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By : Salza
  • From Robyn on July 30, 2007
    *adds sporking to Bullkitties*


    SPORK
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  • From BullKitty on June 25, 2007
    Alright, you. You've had your chance.

    *SPORK!*
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  • From BullKitty on June 14, 2007
    Wow, this story is amazingly emotional. The vocabulary is so diverse as well! Good choice deciding to use Piccolo's stand-point on things as well, Goku logic really is too simple. XD But most importantly... the sex scene (AND the buildup!) was HOT. Thought I'd include that since I've seen a few fics in my time that are beautifully written and then the author gets too nervous writing one of the best parts, fudging up one of the best parts. *shakes her head sadly* Happens to the best of us i suppose.

    Now... where did that spork go...?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2007
    I don't generally go for them as a pair, but this was wonderfully done! I esp laughed at the ch 4 line “Just guessing, but I don’t think you’d want these in you.”
    *shrugs* What can I say? Pic's talones are not used much in FF, and guess I'm just glade someone finally remembered that he has'em, his fangs too. Great read for a GokuxPic!

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  • From ANON - Snow on June 05, 2007
    Oh wow. I usually would not read this pairing, but I am so glad that I did!

    Your writing is superb and elegant. I love how you portray Goku and Piccolo. They are very much still in character, and I like how Piccolo's thoughts are sometimes sarcastic and comedic.

    I think it's so cute that in their love scene, that it is full of passion, and not as explicit as other fanfiction.

    Keep up the wonderful work, and I can't wait for an update. I want to see how their relationship deepens, and if anyone ever finds out.

    Great job!
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  • From kgemeni on June 01, 2007
    Goooood story.
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  • From ANON - FireFly on May 31, 2007
    Squee!!! What a cute chapter! This isn't the end, is it? I hope not, because I'm itching for more! I always come here looking for updates from you :)
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  • From ROGUEFURY on May 31, 2007
    Wow...this was another exquisitely written chapter! So believable and it made me feel warm and cheery inside XD Most smut makes me happy, but this makes me cheery XD I can't wait for the next chapter. Piccolo is so great and I wanna see how you develop this relationship.
    LATER. ROGUEFURY
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on May 30, 2007
    I love Goku-logic - so simple, so effortless, and making such perfect sense. Goku-logic gives you everything you want. It's like a gentle flood that takes you whereever it wants, and having arrived proceeds to convince you that wherever you end up is exactly where you wanted to be the entire time. Piccolo doesn't stand a chance. *g* A fun chapter to read.
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  • From Robyn on May 30, 2007
    YAY! An update. :) I like the fact they got this talk out of the way. I am hoping Goku's plan will work...but I know, if it worked out the way it was planned, there'd hardly be a story. :P


    I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - lightning on May 01, 2007
    wonderful in that so good i'm now late for class way
    thanks for the ride
    bye
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  • From ANON - Garret on April 15, 2007
    Omg omg I loved it I loved i tI loved it

    You didnt go into detail in... Those areas like other writers do
    but you carefully described how it felt and what it was like

    Kudos for you... and more yaoi for me!
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on April 08, 2007
    "fragmented faster than the Soviet Union after the Cold War"
    That's got to be one of the best line I've ever read!
    Oh, and rest of the story great too ^^ More?
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  • From ROGUEFURY on April 06, 2007
    Oh wow...this was exquisite! It was so tasteful, but still detailed and alluring. Really awesomely written! I can't wait for the update; Piccolo and Goku need to sort their feelings out for each other and not regret anything!!!

    LATER. ROGUEFURY
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on April 06, 2007
    Man, you are SO good! Your writing is so flawless and so flowing that picturing it in my head is just as easy as if I were watching it on tv.... and that's a hot thought ^.^

    I was wondering when you were going to update this fic, and it was certainly worth the wait! Fantastic! This has quickly become one of my favorite fics, and you have become one of my favorite writers.

    I look forward to more ^.^
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