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Reviews for Heavy Bond

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 10, 2007

    Chapter 11


    I like how you show this side of Velari. He really got himself into another mess.


    Kakarott on the other hand... I wonder how he will react to Vegeta this time around. I have a guess, but I look forward to the next chapter. :)


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  • From ANON - Starlight_dragon on March 10, 2007
    I love this fic more and more. Its just so well written. You also update at fairly good pace, which is such a good thing.
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  • From kitkit on March 07, 2007
    god i love the dathi she makes this chapter so funny by bringing the rabbit to kakarott
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  • From ANON - Guice on March 06, 2007
    That was amazing. I love the Jouda, he's now my favorite. The Bardock/Velari interaction was really cute. Yet again the chibi figures come to mind and I see them on a bench. Velari being 1/5 his normal size and beat red and Bardock just babbling on. Hehehe, good times.

    I was wondering if you got my email, I sent it a couple of days ago, if not no prob.

    Guice
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  • From ANON - Trista ML on March 06, 2007
    Ahh! I'm loving it even more now.

    I don't know why or what happened but everytime i tried to leave a review on the last one it wouldn't let me so here's what i remember: Something about the chapter not being boring- i thought it was necessary and i loved it-- for this chapter, oh of course i loved it, it's odd, Kakarot, who is very respondent, not responding and instead Vegeta having to be the talkative one. He's very resourceul and intelligent too, and so caring- well.... it is his mate, huh, it slides.. i enjoyed it. I'm glad to finally know exactly hw the bardock/ Velari thing began, now i shall be patient once more to see how Kakarot is when he comes back from catatonicy and if Velari accepts Bardocks offer, which would just be... stupendous

    Awesome, awesome, awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Irol on March 06, 2007
    i love the dathi, i think if they were real i'd want one! poor kakarot is getting fed fresh rabbits. its so great, poor vegeta should love the animal more, she's pretty freakin wonderful. and its good that kakrot is showing more alertness, maybe he'll wake up soon.
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on March 05, 2007
    Hi,
    I like the new chappi, and the dathi.
    I love cats, but you only said she is a huge catlike creature. I canīt make a real picture of her, so I want to know how big she is? The size of a leopard or a tiger, and what is her coulor, had she stripes or points?
    The very attentive Vegeta is sooooooo cute! Maybe he must start to purr too to get a response from Kakarott, ne? ^.^

    kuroineko
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  • From Kurochan on March 03, 2007
    I've been reading all your stories for a while now and I can't wait to read the rest of this!
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  • From ANON - Guice on February 28, 2007
    I WANT A JOUDA!!!! That thing sounds so freaking awesome, all devious like. Oh yeah the review... well, to be honest. It was kinda boring, I mean we got information and backround stories (Poor Bardock) but i really didn't find anything great that stood out... except the cat thing... that thing rules.

    Another thing is the he/she thing. I know you previously discussed this with another reader, but its important. I understand why you want to repeatedly use their names but it makes things harder to understand. Like Bardock's late mate, I didn't know that he was male until the end of Bardock's tale... thouh the word misuu probly takes care of that cuz I don't know if it's a real word or not, but please take it into consideration. It will make the story much better, thus making it perfect.

    I hope I'm not being mean, but hey, opinions. What can you do.

    Yeah the family stuff... good times. Fighting over the remote was a big thing, cartoons or MTV (music television). Oh I have one brother and two sisters... but I consider one sister as a brother... she's a bit butch XD. Well I hope life is going great for you. I have something that I need to send to you, you'll laugh your ass off.

    Guice
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  • From kitkit on February 28, 2007
    wow another chapter and a look into bardock life
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on February 28, 2007

    Chapter 9


    I liked this chapter immensely. We get more of a look into the feelings of both Bardock and Vegeta. The elder prince must now realize, to some degree, the responsibly he must take with Kakarott. I like the hint you give the reader about whom holds Bardock's affections.


    I await the next chapter. :-)


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  • From ANON - Serebii on February 28, 2007
    Aww, I enjoyed the Vegeta/Bardock bonding time ^^. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy. And that dathi sounds like a cool pet to have. Anyway, nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - Irol on February 28, 2007
    i like this cat thing...she seems pretty great! haha, poor bardock is getting over his hostility towards vegeta i think...great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on February 24, 2007
    Hello again.
    Vegeta coddling Kakarott thatīs great!!!
    And about the love triangle, I think it is not the same when it is with a brother.
    I heared there are people somewhere in the Fare East, the people there are very poor and there are more men then women and if a man wants to marry he has to pay a high brideprice, so the man put his money together with his brothers or brother, therefore the women marry not only this man but 'unofficialy' the brother as well. And if there will be children it is not importend who is the real father is. For them it is normal that a women is married to one man but lived togethere with two or more.
    Somehow I like the thought.
    And genetical there are not so much difference between brothers, so I think it is not as bad as it would be with some stranger. At least is would stay in the family. ^_^

    kuroineko
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  • From ANON - Serebii on February 23, 2007
    Yay new chapter! I'm so glad Vegeta is finally coming to his senses. About Velari, personally I love the character and I'm very happy with how you've included him so far. I hope you keep up the little triangle between them for as long as you can, it makes things much more interesting ^^.
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