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Reviews for Heavy Bond

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Guice on March 28, 2007
    GOD!!!! THE CAVITIES!!!!! No I'm joking, it was a great chpater. Of course I will have to tell you my favorite part. It had to be when Bardock and Kak..... Goku were in the shop and vegeta is oblivious to Goku's fear of Hospitals. idk... i did the chibi character replacement thing. God, I don't know how to talk right now. Gah..... psh, delicate flower... I did laugh at that a bit. when I read that I invisioned you beating the crap out of your computer teacher... hehehehe, that made it even better. OH WELL, it was a great chapter and I hope life is going great for ya.

    Guice
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 28, 2007
    I'm up to your latest chapter. The character development fuels my interest more. I wonder if Vegeta will go to Hetela too. Keep it coming. :)
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  • From kitkit on March 27, 2007
    wow i love this chapter, it was so funny with the doctor's thinking kakarott was insane
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  • From ANON - Trista ML on March 27, 2007
    Oh My GOSH!!!! So I didn't see that coming!!!! DUH, where else to go whenyou're trying to get away from your mate but home? No where! Ahhh, i love it, I can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Irol on March 27, 2007
    man kakarot just can't make up his mind can he? sometimes i think barock is just douce but sometimes he's ok, anywho...can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Guice on March 22, 2007
    Heh, great chapter. Half way threw when they were making out in the cave I was like "tht liar!" and I was going o write an emial to you saying what a tease you were but NOOOOO! Have to be miss truthful and havve no desire to write about cave sex. I suppose the kitchen banter was my favorite part of the chapter all the Jaron stuff. Did you get his name from your screen name? the reason I ask is that they're are almost the same savve a few letters, but oh well. HAVE A GREAT DAY!!!!... or night!!!! watever the hell time it is in your location!!!!

    guice
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  • From suzie on March 22, 2007
    what more are you going to put the poor man through.
    I love the story though. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on March 20, 2007
    Hi again
    Yes, but I hate it when mom was right, right?
    I like the new turn of events in the last chapter, Kakarott allways jump out of the frying pan and into the fire. Thatīs so funny. Ok, Kakarott is not so lucky at the moment but he will make it, otherwise it would be the end of the story, ne? And I like to see how Vegeta helps Kakarott through it.
    So I wait for the next chappi.
    kuroineko
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  • From ANON - Irol on March 19, 2007
    oh yay, kakarot finally believes vegeta. man that was some drama, im glad kakarot is still standing up for himself though, he shouldn't let vegeta run over him.
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  • From kitkit on March 18, 2007
    wow i love this chapter
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on March 15, 2007
    Great chapie!!!!!!!!
    Kakarott on the run! NICE!!!!
    Vegeta will have a hard time to convince Kakarott that he īs not his enemy.
    Somehow I find the agedifference between Bardock and Velari a bit disturbing, it reminds me of Anna Nicole Smith, eeeerkkk.
    Of course it wouldnīt look like it with Sayans, they donīt age as humans.
    But I allways think that if nothing unnatural happens the older one of such a couple will die first and the younger on will remain suffering for a long time. Of course there can allways be an accident and such, but the chances for an equel aged couple are far better.
    But like my mother used to say 'love donīt choose wisely'.
    I canīt await the next chapie.

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  • From ANON - Serebii on March 13, 2007
    I want a dathi. And yay, finally some Veggy/Kaka cuddle time I hope soon?
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  • From kitkit on March 12, 2007
    wow i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Guice on March 11, 2007
    Hahaha, Yeah I guess I do turn everything into a comedy. Things seem better when you get to smile at it. Anyways on with the review.

    It was great! Heh, I did get to laugh at drunken Velari a bit. I suppose that was my afvorite part. All of the gaurds coming in to see a dishevled Velari and a distraught and angry Bardock. Then Bardock laid down the law and told Velari to get sober. Hehehe, defeated characters are always the best.

    Then Goku goes beserkish and flees. So do we get to see some cave sex? Cuz everyone loves some great cave sex, especially after your all bloody and tried for the best part of an hour to do something with a horn... or mebe thats just me.

    Great job witht he chapter.

    Guice
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  • From ANON - Irol on March 11, 2007
    i knew he'd wake up soon! anyway, this was good though it seemed short. i can't believe that kakarot still thinks vegeta wants to kill him. but i guess since he HAS been catatonic the last few days....oh well.
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