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From Kuragari75 on April 20, 2007
XD. I knew it... Fuery and Frank huh? interesting ;) love it... as always... I laughed my ass off at Fuery's discription of all the things Frank did while drunk. That was very entertaining. ^-^ can't wait for an update!!! LATER!
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From BishounenKrazed on April 19, 2007
that was awesome. though i think roy should have kicked frank's ass in that spar. and kain and frank do make a cute couple. so cute. i can't wait for the next chapter. ah! but dante's not going to do something at the ball, is she? i'll cry. i will.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 19, 2007
ROFLMAO!! Frank got drunk and proposed to two women, a mailbox, a lamppost, and to KAIN!!! *sqwee!!* Well, it's not like I didn't see that one coming! :D Oh Lordy, the comment about hoping Kain would make as good a wife as Ed had me on the floor!! *dies laughing* Ed's reaction was priceless!! He reacts to "being the woman" comments the way he used to about short jokes! Love it!!! Has anyone ever written an Archer/Kain pairing before? Hey! You might be the first! LOL! Sorry, but I had to take back some of the props I had given Frank when he started in on Roy about the bruises. The poor man's got issues dammit! Leave him alone! grr! At least we know (or rather suspect) that the tequila was more than likely the cause of the night terrors. Man, you scared the hell out of me when Roy attacked Ed like that! What are you trying to do? Give me a heart attack? sheesh! Roy was sweet to offer to move out of the bedroom for a while to protect Ed. A completely unnecessary thing to do but still very very sweet! :)

Hmm. How to spice up Roy and Ed's love life. Well first, you take the idea of mini skirts, crumple it up into a nice little ball, and slam it into the nearest trash can! There's just no way in hell that's gonna happen! Ixnay for inimay irtskays! (My pig latin is horrible! LOL!) Ok, trying to be serious now. Umm. Hmm. *shrugs* I don't know. Maybe you should start out with something simple like blindfolds and bondage. It wouldn't matter who tied who up. It'd be hot either way! ;) I don't know how quickly or how kinky you want these two to get so I don't know if you'd want to use cockrings, whips/floggers, penis sleeves, frot, docking, etc right off the get-go. There's been suggested frot (rubbing erections against one another) a few times but no actual completion because of it. Have these two ever done a 69? Sex in a public place is also an option. *evil grin* The high and mighty fuhrer of Amestris getting a bj (or giving one!! w00t!!) in a room not far from the one the ball in his honor is taking place in would be great! The risk of getting caught adds a certain something! :) But since there'll be lots of press around the chances of getting caught are pretty high so maybe that's not such a good idea after all! ;) I don't know. You decide. Just don't do anything extreme because that, like the mini skirts, is a bad idea. Gotta keep our boys IC after all! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From ANON - nette on April 19, 2007
sorry i hadnt reviewed in like ages but i just wanted to tell you that i have enjoyed reading this sotry very much and luv the way it is turning out. poor edward and wrath that was a sad chapter and i wish it didn't happen but i understand that for him to live in that world our ed would have had to die so yea. im glad wrath is doing better now and he's "talking". everything else in the story is good and the incident b/w roy and frank at the office, lmao. anyway great job and cant wait to read more XD
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on April 18, 2007
Whoa. Hello train wreck! :) Damn, talk about totally ruining my happy little fangirl moment! :) What the hell is up with these night terrors? You can't just throw something random like that on me like that! That's one hell of a way to kill the mood! sheesh! Here I am being all content, lovin' me some hot yummy RoyEd action and savoring the afterglow (not to mention imagining all the possibilities of icing! *raids the pantry* OOO! chocolate! mmmm! *mischievous grin* :D), when all of sudden, BAM!, Roy's trying to strangle Ed! ACK! NOOOO! Say it's not so! *cries* My shock and surprise however, like Roy's thrashing, were brought to a quick halt by Aideen's slap. Kinda stunned me there for a minute. Definitely a moment when you just stop and stare almost too afraid to even breathe. a "Where the hell did that come from?" moment. She must have been channeling her aunt Raine 'cause that so sounds like something Raine would do! :) This is of course all Archer's fault. Damn you, Archer!! grr! Him and all his damn drama stressing my poor beloved Roy out like this! *hugs Roy. Ed glares. Oops! sorry Ed, my bad! Can I interest you in some chocolate icing for later? ;)*

Glad to see Wrath is finally doing something with his life. I was afraid for a good while there that he'd just give up and grieve himself to death. He may not be my most favorite character (He's certainly not least. Right now, Archer is. *raspberries Archer*) but I still care about him and feel for him. Having just gone thru the agony of losing my cat of 17 1/2 years, I now have a new appreciation for the pain of losing someone you love.

I'm none too thrilled that Hohenheim wants to come back to Amestris to see Aideen and Nicholas. blecch. I can't even bring myself to call them his grandchildren. I don't care how wrong or unfair it is but I'd just as soon they had nothing to do with him. He's nothing but trouble. Where he goes, Dante is soon to follow. I haven't forgotten that she's still lurking out there somewhere; though what she hopes to accomplish now I have no idea. His reappearance might set her off and who knows what she'll do then. I'm hoping the next time she opens the gate those black blobby creatures will grab her and gobble her up! :) Not a fan of Noa's either. I lost all respect for her when she read Ed's mind while he was asleep but, since none of that part of the movie comes into play here in this story, I can't really hold that against her much as I'd like to. *sigh* whatever.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I just loved it when Ed was naming who was responsible for Roy's wrinkles! There was just something so sweet and endearing about it! Who knew Ed could be such a romantic? :) Happy birthday, Roy! :D
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From Kuragari75 on April 17, 2007
O.O eeek! I like Aideen, she's an interesting character....but...wow. Nice chapter though. Please update soon. ^-^
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From ANON - The Candy Made Me Do It on April 17, 2007
I feel so bad for Roy and how such a strenuous service in the military has screwed up his mind. He tried to strangle Edward!, though unintentionally... This reminds me of when Dr. Knox's wife left him... Hmm...

Me likey el chaptor (XD) and it proves that you can be romantic and have sex without being dirty.

As for Frank... God, at least he got out of SHOOTING Roy... So... Those sexual accusations are still trailing his ass, though.

As for Wrath, yay for him! Wooo, I can't wait to find out if he ever gets his voice back. -sits down with a bag of pop corn- Story time awaits!

Hope you update soon! :3
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From BishounenKrazed on April 17, 2007
oh that was so sad. yet beautiful, well, before the nightmare anyway. and i'm intrigued about how the girl plans to get hohenheim home without, what?, killing or using envy? even wrath had to use envy. damn... that just made me think about edward. now i'm sad. i eagerly await the next chapter!
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 14, 2007
Dead man walking indeed! :) I hope Ed raked Frank over the coals to the point that he never forgets to think before he acts! As a spy, Frank should know to look before you leap to avoid potential traps and getting caught. It's a wonder he's survived as a spy for as long as he has. Maybe he's a bit like me - far too emotionally tied to those closest to him to think straight. All too often the heart overrides the head and stuff happens! :)

Yeah, I'm an emotional little thing aren't I! ;D I have a rather extreme personality. (Big surprise huh? LOL) There very rarely are gray areas with me. I tend to view things in absolutes(?) and hardly ever change my mind. I guess that makes me stubborn too! :D I'm so over the top more often than not that I worry (after the fact of course!) that I've put authors off by my extreme emotional outbursts. I'm highly opinionated and not afraid to tell you exactly what I think - good or bad. I may not be able to type it all out the way I want to but I do try to get my point across as best I can. Like Wrath thought when he wrote about Maes, "Dead too, I�m guessing", it's very hard to express yourself without the "tone (of voice) and delivery of speech" necessary to make others understand exactly how you feel. The written word can be so insensitive sometimes. :)

The romantic little shower scene was quite delicious ("Are you decent?" Seriously Roy, does it even matter? We all know you're sneaking into the bathroom hoping to make Ed be anything but that! :D) but you must enjoy watching me bang my head on my desk every time the guys get interrupted! :D Not again!! NOOOOO!!! :) Do children have some kind of built in radar that lets them know the precise moment to interrupt their parents' alone time? I don't know about Roy and Ed but these kids are causing ME to have some serious sexual frustration! LOL!!! My frustration was tempered a bit by Ed being so adorably romantic where his necklace is concerned! :) *sqwee!* I love fluff! I have high hopes for the birthday sex, I mean scene! ;) Don't disappoint me (again)!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From Kuragari75 on April 14, 2007
lol, go Ed rants! I love them!!! good chapter... I loved the whole thing with cain and Frank talking... the shower scene was funny too.... at least the end ;)! well done!
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From BishounenKrazed on April 13, 2007
that was great. ^___________^ funny, and a bit heartwarming too, what with the necklace ed still has and all. well, i agree with ed that a little bit of fear in frank is a good thing. and i like that he made a friend with kain. kain always seemed so... left out somehow. anyway, great chapter. i look forward to the next one.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on April 11, 2007
GAH!! You are an evil tease!!!! *bangs fist on desk* :D First you make me mad as hell with Frank kissing Roy and threatening him with a knife and then, just when I think there's gonna be a yummy little RoyEd moment to make up for this effrontery, you kick me in the head with the twins interrupting things!! No fair!! Go back to bed little children! *angrily pouts* Damnation and hellfire! *seething* Where the hell does that sorry son-of-a-bitch God-forsaken bastard asshole Frank get off thinking he has a right to know what is in Roy's personal files?!? How dare he impersonate Roy and break into his office!! How dare he kiss Roy and threaten him like that!! *shaking with rage and screeching* How! dare! he!! *livid and breathing hard* Ok. *deep breaths* Granted Roy needed to learn his lesson about letting his guard down so easily but did it have to come at the cost of my sanity? :) It probably is a good thing Roy wants Frank to join his military. Keep your friends close and your enemies closer! ;) With Frank doing shit like this, he's no different from the Archer we all hate. I wish now that Sig had beaten the absolute living hell out of him more than he did. If Frank steps out of line again, I hope Ed is there to give him a good taste of what automail can really do!! *evil grin* And to think I was willing to give this Frank bastard a chance. *derisive snort* No bloody way in hell that's happening now! :P
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From ANON - The Candy Made Me Do It on April 11, 2007
Wooo, Roy's back with Ed.

Woooah, Frank is GOOD!! Not even Havoc did all that well. (Loved that episode, but I liked it when ROY dressed up as HAVOC :3)

Gasp, Frank kissed Roy? Just to prove a point?! -double gasp-

Loved this chapter, and, omg, the twins inturrupting what could've been somethin'... Hawt XD Ha ha, update soon... I just noticed, I say "loved this chapter" for every chapter... Well... Maybe 'cause they're all awesome! :D
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From BishounenKrazed on April 11, 2007
frank should be damn glad he remembered to remove roy's gloves, cause had it been me, i would've fried his ass. i don't like it when people make a fool of my roy *pouts*

anyway, i look forward to the next chapter, and more on how wrath is progressing.
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From Kuragari75 on April 11, 2007
lol, the joys of parenthood. XD loved that! great chapter. Although.... I got a little ticked at Frank on that one... but I guess he redeemed himself somewhat. Love the chapter!!
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