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Reviews for Desecration: Alternate

By : sefiru
  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on November 21, 2007
    Woo! That was quite the fic! I've actually read it before, but never had the chance to review it. *slaps hand* shame, shame on me. And Bravo on your rant against Anon. Those type of short-sighted people really burn me.

    It's nice to see you did your research on BDSM relationships and you did a great job of portraying one between Vegeta and Goku. In fact, this fic was the best I've seen in its genre!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2007
    “Uh, I won’t harm my family. I won’t do violence in cold blood. And, um, I won’t actually eat shit.”

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    Oh God, I guess I laughed for a whole hour. Good, Goku. Scat is bad for you.

    Liked this one pretty much too. But still prefer Unbroken :)
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  • From ANON - kayako on April 14, 2007
    ^^ my deepest respect goes out to you for actually knowing [whether through research or personal experience] about the type of relationship you wrote about here.
    i really wish you would've written the scene when kakarott was given that beautiful collar you described. ::sniffle.:: i still remember the first time i had a collar placed around my throat. it was such a wonderful experience. ^^ so if you write another story of this nature. and anyone gets given a collar. you should really, really, really write that scene.
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  • From Usagi on April 11, 2007
    OMGS! I love this story. And I love how you depict BSDM relationships. And you're right, not alot of people understand them. One very large misconception is that the dominant has total forced control. This is not the case. The sub gives up control to the dominant and at the end of the day, the sub is really in control. Everything is done according to what the SUB wants. And at any time the sub can stop the play if they feel uncomfortable. Anyway, I love your story. XD
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  • From ANON - Weezer on April 01, 2007
    I've been reading a lot of these fanfics now and I have to say I'm very impressed with yours. There seem to be very few authors that will actually write about a functional BDSM relationship and not just go in for the absolute control, possessive, rape crap. I'm very impressed with your story.
    Also, I read your new comments chapter on this story and as far as 'anon' is concerned, I wouldn't pay them any mind if I were you. They obviously don't understand the difference between the kind of BDSM you are writing and the kind that seems to run rampent in every fandom on this site. Most likely they are simply looking for something to be indignent about without actually having to give it any real thought.
    Again, congrats on a great story. I can't wait for a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2007
    I’m not against BDSM or people who choose this sexual practice, in fact I’ve read many exquisite pieces of BDSM in which the characters weren’t portrayed as unworthy beings and I’ve enjoyed them very much. I’m only against the way you and some other people, using BDSM as excuse, portray this couple as unworthy trash (I insist on it), for instance Vegeta renouncing to his title just because his only desire is to have a cock stuck up his ass; or Goku’s attitude in this fic; with things like that you make them seem stupid and worthless. Funny, all this ranting, when it’s precisely you who are portraying those who practice BDSM without any dignity.



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  • From ANON - pun_xy on April 01, 2007
    Most definitely agree with you, Sefiru, about the BDSM relationship discussion. Both that there are healthy BDSMs and that the characters of DB are very good for use within that genre in fanfiction. Mostly so because they're already so used to pain and perhaps in a way thrive in the feeling and sensing part of pain/pleasure, which I believe might be the real reason for someone entering a BDSM relationship, for the feelings it evokes. And also, in a way I think that maybe BDSM partners might be able to trust each other more than "regular" pertners, because they trust the other enough to let them "hurt" them in the bedroom.
    I might be bad to put my thoughts in words ^^; but point is anyway: I agree with you (however that might matter or not >>).
    Continue your great work, there are those who love and whorship your writing (yes, nerds mostly)!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2007
    Disgusting how you portray this couple in all your stories. I’m just tired that lately so many people are writing this kind of stuff. If there’s one word to define Goku and Vegeta that would be dignity, they’re proud and honorable, and portraying them as sick and worthless trash not only shows that you don’t understand these characters at all but it’s insulting for all the people that really love this couple and yaoi. With all this pointless fics you are only giving reasons for homophobic people to be more intolerant and hateful. A pity.

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  • From ANON - pun_xy on March 24, 2007
    Breaking his tail? Ouch ^^; *shruggs* Ah, well, pain sort of suits Goku...
    Really cute how Vegeta realised his eariler faults, he really does love Goku! Yay!

    Pure Evil Omakes you say? You certainly know how to entertain your crowd ;3

    Pure Evil 4?! *dances out of (nerd-)happiness* Gah! So good! XD
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  • From kitkit on March 23, 2007
    wow i loved this chapter..im happy vegeta buried his pride and said sorry
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  • From ultistarmon on March 23, 2007
    You should bring Krillin back, only this time have him walk in on them. Make it believable, not like he was spying on them or something. They get to frisky somewhere not private enough and Bam! in walks poor Krillin. Nothing to extreme in the torture department, because Krillin would try to save his friend. I don't want to here about Krillin torture, nearly giving him a stroke yes, nearly getting him killed no. Hmmm, what's Bulma's take on all this or maybe some of the others.
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  • From ultistarmon on March 16, 2007
    Vegeta arguing with Krillin, this I have got to see. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on March 11, 2007
    Aww, he let Kakarott brush his tail! How cute ^^ (I didn't even know they did that, hehe)
    I just love the dominant Vegeta, funny how he's so stubborn. But that's just Veggi for you X3
    Nice work (as usual ^^), I'm gonna read Enough Time as soon as I have some time (hopefully now ;D).
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  • From ANON - KirieVillanite on March 10, 2007
    This is great! I'm more used to their names being Gokou, Bejita, & Kuririn or something, but still -- very good. I'll be waiting for an update, ja?
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  • From kitkit on March 09, 2007
    wow me love the chapter
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