially sensitive to ups and downs.
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  • From ANON - milky on December 29, 2006
    Ooooh, I like Roy being forced to pay attention to this problem. And him worrying about boundaries etc, as opposed to the cheap-porn-plot you usually get when someone is forced to bathe someone else. Roy legitimately had Ed's best interests here.
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  • From ANON - Kumiko on December 29, 2006
    why? why make roy go away? T.T i am so sad! make sure he comes back to Ed! *sniffle* otherwise, i still love this story!! keeps me wanting to read and find out whats gonna happen!
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  • From ANON - Onee-sama on December 29, 2006
    Sheesh, now you've got me being all emotional...but it's okay! It'll be interesting to see how they deal with Ed's *ahem* "growths" in the near future. Update soon, please!
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