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By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - nette on February 11, 2007
    luvd it likd it want more of it. i was just wonderng since ur following the storyline a lil bit will u have it end the same...u know...the tear-jerker for many f.m.a. fans to this day...if so pleas dont :(. if not yay XD. i think im going too far into the story now but i just need to know that for sanity's sake. poor guys esp. al becomin the philospher's stone. and now that deal they made things can only get better...i hope...
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on February 11, 2007
    The addition of Lust and co was a pleasant twist. I rather like Lust, both her manga and anime incarnation, so i was pleased at how te last scene went down. I was a bit confused as to the actions and 'area' layout after you starting adding the Trucks and such. I didn't know who was where, why they were driving what should be short distances and the like... though it's about 4 in the morning my time, so that could be a factor.... *needs more sleep*

    I'm glad you clarified about the alchemic reaction from the kiddos too. When they first lashed out at Scar, my thought was, "no way." Alchemy is a science, and you have to study the laws and such to make it work properly. Some people may be more talented in the understanding and application of it than others, but they still have to learn how to do alchemy first. You saying that Ed actually used their potential for alchemy, rather than the kids doing alchemy fixed that descrepancy... at least for me!

    I do hope you decide to do a sequel, it'd be interesting to see what kind of personalities you give the kids. I have a feeling that your girl is gonna be a little spitfire! lol
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  • From Niia on February 11, 2007
    Congratulations! Over 9.000 hits! God to hear about the Sloth scene, I thought I was going crazy. And poor Archer! Oh, better not cry infront of you, I have a bad influence on you! Anyway, love the difference from the canon, with Lust, Wrath and Gluttony joining them. But...did Marta die? I mean I know Scar did (so very sad about that), and daah!, Al had to survive, but what about Marta?
    And I'm soo excited to see who are these alchemists Raine was talking about! And yay Havoc for taking charge! He might make a great Colonel himself one day (and maybe meet his own Ed and we will have a new generation of Colonel/Major love).
    Waiting patiently for the next chapter!

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  • From anapana83 on February 11, 2007
    Yo!! I like this chap, and the last few as well. You have really put forth an interesting plot here. Very good. I can't wait to see what happens. And now Lust, Wrath, and Glottony are allied with them. I always liked them better than the others you know. Lol i got a litte laugh outta Wrath being curious about Ed's stomach. Who wouldn't be?? Well, good job once again. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - MercifulDeath on February 11, 2007
    Wow, I really like this! Mustang's sister kicks ass xD
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  • From ANON - Kumiko on February 10, 2007
    OMG! are they going to be okay! i was practically crying by the end. silly me but i am worried about them! T.T please will they be okay?
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  • From milky on February 09, 2007
    ;;_;; OMG CLIFFHANGER!!!! I AM ENTRHALLED!
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  • From Niia on February 09, 2007
    Is it just me or did you really make the Ed-kills-Sloth part longer? Me confused...I just had to read that chapter again, it was soo good. Maybe my mind was playing tricks on me. Anaway again, luv this one!!
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  • From ANON - nette on February 08, 2007
    dat was hot cant wait to read more and yes it was to my liking. about time archer got wat was coming to him. i knew it would be coming soon and i luved it (am i bad for that :( )ed it crazy exposing himself like that lol. i hope scar helps al i dont want him to go bye bye either. update soon and i will be back to read soon k XD.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 08, 2007
    du-ude... no. that was... no. but... such an awesome chapter!! especially the end, but no! they got caught in the red light! but i know they don't die. so who saves them... or maybe, what? anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 08, 2007
    Tense doesn't even begin to describe how things are! WOW! Nerve-racking white knuckled panic attack is more like it!! LOL!! Just reading your story has made me remember why I fell in love with Fullmetal Alchemist to begin with. It's the drama baby! (baby. jeez. I sound like Raine now! :D) Speaking of Raine, I never got the impression that Roy was all that pushy and demanding. Determined as hell to get what he wants (the position of fuhrer for example) but not demanding. If he was, I don't think his troops would be as loyal to or trusting of him as they are. But, that's just my two cents! :) There has to be more people than just me picking up on the Havoc/Gracia thing. It's kinda obvious. ;) I just love how well you've blended the canon with your fiction. It all flows so seamlessly. I've been trying to remember who killed which homunculus. I know Ed destroyed Greed and Sloth. Wrath, Envy, and Gluttony aren't killed in the anime and Pride is taken out by Roy right? I can't remember who got rid of Lust. Was it Scar? Damn! I hate it when I can't remember stuff!! I'll probably remember who after I submit this review! :D Anyway, the end of the chapter with the red light engulfing our heroes was one hell of a cliffhanger! Even tho we all know it's not the end of them I still hate cliffhangers!! grr! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on February 08, 2007
    I almost hate you for leaving it there. Damn cliffhangers and deceptive endings.
    But, for the rest of it, I offer myself as your personal uke-whore. I'll just bounce in my seat in wait for whatever you have next.
    Much love (for a price). *chu*
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  • From TrulyWished on February 08, 2007
    My reviews are so short! Meh. I like how you intergrated canon into the story, managed to get everyone in there. I'm sorry it's ending, but I am loking forward to it too. I'm such a curious thing.
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  • From Niia on February 08, 2007
    I am so honoured. And the blame is all mine ;) but everybody loves your fic so no worry hun!
    Great chapter, you summarized the important parts but I would have wanted Ed killng Sloth to be a little longer :'( I love that scene in the anime. But the chapter in whole was good. I have to say, at one point, I couldn't hate Archer anymore. I just couldn't. I mean, he is going towards his death (not knowing, not caring) and when Roy warned him I felt some jealousy and hurt comming from the other Colonel. No I am waiting to see if you mkae him the ultimate bad-guy or the kind we will feel sorry for. Cause I really am feeling sorry for him :/

    That was a fast update. No hurry....I never want this fic to end!
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  • From Niia on February 08, 2007
    Oh no Ed! It's not Lyra, it's Dante! And she wants little Aideen!...*understands they can't hear me* *sighs*
    Wonderful chapter, I nearly fell from my chair, and my jaw dropped, when Lyra appeared. Good thing Ed has two women watching over him. Again, I love the way Wrath is in this fic, helping the good-guys.

    I am soo touched to hear I can be thanked that we fans get to read more of your work in the future. There goes my ego again... :)
    When I read Memoirs of a Geisha, a critic wrote that it was the kind of book that shouldn't have had an ending. I think your fic is that good, that I don't want it to end and each week read a few new chapters. I have to go buy tissues for the day there wil be a 'The End' on the bottom of a chapter. How I dread that day....but I am soooo happy to hear there mih be a sequel! Yay! Luv ya hun!
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