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By : nomdeplume

From ANON - Hikaru_9 on March 29, 2007
I like what you've done in this chapter! The death of Edward wass sad, but nessicary in a way i think. It wouldn't be right to have two Ed's running around. It's kinda like how Alfons died before Al crossed the gate with his brother, at least that's how i see it. Poor Wrath though, now he'll never be able to work out things with Ed. They were still mostly fighting before they made the trip.

I loved the twins reaction to the possiblity therir father was dead, and Roy's collapse hug with Ed, beautiful emotion. Your writing has come so far from that first chapter of For Her, For Him. It's a joy to read each new chapter and see your writing grow.
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From anapana83 on March 29, 2007
Nice update! This is really progressing. So Frank is in the scene again, wow. Somehow in the back of my mind i didn't think he'd go unmentioned again. Update soon.
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From ANON - Ryoma on March 29, 2007
why did you have to kill off edward i was happy with him being with wrath crys not fair. but other then that i loved this chapter.
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From ANON - The Candy Made Me Do It on March 29, 2007
TT_TT I don't think Wrath is going to be very civil after this... Awesome chapter(s). Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but my computer was going haywire and not allowing me a moment's happiness to review. >w< God, poor Munich!Ed... This is so sad! And Wrath and he were on the rocks, too! I'm glad OUR!Ed is okay, and I think Roy would probably murder a lot of people if Ed wasn't. (Okay, maybe not.)Well, I think that's enough for this morning, hope you update soon. -showers with candy and other bits of happiness- Yea... :3
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From ANON - kuragari75 on March 29, 2007
*breaks down crying* NOOOOO!!!!! WRATH'S BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH!!!! *cries* I'm still reading.... and it's still really good.... but you better make up for this ;).
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From BishounenKrazed on March 29, 2007
okay. i have a hunch that nicholas and aideen, being who they are and all - or more appropraitely, what they are - are going to somehow bring edward back to life. please? i'll give you cookies... *chibi eyes*

i'm so waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter. bring it on asap!!
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From ANON - nette on March 28, 2007
omg *does the happy dance* i got it right! yeeeeeeesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!! i knew it was archer was it last chapter or when u first introduced him with mustang can't remember but i knew it was him *claps happily* i feel so special now XD. can't wait to find out wat happned to wrath and edward, did they make it or was it just stephen/archer? oh dear u must update soon. *ok stops happy dance but continues to smile* :D
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From ANON - kuragari75 on March 28, 2007
O.O wel.... I can't say I was expecting that..... wow! NICE ONE! I seriously did not see that coming!!! and yeah... the way you put it... Stephen seems descent enough... I like him. ;) WEll done!! can't wait to see Ed's reaction. *snicker*
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 28, 2007
*SCREAMS!!* ARCHER?!?! *gasps* Oh shit! I SO did not see that coming!! I don't even remember some of those "clues" happening! Oh hell. I don't know what to say now. too stunned. OH!! GYAH!! Damn you for leaving me hanging not knowing what happened to Ed, Edward, and Wrath!! damn, damn, DAMN!! *bangs on desk* I hate cliffhangers!! GAAH!! *stomps away from computer ranting. comes back only slightly calmer.* Man I am so freakin' wired!! @_@ I'm gonna cry my eyes out if it turns out that someone dies! *gasp* What if Edward didn't survive the crash landing? He and Wrath had just had that awful fight too! *wibble* And I really like Edward too! T_T Oh Jesus God what if one of those damnable Drachman bastards has hurt Ed?!? I can't take it! *sobs uncontrollably*

Whew! I had all this stuff I was gonna say about the last chapter (which I didn't get a chance to review before you posted this chapter. oops! sorry! :D) but it's all flown out of my head now! damn it all to hell! I think I can remember some of it. Let's see now. Oh yeah! There's no way I could forget this one! Ed can feel with his right arm now!! SQWEE!! *happy dances* That made me so happy I was crying like a baby!! It was the sweetest thing when Ed slowly, almost reverently, caressed Roy's face! *melts* LOVED IT!! :D OH! *bangs on desk again. poor desk! :D) I had an epiphany earlier today about Wrath and Edward! Just don't tell my boss that I was daydreaming about fanfics instead of working! *giggle* Bear with me on this one. I made this little list of the couples and characters and how I felt about each of them to try and figure out just why I have the reaction to Wrath and Edward that I do. RoyEd = good, AlWinry = good, RaineFalman = good, WrathEdward = not good. hmm. no help here. try listing characters. After jotting down many names, it hit me when I wrote Envy's name down and got that familiar viceral reaction! Ah ha! It's the fact that Wrath is/was a homunculus and that's the problem! I still see him as that pointy-toothed feral demon child and can't imagine what a gentle soul like Edward could possibly see in him, let alone love him! You can't help but go, "WTF?". It may not mean anything to anyone else but I feel vindicated that I finally identified the problem. :)

The double lemon chapter was, to say the least, HOT!!! XD I, of course, read the whole thing - Wrath/Edward and all! - because I'm determined like that. :) I felt bad for Edward because he felt like he was damning himself just so he could be himself and because Wrath, due to his inexperience, was hurting him. Wrath seems like a giant compared to Edward and that had to be a hard thing to endure! (so many double entendres in that sentence! *giggle* Edward seems child sized in height compared to Wrath and then there's the acceptance/willingness thing...oh never mind! :D) The RoyEd parts were simply delicious! :) Oh, the primary reasons why you got away with having less sex in the last story were because (a) Ed was pregnant and a lot of attention was focused on the babies and all the hell breaking loose everywhere courtesy of the homunculi (damn them) and (b) Roy and Ed were in the process of falling in love, of really getting to know one another, so there was no reason why they would have sex all the time. Now that they're together forever there's nothing to hold them back from going at it 24/7! w00t! ;)

Hurry up and update so I can find out what happened to Ed and Edward! Oh, and Wrath too I guess. ;P I think Stephen is not gonna be accepted for some time to come if at all. His presence is gonna be hell for Roy!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From BishounenKrazed on March 27, 2007
i knew it was archer the minute roy started heading for him. ahaha. i just thought it strange that everyone else has the same name but him. eh, not important, cause that was an awesome twist.

i can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully when wrath and ed (they both better be alive) meet up with roy and ed. and i can believe in archer. if he hadn't have looked so sinister in the anime, i would have thought he was a good guy until he went all psycho. update soon!!
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From ANON - michelle on March 27, 2007
yet once again another term that i don't know. what does rim mean?
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From ANON - kuragari75 on March 27, 2007
*fans self* whoo.... hotness hotness!!!! love the arm thing... that was a good way to move things along for Ed and Roy... and I like that you still have plot going!!! well well WELL done and I can't wait for your next fantastic chapter!! later!
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From BishounenKrazed on March 26, 2007
i find it funny that both eds were having sex at the same time, one rather experienced, and the other... not so much.

anyways, this chapter was hawt and awesome, and i am dying for some answers, so update soon!!
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From ANON - hikaru_9 on March 25, 2007
So the vicious bitch Eckhart strikes again!

I found the Mustang sibling's vanity over their graying hair hilarious btw.

...yeah.. i got nothing...
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 22, 2007
Hey! Raine and I are almost the same age! She's just a smidgen older than me tho! ;) I think she and Falman should give it a go and see what happens. Could be fun! :D That skunk stripe hair is just the worst. poor thing. :) Better her than me! I wonder if Fuery will find someone at the strip club to keep him company! *snerk*

Ed put Roy out of their bed for a whole month?!? Damn. And I thought I could hold a grudge! :) Your description of Ed dressed in all that tan and brown made me think of his outfit from the movie. Movie Ed looked so different from how he'd always looked (all black with that distinctive red coat) in the anime. All that somber brown just seemed to bring out even more the growing hopelessness and loneliness he was feeling. It made me all misty-eyed anyway. Thankfully such is not the case now as he is in a much better place! Swatting Roy on the ass was great!! :D I wished Ed had roughed up that damned would-be assassin tho! grr!! But, with all the little eyes present, such wasn't really an option. dammit. I guess that since he didn't pulverize the guy on the spot that Ed has really grown up a lot and learned self-control. Still woulda been nice if he'd cracked him upside the head just once. *sigh* Maturity is so overrated sometimes! :P LOL!!

I will only say this about Roy and Edward not being together - Fate is a cruel mistress. Fate put Riza and Roy together before Edward even had so much as a ghost of a chance with him. blecch. fickle fate. I could get all catty and blame Riza for everything. Hey, it'd be easy enough to do. It's not like I got all that upset when Amestris Riza died anyway. (ouch. bitchy!) But, whatever. Their not being together is a thorn in my side that I'll just have to put up with though I can't promise I won't grouse about it ever again! :)

It's about time we had some smex around here!!! I can't remember the last time something juicy happened. hmm. Let's investigate. *scans thru previous chapters* Chapter 2. Ed and Roy on Roy's desk. good grief! That was 10 chapters and 7 years of story timeline ago! That makeout session with Wrath and Edward two chapters ago doesn't really count. Man, that's a LONG dry spell! I'm not sure who will enjoy the next chapter more - me or Wrath! :D hmm. Wrath and Edward. *sigh* I'm probably the only one here who finds this pairing to be a tad squicky. I don't know why my stubborn little brain won't wrap itself around this concept. so resistant. just ain't happenin'. dyed in the wool obstinant Roy/Ed fangirl!! :)

auf Wiedersehen herr Hughes. Been nice knowin' ya! Shoulda minded your own business! Man, Eckhart's a bitch! Speaking of bitches, where's Dante been all this time? She's been quiet for far too long and that scares me. The both of them need to be run over repeatedly by freight trains as soon as possible! Death to Eckhart and Dante! *evil laughter* Ah! I'd almost forgotten my rant from so long ago! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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