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Reviews for Flame and Fullmetal 300 km/h

By : Niia
  • From ANON - nastyscarythingunderthebed on January 28, 2007
    Yay For street Racing Ed and Roy! I lived it! Please update this soon. i am very sorry that this reveiw is not longer nor more constructive, but all I can really say beside the afore mentioned, is that your English is very good for someone who has never had a class, and that I especialy loved the last chapter and the one before it. Please please have the next chapter out soon?
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 28, 2007
    Alien: aww..my Roy got shot. *cries and then grabs Winry's wrench to clonk Roy on head for getting hurt.* Oh well, *huggles Ed after damaging Roy* oh and I know this probably not important but this part kinda freaked me and made me crack up. "With ~~her~~ free arm, Ed elbowed the other man in the gut..." ummm...when did eddie become a girl? HEY WHERE IS MY ED?!! *turns to see Ed nursing Roy's wrench abused self.* Oh yeah update soon please.
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  • From squallstorm on January 28, 2007
    yay! I love how fast your updating for this XD

    I really enjoyed that action bits. they were well thought out and explained, with no confusion as to who was doing what when/where.

    kiki
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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on January 28, 2007
    Ha ha ha, loved this chapter. It's interesting, great so far. Keep it up, and I hope you update soon! Just be careful when typing, you called Ed a she on more than one occasion. Just pointing it out, but I still got what you meant. Woot, update, hurry! :3
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 28, 2007
    Alien: Aww, poor Roy, so close yet so far away..darn ed for being so stubban. Update soon so i can read more
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  • From squallstorm on January 27, 2007
    good grief!! that pool scene was...really, REALLY hot!!! loved it, very nice XD

    kiki
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  • From TrulyWished on January 27, 2007
    Damn, so close! I love how they're using their dates to get to one another.
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  • From milky on January 27, 2007
    Oooh, the pool table scene had some of the best tension I've seen in RoyEd fic for a while. Keep that up, that was delicious.
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  • From squallstorm on January 26, 2007
    much better spelling and story telling for chapter 4 and 5 good job

    kiki
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  • From ANON - Silver4HENTAI on January 25, 2007
    Heyo, alien here. You soo have to update. pretty plz.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2007
    Yay! I was so happy to find this when I got home just now! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - raindrop150 on January 25, 2007
    oh my god im having fast and the furious flashbacks. *dies thinking of roy as Vin diesel*
    im totally in love with this plot man! its just.. awesome! you're doing a really great job and this is just amazing. i love it i love it i love it! and now i cant wait for more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2007
    whoa!
    I really like the concept, tis an interesting, rarely seen one.
    I really can't wait to see how this goes.
    Thanks for shareing your fic!

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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on January 21, 2007
    CONTINUE!!! I didn't comment the first few chappies 'cause I had to be logged in... Not anymore! Continue please :3
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  • From ANON - silverlook on January 21, 2007
    I like the story so far, and they all seem to be in character, and that gives you a big plus in my account :]
    I'll be waiting to see were you'll take it from here, Ed being the mafia's boss son and all...and I don't mind your spelling at all, It's far better than mine anyway X3...please update soon, I love OU stories, I find them quite refreshing :3 ~.-*zoom out*-.~
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