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By : Salza
  • From ANON - Gabs on December 20, 2007
    Preciousssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
    Please continue it!
    Dead to Chi-chi (Milk or whathever)!!!!!!!
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  • From Robyn on December 15, 2007
    YAY!!! An update!! And I am certainly glad you ensured us this wasn't the end, because if it had been, I'd be sobbing.

    Even from Piccolo's POV this was still weighty and angsty. :(

    *SQUISH* I hope to see more real soon!!!!
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  • From MaterTenebrarum on December 15, 2007
    please update another chapter since I felt this one was too short;take your time because I know writing is tough.
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  • From CrimsonTide on December 14, 2007
    Man, I'm glad you told us this chapter wasn't the end, because I would have pitched a FIT!! You wrote Piccolo's character so well in this chapter. Well, you do in every chapter, but his emotions were so dead on here. And the way you had Goku realize a little later on that things would be changing; that was great!

    I look forward to the next chapter and the newest developments. It'll be interesting to see how these two manage to continue (hopefully) their relationship now.
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  • From ANON - Gabs on December 06, 2007
    Coollllll,. I Love the way you write Piki, but Goku should have his way too, no?
    Jijijiji --gigles--.
    Continue it, please! :)
    See you
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  • From ROGUEFURY on September 30, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! NOT LANDING! THEIR SEXY VOYAGE OF NUMMINESS AND GREAT BANTER CANNOT END!!! Ah well, I love the depth you put into the Yardrat escapade, and into Piccolo's hidden emotions and such. Can't wait to see what happens next. THEY CANT JUST STOP SEEING EACH OTHER, SO THEY BETTER FIND A WAY TO SNEAK AROUND!!!!!
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on September 28, 2007
    *squirms* Another wonderful chapter ^.^ I'm a little sad that they're landing soon though! I hope they don't stop...erm... interacting :P This latest lemon was VERY entertaining. I love how Goku reacted, lol!

    Excellent writing, as usual!
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  • From Robyn on September 27, 2007
    So much love for this chapter. All the Piccolo thoughts, and the Yadrats, and how Goku and Piccolo differed in their approach to these aliens.

    O.o A little surprised by Goku's reaction to Piccolo's over bearing dominance, but I suspect this is an aspect you'll go into in more detail later.


    YAY!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on September 02, 2007
    Wow...this was an amazing chapter. Everything from thought processes to actions. Don't want to ruin it for other folks, so I won't go into details, like you did. :)
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  • From ROGUEFURY on September 02, 2007
    Amazing and sweet. All I could think to describe this chapter. It really made my day to read it, so I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on September 01, 2007
    I just can't get over how well you write. You're truely amazing!

    Wonderful chapter, as usual. I loved the interactions, dialoge, and of course, the lemon ^.^ I feel bad for Goku though. He's probably pretty upset about what Piccolo said in the end there. Poor guy :(

    I eagerly await the next brilliant chapter from you!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on September 01, 2007
    Ah - I don't know how to express how much I like this. They are so wonderfully awkward together, trying to redefine this complicated new relationship. Goku really does love him, doesn't he? And it sounds like he wants Piccolo to feel the same and is trying to cajole him into feeling the same. I like how he takes contol away from Piccolo, tests his limits, proves yet again he can be trusted, then gives up control when he knows Piccolo can't take it anymore. Poor Goku though, with Piccolo's reaction to 'love'.
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  • From Robyn on August 20, 2007
    AH! Cliff hanger!!!! :P YAY! This story is back. I like reading what's going on in Piccolo's head, and his thoughts on Son, and what he thinks is going on in the sayian's mind.

    Only to watch as he slowly comes to realize...Goku isn't quite as dense as he leads others to believe he is. *smirks*

    I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter, and the bit of pay back that is coming Piccolo's way! :D
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  • From ROGUEFURY on August 18, 2007
    ONCE AGAIN, A deliciously sexy and witty chapter! I can't wait for an update; need to see how devilish Goku can be, having Piccolo in such a nice spot XD
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on August 16, 2007
    Oh, you are SO good at what you do!! I absolutely LOVE the dialoge between Goku and Piccolo. You keep them both in character so well too. Goku isn't as stupid as everyone protrays him, and the wit you've portrayed him with in this fic is just perfect! The interaction between the two is exactly how I'd imagined it would be. Piccolo tends to be more dominant by nature, but Goku gets his kicks in too and doesn't just fold; but at the same time, he lets Piccolo take the reigns.... he just makes sure he tugs back sometimes, lol!

    I'm so glad you updated. I was just thinking about this fic yesterday and wondering when the next chapter would be out to enjoy. It was very enjoyable indeed and I can hardly wait for the next! Excellent work!
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