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Reviews for Oceans

By : Salza
  • From Robyn on April 06, 2007
    Wow....*is a useless pool of drool*....

    Okay, I'll try. I like how most of Piccolo's thoughts on the matter were anylitical and when they weren't how it seemed he had just stopped thinking for that time.

    I've seen several references in this chapter to how things later are not 'okay' and of course, that leaves me wanting to know what you have in store for these two.


    WELL DONE!
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  • From Salza on April 06, 2007
    To Macha - many thanks ^^() Sometimes I DO need sporking.
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  • From Robyn on March 31, 2007
    This is going to hurt you more than it does me.


    *SPORK*
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  • From nahleili on March 29, 2007
    Oh man, I seriously love how you write Piccolo. This fic is excellent. Do continue soon :)
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  • From ANON - FireFly1 on March 09, 2007
    I think you're doing a wonderful job with this fic ^.^ You're keeping both Goku and Piccolo in character pretty well. Goku isn't overly dominant and Piccolo isn't being meek and submissive, even though he lacks experience.

    Nothing ruins a fic faster than OOC characters in my opinion.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Robyn on March 08, 2007
    *sighs* Spectacluar. :) You have a gift, that's for certain, and I hope to see more of it soon!
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  • From ROGUEFURY on March 08, 2007
    OMFG!! This is exquisite! I love the writing and the dialogue so much. The intricacy of how you're writing the point of view is soo damned sexy! I really hope you update soon, cuz this is the best fic I've read in a while! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

    LATER. ROGUEFURY
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  • From Robyn on March 08, 2007
    Chapter two was a great moment of awkwardness. I loved it! :)
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  • From Robyn on March 08, 2007
    Took a chance on a pairing I don't usually read. The first chapter was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I loved the description of Piccolo trying to get out of the ocean, and the introspect of him thinking about all of those around them, and examining how they were reacting, and trying to figure out how he should be reacting.

    Wow...on to chapter 2.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on March 08, 2007
    I LOVE this story. Such a perfect look into Piccolo's head, with that strange mix of confidence and awkwardness. The description in chapter 3 is wonderful, and for me, the strange chain of events is completely believable. Goku's automatic treatment of Piccolo as a friend and a lover suits him - he can read Piccolo and knows more about him than Piccolo realizes. Bravo. I can't wait for more.
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  • From TechnoRanma on February 06, 2007
    Oh WOW! This is superbe!! Perfect characterization, and it stays true to DBZ! You are a phenomenal writer!! Please continue!!
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  • From ROGUEFURY on January 29, 2007
    I want more! This story is beautifully written; flawless! They're both in perfect char, but the situation is still believable. I am loving this story so far, so I hope you review soon!
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  • From Pixelgoddess on January 16, 2007
    What a great start - nice description and a good grasp on a Piccolo mindset. (The only phrase that bobbled a bit was 'air freshener'.) I like how Piccolo doesn't really understand his own motivation for saving Goku, as well as the difference in his reaction to Gohan. I look forward to seeing what you do with this.
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  • From AkuRyuko on January 15, 2007
    Oh Noes, I can leave a reply now.

    First of all, you polished this VERY nicely. I love what you've done. I'm really beginning to get into this pairing, thanks to you. The imagery is beautiful and of course... It just makes me wanna pull out my old VHS and go through the tapes watching this saga just for the subtext.

    Very well done. ^_^
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