Reviews for Desecration: AlternateBy : sefiru |
Aside from the usual i loved every part of your story, I also really appreciate the note you put in response to the Anon review. As someone who is into more extremes in the bedroom, I thought the way you wrote it was brilliant. The fact that Vegeta realized that there was more power in the ability to do those things with Kakarott who trusted him entirely, and who he trusted, was beautiful. Like any kink, but especially BDSM, trust is absolutely integral. There is immense pleasure in allowing someone to do that to you while knowing they won't hurt you any further than what is clearly defined and obviously wanted. People like Anon merely throw accusations at things they can't understand, because of the simple fact that they don't understand. Nor do they often try to.
In my humble opinion, there's a beauty to BDSM when it's done correctly, and you wrote it perfectly.
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