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Reviews for For Her. For Him.

By : nomdeplume

From ANON - kuragari75 on February 08, 2007
WOOT! nice! I'm biting my nails waiting for the next chapter. Have mercy and update before I eat my hands! ^-^
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From ANON - Asha Crone on February 07, 2007
Right now I am quite curious as to how you will finish the Scar arc (and I admit he is one of my favorite tragic villains ever) and everything. ^_^
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on February 07, 2007
I don't think I've reviewed before but I really love this story. It's the only reason I check the FMA section every day, sometimes several times. And I haven't anything that I hate about this story, not even the original character. And I REALLY hate original characters but they're almost always Mary Sue's. But anyways, I wanted to ask, is Dante looking at Ed's daughter as a possible host? I noticed her special interest. And the daughter being Ed's and Roy's, coming down from Hohenheim, seems like she (and the boy of course) could be something special. If that's what she's thinking then that's something they'd have to worry about unless they get rid of her. I don't envy them at all, though hopefully things will be getting better for them once Dante and the homunculi are gone and the babies are born.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 07, 2007
OMG!!! Where to begin? Oh! So much is going on!! so exciting!! Ooh! Roy's proposal had me in tears - tears of joy that Roy actually proposed and tears of laughter at the banter between Roy and Ed! "You really want to marry me one day?" "No, I won these in a box of candy, and I thought they�d make a nice gift." *dies laughing* Love it!! :D Roy wasn't the only one who felt sick to their stomach when everyone was ordered to Lior. Oh Jesus! The thought of Ed in that terrible place in his condition scares me senseless! *shivers* I'm kinda glad that Raine is with Ed in Lior. At least he has a medical professional there in case he needs one. That magical (alchemic?) defensive flare that Ed did was awesome! I think the babies were defending their daddy (and themselves!) from Scar. If so, it's like someone (I forget who. Hohenheim maybe.) said, they are going to be truly awesome alchemists. :) Oh! Lyra seems to be taking a very scary interest in little Aideen! No! Ah! You're scaring the daylights out of me! I've been as nervous as a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs over these babies since the beginning. I couldn't bear it if anything happens them! *cries* Ed? A martyr for the state?!? Oh say it's not so! *hides under desk* :P This is getting SO good! I can't wait to read more! *bounces in chair with excitement* Oh, random thought, is Havoc trying to hook up with Gracia? It certainly seems like he's got a thing for her! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Please tell me that these accursed homunculi will be destroyed soon. They all scare the living daylights out of me! @_@
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 07, 2007
Actually, queen in French is spelled reine not raine. But, whatever, no biggie. It's your story so call her whatever you want! :) The petname of baby is a little condescending/annoying. That could really old really quick. She doesn't even really know Ed and yet she's feeling on his stomach, calling him baby, and all but steamrolling her way into his life. Since she's Roy's sister Ed has no choice but to put up with her. *sigh* I'm glad it's him and not me. pushy relatives. ugh. Don'cha just hate 'em? But, enough of me ranting about my own personal hells, I can't wait for the babies to arrive!! :D yay! Not much longer now! happiness!! One thing I must compliment you on is how realistic you've made this out to be. Ed only strays into OOC-ness when he's being hormonal but that's to be expected. It's all completely believeable and I'm loving every minute of it!! :D
Koneko =^.^=
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From TrulyWished on February 07, 2007
Yay, a new chapter! You must write constantly to keep up. I actually forgot Wrath was on tehir side for a second *L* I feel a bit bad for Scar, he's gotta be confused about babies.
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From ANON - nette on February 07, 2007
whooo! showodwn in lior and icant wait to read it. damn those homunculi and their scheming ways...ed you need to get outta there buddy and soon. al kick kimblee's ass for me. XD update soon. and great job
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From ANON - nette on February 06, 2007
again luv this story luvd this chapter so update soon.
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From BishounenKrazed on February 06, 2007
omg, this just keeps getting better and better. though i may hate frank with the burning intensity of a thousand suns (the only character i hate more is orochimaru), i really like this story!! i look forward to your next update!!
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From Niia on February 06, 2007
That Archer....evil evil man. Nice way you told their history and first time, I was kinda wondering how the hell they ended up in bed together in the first place. Aww Ed, a little jealous is he now. Well, that is understandable. I'd be too if I had a fianc�e as hot as the Colonel. Still can't believe they are engaged! Wooohooo! Oh, I'm afreid of what would happen if Archer found out 'she is a 'he' and the 'he' is Ed! I felt a hint of jealousy comming from Archer as well.
And yay for Havoc for quitting smoking!
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From milky on February 06, 2007
Man, Archer is such an ass! I do like that their hatred of each other is out in the open though. Poor Ed though, I really feel for him. Am wondering how this whole thing is going to mesh with the remaining plot of the series...kind of worried about that...
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 05, 2007
Ah! Now these names for the babies I like! I should thank Al for suggesting that Maes and Riza be middle names instead of firsts! Smart boy! :D I'd have loved it if, when Archer threatened to backhand Ed, Roy had set him ablaze! *evil grin* Sure there would be all kinds of repercussions for Roy but at least I'd have gotten my jollies! *evil laughter*
Koneko =^.^=
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 05, 2007
Archer. yech. The sooner he's gone the better! I gotta hand it to ya tho that a Mustang/Archer pairing is one that I have never seen anywhere else. Your creativity (and ability to really gross me out!) knows no bounds! LOL! Al's little stray calico was a nice touch! so cute! I'm saying this as my own calico is giving me little annoyed looks that seem to say, "How about leaving that keyboard alone and feed me?" Cats, gotta love 'em! :D (Could this review have been more random? It's been one of those days.)
Koneko =^.^=
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 05, 2007
Ok. Wrath scares the living daylights out of me. He always has, he always will. Only Envy disturbes me more than Wrath does. I don't know what it is but I just never liked him. I know you said in here somewhere that you liked Wrath and I hope you mean the Wrath you've written and not the canon one. (This is one of the problems of going back into a story after you've read pretty far into and trying to leave reviews. Bits and parts of chapters mix and meld and I can never remember where or when I read something. *sigh* You'd think I'd learn to leave reviews when I'm supposed to to prevent this sort of thing. Oh well.) Speaking of canon, how do you intend for this to end? (Jeez that's kinda harsh!) I mean, we all know that the canon ended pretty tragically with Ed on the other side of the gate. Just how more much of the canon will come into play before this AU (for lack of a better term) of yours takes over and goes on to tell the tale? Please don't think I'm complaining! I'm really not. I so want there to be a happy ending for Roy and Ed. I'm just afraid that it won't happen if too much more of the canon is utilized. I know you can't ignore the events in the anime because you want to maintain a sense of reality and timeline but, *sigh*, I can't explain this well enough. Do you even get a sense of where I'm trying to go with this? probably not. I guess in my own incoherent way I'm hoping that you will try to avoid all the tragedy that was the end of the anime. *rueful smile* Is it really too much to all but demand a happy ending for our (OK, my) favorite yaoi couple? :)
Koneko =^.^=
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 04, 2007
I knew I liked Roy for some reason! He can be so sweet - when he wants to be! :) I go back and forth between just loving him to pieces and wanting to beat the hell out of him. Why is there rarely (if ever) any middle ground with him? ;) I've been wondering all along how Ed was going to have the babies. I guess a possibility just presented itself! :) I know Ed wants a cesarean but he'll be S.O.L. if the babies come early and/or he's not near Dr Knox when they do come. Can he really have them naturally? It makes me kinda anxious just thinking about it! Will Ed keep his new parts after the babies are born? The uterus and vagina were alchemically created and enhanced and made to stay with hormones and Ed doesn't have anything to trade to get rid of them and get his appendix and pancreas back. I'm guessing he won't get them back and the other parts will just reabsorb. I'm hoping for his sake that once the female hormones stop his natural male ones take over and he'll go back to being himself. (I ask a lot of questions don't I? pesky me! :D) This may be a dumb thing to say but it took me until about this point in the story (maybe it was last chapter, can't remember) to fully understand what "For Her. For Him." actually meant. Ed is doing all this for Riza (her) and Roy (him)! Gah! I am such a dork! *sigh* Koneko no baka!! :)
More reviews later after I get some sleep. *yawn* L8r!
Koneko =^.^=
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