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Reviews for Flame and Fullmetal 300 km/h

By : Niia
  • From on February 12, 2007
    :X nice. lol. WRATH! (my thrid favorite ^^;;) -insert exceedingly praisful stuff here since I am to tired to think of a coherent reveiw ;_;- I can't wait to see what happens next! (I swear i will write you a better reveiw next time!)
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on February 12, 2007
    Alien:I am soooooo sorry, I didn't mean my last review as flame like...*sniffle* blame Ed and Roy for being with you for so long. Thay don't even call to say hi...I love the update but you didnt answer...can i hit jenny with my car? please? I dont like her...and eddies playing hard to get. when will he learn, play with fire an you'll get burn. and the pool scene was hot, I MUST compliment you on it.*dies in pool of drool that had formed over keyboard* oh and you called eddie a 'her' again.*Ed rolled ?her? eyes*
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  • From milky on February 11, 2007
    Again, that heat and tension between them is excellent! But argh, Roy's stupid girl needs to step the fuck off >:E
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  • From on February 11, 2007
    Dun Dun Dun!!!! Damn, that bitch needs to just die already -_-;; lmao. Great chapter! I can't wait to see the next one!! :D It's cool that Ed got Greed's respect, since he is my all time favorite homoculouse in the show....he and Lust, anyway XD (hooray!)

    I'm ALSO glad that this chapter came out earlier than intended! You have my utmost gratitude!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on February 10, 2007
    What a bag. Ed/Roy just can't seem to get organized and figure out what they want, can they?
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on February 10, 2007
    Alien:WAAAAAHHHHH! HOW COME YOU DANCED WITH EDDIE AND NOT ME?????? *sniffles and puts in a corner* no fair.....*sniffle*..On a brighter note, a jelous Ed is an adorable ed...and Is it me or did Roy get kinda annoyed when he found Speed with Ed? He was sounding like how Scar did when he was warning Ed about Roy. Oh well and did I mention I love the updates they ar hot so I dont have to send Hughes *huggles hughes who starts talking about how cute elisia is* Oh and i dont like jenny...can I hit her with my car? though I can't promise to be under the driving limit if i do....oh and I noticed an error somewhere but I cant remember where...oh well, hope you get better and update soon...
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  • From milky on February 10, 2007
    I like how you're getting more tension between the two of them, yowza! There's some heat there. I like Psiren too, she's damn sexy, unlike Jenny. The one thing I'll note though, maybe instead of the last OC Speed, would it make more sense to involve more FMA characters somehow? Archer canonically hated Roy. Or is Speed Archer? Oh ho...
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  • From ANON - kuragari75 on February 10, 2007
    ooooo, plot thickens!!! and yay! he made it! nice chapter!
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  • From Valerie22 on February 10, 2007
    Milles fois bravo, it's rare to get an author that can make there story so addictive without any superfluous fillers ( yes , anything containing citrus). Not that i dont enjoy those, id be a hypocrite if i denied it . I am aware that your story does have some light lemons in it , but it's mostly sexy and erotic, not blatantly pornographic . Your story is a refreshing addition to EdxRoy fanfics everywhere. Oh , just one question , does jenny get cement shoes for x-mas , if so id like to contribute to the gift....;)......keep going with this story , it's more then worth it. Oh , sorry im rambling, but a gold star to you for updating so damn fast!!!!! i love it. Fleur de lys
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  • From on February 09, 2007
    Hahahah! I loved it! Especialy the ending line. it was cute....so, does Speed play a larger part in the story? And does this mean that Ed has Greed's approval becasue not only of what he said but also because he stepped in when Kimblee pulled out a gun?

    I can't wait to find out what else happens!
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  • From ANON - cm34 on February 09, 2007
    you should have stuck with the kiss scene
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  • From ANON - kuragari75 on February 09, 2007
    GO ED!! GO!!! *bites nails* He makes it right!! oi, I hate cliff hangers... but they are fun to write huh? ;) anyway, nice job at making a 'bad guy' character. I see your point. I was just letting you know it was working xD. I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! later!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2007
    I'm so sorry to hear you got hurt! I hope you feel better soon! I have to say though, I loved this chapter! You're very good at writting the race seens.
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  • From on February 08, 2007
    He's going to jump? Awsome! I hope he makes in across instead of in the water (but of course, he will make it because if he dies we would have no more sotry, right?) I'm glad you finaly updated, but i hope you are alright and weren't hurt in your accedent. ;_;

    Keep up the goos work please, and keep safe!
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  • From milky on February 08, 2007
    Ahhhh cliffhanger! D: Noooo what's going to happen?!
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