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Reviews for Desecration: Alternate

By : sefiru
  • From MsFluorescent on October 06, 2020

    Aside from the usual i loved every part of your story, I also really appreciate the note you put in response to the Anon review. As someone who is into more extremes in the bedroom, I thought the way you wrote it was brilliant. The fact that Vegeta realized that there was more power in the ability to do those things with Kakarott who trusted him entirely, and who he trusted, was beautiful. Like any kink, but especially BDSM, trust is absolutely integral. There is immense pleasure in allowing someone to do that to you while knowing they won't hurt you any further than what is clearly defined and obviously wanted. People like Anon merely throw accusations at things they can't understand, because of the simple fact that they don't understand. Nor do they often try to.

    In my humble opinion, there's a beauty to BDSM when it's done correctly, and you wrote it perfectly.


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  • From ANON - Demini on March 26, 2009
    I was reconnecting with DBZ after my hiatus with Harry Potter and my long lost love of Friday the 13th when I came across this piece. I reached the chapter of your rant and watned to say a few things. I am in the BDSM lifestyle. Sub by choice. Even though I have yet to find my Dom, I feel that you are capturing a good representation of many parts of this lifestyle. There are a lot of people who will not understand what it feels like to kneel on the floor with just a collar on. I respect their vanilla relationships. But I absolutly lothe people who bash this liftstyle and judging behivors they do not understand. Also, if these people do not like how you are writing and hate BDSM, why the ell did they click the hyperlink? It clearly says BDSM as a warning. THoes people can just shove their candy ass hand right up their own ass and get a clue. Love the progress.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on January 15, 2008
    oh you dog! making him take goten, and goten take him, and sucking and rimming and I don't know what else. truly a fic worthy of Veggie, the ultimate perv XD
    and what about me? oh yeah, I'm a perv too ^^
    sexy and hot, as always. you go!
    ^0^/
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  • From Zofo on January 13, 2008
    Wonderful end to a brillient fic. Left me thinking that Goten was becoming a second slave to Vegeta, bet Trunks would have something to say about that! Maybe that will be one of the one-off's you said you would write. Looking forward to them.

    You are one of the few writers that can write these kind of relationships realistically, making the reader understand the trust, respect and love involved, instead of making it all about power, dominance and submission. Thank you.

    PS. Which Pokemon are you going to do? Is it a crossover with DBZ? I'll have to look out for it if you are serious.
    xxx
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  • From kitkit on January 13, 2008
    wow so perverse, but i like it.
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  • From ANON - foxxy jones on January 11, 2008
    I would to see a sin off where trunks has goten as a slave.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 08, 2008
    wow i wonder who the guest is, it could be goten or gohan or somebody different
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on December 31, 2007
    eep! everybody gets a taste, veggie's so considerate (not really) ^^ interesting about veggie and trunks coming at the same time and everything, I like the perviness of that ~.^ and who could the special guest be, I wonder? not a son of goku's I imagine? Ooh, the shame, the delicious shame!
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on December 29, 2007
    I really liked this chapter because I always like fics that involve the other Z fighters. Keep up the good work and continue in the near future.
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  • From Zofo on December 28, 2007
    Outstanding! You certainly know how to push the boundaries (boundaries are for breaking is what I say).

    I especially liked Piccolos double barrels, wonder what he squirted being a plant, and including Bulma was unexpected but very welcome. Why should the boys have all the fun? She has to get Vegeta one of those :-)

    Who is the surprise? Who's left? I'm on tender-hooks here please don't keep us waiting long (turns own puppy dog eyes on Sefiru, but realises they aren't a patch on Goku's, sulks).
    xxx
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on December 22, 2007
    eep! exhibitionst! and leather, a clear favourite ^^
    and I'm so happy you've continued with this ^0^/
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  • From kitkit on December 17, 2007
    so hot..a public scene
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  • From solitare1 on December 16, 2007
    I'm ready for the next chapter I don't know about anyone else!
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  • From CrimsonTide on December 15, 2007
    O.O My, my! Leather DOES look good! I had no idea that a public display meant going at it like bunnies in front of all of Goku's friends! lol! Hope someone had a camera!
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  • From Zofo on December 15, 2007
    Love this story, at times it's made me grin from ear to ear, especially the public scene. The outfits and the humans reactions were great, I can almost see them squirming. You write these kind of relationships really well, which ever one is sub or dom. And no, I don't think you've gone too far at all (encourages Sefiru to go further).

    What plan are Vegeta and Goku going to discuss? Ohh can't wait, I just know it will be great :-)
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