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By : nomdeplume

From Kuragari75 on April 29, 2007
awwwwwwww. so cute! I just about died laughing at Roy and Ed's reaction to Aideen's 'crush.' reminds me of what happened when I got my first boyfriend. suprisingly enough, it was my FRIEND'S parents that got all protective of me. XD anyway, love the chapter, as always, and the crying to win over the press thing was just so Nicholas and Aideen. Love those two!!! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!!!! later ^-^
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From ANON - hikaru_9 on April 29, 2007
Overprotective Daddies FTW!!! Yes, it cracks me up hardcore. And the revisiting of, "oh god, i'm gonna be related to Armostrong." Classic, just classic.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 27, 2007
Hey! I meant to review this chapter yesterday but it got too late (1 am late!) to do it. So, yeah, just call me no-account! :)

Roy, you delightfully devious bastard! :D Ed was getting a bit panicked there for a minute! I was kinda worried myself for a second that Roy was gonna do something bad when he grabbed Ed's shirt like that! eep! Havoc wasn't helping laughing so damned much! jerk. :) I think Roy would enjoy giving Ed those birthday licks once they're home alone! Ooo. birthday licks. Now there's a double entendre for ya!! LOL!! Well, it works both ways!! XD Roy got close enough though when he tweaked Ed's butt in the kitchen! Loved it!!! :D w00t! Make a wish and blow out your candles, birthday boy! Oh and please don't castrate your husband! ROFLMAO!! Roy knows Ed only too well!!! XD

Btw, is it just me or does Ed seem to spend a lot of time in the kitchen? I know with kids it's kinda unavoidable since they're always wanting something, snacks and such, but I'm wondering when (if?) Ed ever does any of his duty to his country. He is a lieutenant colonel and, if I remember correctly from a dozen or so chapters ago during the war with Drachma, has men under his command. It's so weird to think of Ed commanding soldiers! He's always been such a free-spirited soul. This is all SO irrelevant I know but I was just wondering. Man, I gotta back off the sugar! :) What does Ed actually do for the military anyway? Does he still do research type stuff? Does he ever do any of the usual soldier stuff? Since he is the fuhrer's husband, does he even 'have' to do any of this? Meaning, is his rank more symbolic than anything? Being that close to the ultimate seat of authority (nice way to describe Roy no? :D) Ed can pretty much do as he pleases. Not that he would ever abuse his position of power but, yeah, the freedom is still there allowing him to spend days on end in the lab or whatever and never have to set foot in Central Command. *rereads paragraph* Ah jeez. Sugar not only rots your teeth; it rots your brain. *sigh* Not one of these questions has a damned thing to do with this story. I am so sorry for this long absolutely pointless rambling bit of nonsense. :(

On to something actually relevant to the story - Frank and Kain! Goodness have mercy that was one hot kiss! :) Good thing Kain pulled back when he did or he might have found himself being ravished on his own desk! :D Nothing like some hot office sex! w00t!! I may not be on Team Frank but I for dang sure ain't gonna begrudge the man some lovin'! ;)

I'm kinda peeved at Raine for overstepping her boundaries. There are some things a parent has to do no matter how awkward or embarrassing. Granted she was just trying to be helpful and these things are better explained by a woman to a woman since guys, Lord love 'em, are mostly clueless about the finer details of it all but she still shoulda asked if it was OK and offered to do it in Roy and Ed's stead. And did she HAVE to be so blunt and throw that much info at the poor child all at once? doctors. sheesh. The little conversation about breasts was cute! "Part of growing up, becoming a woman. She said that even though they�re mostly for feeding babies, as far as their purpose goes, that a lot of men like them." "Not all men." "No, she said not men like you, or Lieutenant Colonel Fuery." I have absolutely no idea why but that little exchange made me smile! There's just something sweetly endearing about how Aideen knows about and refers to her daddy's homosexuality like it's nothing at all. *sigh* If only the people of our world could be like this....

Last few things and I swear I'll shut up! :) Bras that lock in place - loved it! This from a man who's chased more skirts than I care to know about! LOL! Nicholas and Aideen are definitely "devious little brats"! Brilliant idea about thinking of Riza to make the tears flow. It made me a bit misty eyed too the way Aideen told it. *hugs Aideen* Question. Why did Roy roll down the window when everybody was already out of the car? Lastly, I liked how Ed got the last laugh on Roy when he pointed out that Roy's parenting knowledge was based on his experiences of watching Ed grow up! ;) ouch! That'll make him lose some sleep! :D It's amazing when you think about it just how long these two have known each other. Happy Birthday Ed!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I hope my LOOOONG reviews don't mess up your computer like The Candy Made Me Do It's review did. I'm too wordy for my own good. sorry. *cries* It's the sugar's fault I swear! XD
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 27, 2007
*sniffle* Our little Aideen is growing up so fast! her first bra. Ah, the memories! God, I HATED having to wear a bra! :D Even now, all these years later, bras can still be a pain - especially the ones that don't ride right or pinch. Who's bright idea was it anyway to put underwires in bras? There's nothing worse than an underwire sticking you in the side trying to gouge a hole in you! ouch! :) Uh oh, this also means that it won't be long before Aideen has her first menstrual cycle. Oh dear. Roy's having a hard enough time with the idea of a bra. This new development will really do him in! XD AND she's taken to calling Ed dad! *overly dramatically clutches chest* Oh my poor heart! I think it's broken! XD This can't be happening! She's still just a baby! *cries* Maybe Roy and I can commiserate over the loss of childhood together. :)

*wincing and hissing* Oh Ed. What were you thinking? If only you'd just let it happen you wouldn't be in this situation. I wouldn't have guessed that Roy would be this insanely jealous. Jean, of all people, Jean. It just HAD to be the person Roy imagines he has competition from. *sigh* Well, I guess we now know how to spell mood killer! LOL! When you mentioned that this was not only Ed's birthday but also the day Roy proposed to Ed, I HAD to go back and reread that part of For Her For Him! *sqwee!* so good!! I may have to go back and reread the whole thing now!! :D Oh, *giggle*, Wrath's little comments are hilarious! :D

*whistles and cheers* Go ahead, Kain! w00t! :D Claim it and take it big daddy!! XD Dammit Frank! Don't tease Kain like that! "Once I remembered that night, I knew I could goad you into it." *glares at Frank* Don't spoil a good thing by acting like the jackass everyone suspects you are - or I'll ask Ed to come visit you again! *evil grin* snogging? Uh what? *pulls up dictionary* British slang for "to kiss and cuddle", huh? *grins* I thought for a minute there that Frank was accusing Kain of some rather lascivious behavior! Frank's hide is saved thanks to dictionary.com! :D
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. You like my reactions, huh? Can't help myself. I'm just extreme like that! :) Why do I suddenly feel like a mouse being toyed with by a cat? ;)
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From ANON - dancingpixies on April 26, 2007
Yay! Another chapter! I like the plan that the children had used against the reporter ^_^ The reporter is a "stinkybutt poopyhead" who only wants to make a quick buck....O.o

Yea, I'm a weird one.
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From BishounenKrazed on April 26, 2007
seriously, i thought it said, "i swear you're part car." as in, ed's heavy. then i read it again. ahaha. and that was a nice trick on the kids' part. and jesus, raine really knows how to make people uncomfortable, ne? great chapter. until next time.
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From ANON - Hikaru_9 on April 26, 2007
Dude, Ed so won that arguement! The plan fior revenge was awesome too!

Yeah, i got nothing, but i'm enjoying it!
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From ANON - Aelia on April 26, 2007
Love, love, love!

One of my favorite fanfics. And it's so poignant seeing the babies from For Her, For Him grow up.

I liked the touch about the kids thinking about their mom. I'd really love to see a little more with that, like Roy telling them about Riza, photographs, etcetera.

Truly fantastic.
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From Kuragari75 on April 25, 2007
*rolling on the floor laughing* XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!!! I love it! that was frickin' hilarious with the whole Frank and Kain thing. Love how you pulled that one! XD poor Roy, tries to be nice and look what happens. That joke really blew up in Ed's face huh? Wonder how he's planning to get out of this one. hmmmm... well! LATER!
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From BishounenKrazed on April 25, 2007
oh, that was a cruel joke ed played. and if aideen is maturing so much faster than expected, wouldn't that derail plans for dante to take her body? if she still had designs on the girl, that is. really great chapter, and i'm digging the frank/kain. can't wait for the next one!
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From nomdeplume on April 25, 2007
Okay, I'm not trying to change this review. The Awww was long, and was messing with the formatting of my screen. So The Candy Made Me Do It, I kept everything just like you wrote it, just made the awww a little shorter, though I appreciate the sentiment.
The Candy Made Me Do It 2007-04-25
-points to FrankxKain, jumping up and down- AwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwW!! So cute! :3

As for el bra situation... Gawd, the talk... -shudder- That was one of the most horrifing days EVER

And then we have Ed and his little crushes. Damn, I would've been pissed if I was Roy. Le joke was NOT funny, Ed! -wags finger-

Update soon! :3

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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 25, 2007
Coat check room!! That's the word I wanted but couldn't think of when I mentioned them having sex in public! All I could think of when I wrote my last review was "a room not far from the one where the ball in his honor is taking place". I knew I knew what that room was called but it just wouldn't come out of my head! I'm glad one of us knew what I was talking about! ;) The sex was awesome (as usual!) and I have to give major props to Ed for remembering to bring along a condom! *giggle* It would be most embarrassing to have to explain away certain stains on "the Great Fuhrer of Amestris"! w00t! Love that description! :D Wrath's TMI moment was funny! :) Sometimes you just don't need or want all the down and dirty details about some stuff! ;)

Aideen is so grown up! Wearing grown-up shoes and everything! The fact that said shoes brought her up past her daddy's chin even though she's only 10 years old is proof enough of the bittersweet truth that she'll be an adult before you know it. *sad smile* Good gracious these kids are growing up so fast!! Nicholas is still a bit of a hellion tho! typical little boy! :) I liked the way she handle herself with the reporter. Wrath's clever use of his cane was a nice touch too! I hope Wrath finds somebody to be with soon. I still feel bad for him because he's still missing Edward. poor guy. *wibbles* Even tho I'm not 100% in Frank's corner, I wish him well with Kain. Oh and, Dante can eat worms and die any day now. Die bitch die! *raspberries* :P LOL! Mature no? :D Hey! I just realized I didn't get any props in the shout-outs! *pretend sniffle* no love for me. *pretend tears* It's not like I "need" the acknowledgement or anything. *dies laughing at her own asininity!*
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Hail to the fuhrer! XD
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From ANON - Hikaru_9 on April 23, 2007
The move with the cane was brillant.
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From ANON - Hikaru_9 on April 22, 2007
Whoa, i was like four or 5 chapters behind!! i would like to say that the relationship you're starting to explore with Fuery and Stephen is rather interesting. I'd like to see where you take it. Still enjoying the stories, and curious to see how the gate between the 2 worlds plays out with Dante leading Eckhart's efforts. And Hohenhiem=
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From ANON - malcara on April 22, 2007
wow i go away for a few days and theres a gazillion updates.........I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! also........is fuery and frank gonna get together? i think they'd be really cute..........and i hope poor wrath doesn't stay lonely either!
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