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Reviews for Flame and Fullmetal 300 km/h

By : Niia
  • From ANON - TrulyWished on February 01, 2007
    Nice, very cute how they argue all the time
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  • From ANON - raindrop150 on February 01, 2007
    the file name was great. i love the quick updates and this story is just so freaking awesome!
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  • From ANON - raindrop150 on January 31, 2007
    HOLY GODS YES!!!!! that was awesome!!! omg, just.. omg. that was great. i love this story! and the car stunt just killed me. i mean ded. i cant wait to see where this goes with the oroboros mafia and al's here! yey! cant wait for the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2007
    Oh!!! I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 31, 2007
    Alien: ohh...this was soooo hot...you must update. *grabs ed and huggles him.* Yeah if you dont update soon Ill cry *suddenly notics ed missing* HEY WHERE"S MY EDDIE???!!! *turns to notice Roy sneaking off with him* HEY??!!! THAT"S MINE!! Roy: Nope mine, and we're goona finish what that author person started. Alien:okay... Eddie: yeah and pay her a visit to help her out. Alien:WHAT ABOUT ME??? *Both look at each other weird* whatever maybe you'll see us in the next chapter. *both leave* Alien:*sniffle* PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DaE on January 31, 2007
    I love it, keep it up!!
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  • From TrulyWished on January 31, 2007
    Nice, very hot and they're both so aggressive. It'll be fun to watch them fight over who tops.
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  • From ANON - nastyscarythingunderthebed on January 30, 2007
    It had better be T_T

    Yay for one hot chapter! *dies and goes to summerland*

    Eitherway, updates every few days, maybe every day?! 0.0 *loves you more than before*

    you my dear, you are my fanfic hero.......
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  • From squallstorm on January 30, 2007
    O_o...whoa...ok so the conversation between the brothers was very 'real' I could totally imangine the same thing between my own brothers or cousins, so yay!! Then at the garage...holy... that was so evil of Ed, I mean like O_O!! haha

    'Al had scorned his older brother for how poorly he took care of the house and himself' ...I had to read this twice XS haha scorned = hate more or less... I think you mean to say scolded as in 'he's a bad boy'

    glad to know I'm not getting a concussion anytime soon XD

    kiki
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  • From milky on January 30, 2007
    Mmm, very nice! I liked the way you reversed the roles here - by having Ed be proactive and go after Roy, it cranks the heat up that much hotter :)
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  • From ANON - nastyscarythingunderthebed on January 29, 2007
    I am, actualy, but shhh, no one is supposed to know >.>

    Eitherway, yay Mafia involvment and Horray for Al, Finaly!! XD yayness and much loves for this chapter ^^ I'm glad it was updated so soon after I read the first few chapters. I hate long waits *hint hint* ~_^

    Looking forward to the next chapter,
    your new and very devoted fan of this story ^^
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  • From milky on January 29, 2007
    Yay! ALLLL! I am so glad to see Al show up! It seems important for him to be involved in his brother's life.
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  • From squallstorm on January 29, 2007
    yes you can call me kiki, I don't mind XD

    ok this was a good chapter full of plot points! good work. I loved how you introduced Al at the end there very cool, I was all like a mafia hit already?!! haha great XD

    a few things... 'of' versus 'off'. 'off' - to pick up an item OFF the table. 'of' - Hohenheim OF light...watch out for this, I make the same boo-boo all the time, or used to. I can catch it pretty good now...most times XS. next... ”You son of a bastard! You and your fuckers almost had me killed last night!” usually the saying is 'You son of a bitch' but it could be that you meant to say bastard, it just doesn't roll off the tongue as well. third: 'Winry turned and glared at him for the longest time, making Ed squirrel in his seat.' instead of 'squirrel' I think you mean 'squirm' as in shifting all around in anxeity. *sigh* I'm sorry to pick so much...but...fourth: ”Ouh yeah?”... what's with the 'ouh' should be just 'oh'

    I give you premission to hit me over the head if anything I've said offends XS

    kiki

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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 29, 2007
    Alien: o.O ohh...and the plot grows..update soon. I cant wait to see what you have in store for us. ^^
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  • From ANON - FullInuAlchemist on January 28, 2007
    I only have two things to say;

    What Happened to Al?,

    Other than that,

    keep up the good work!
    ( )( )
    ('.')
    c(''')(''')
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