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By : nomdeplume

From anapana83 on March 14, 2007
Yay, another chap. This was so sweet it almost gave me a toochache. Very nice. Ummm as for names...well, if it's a girl maybe it could be for thier mom, Trisha, or something along those lines. Anyway, good update.
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 13, 2007
SQWEE!! Winry's pregnant!! Al will be the best dad ever! (Not counting Roy and Ed of course!! LOL!!) It was so funny when Ed asked Roy what he thought of there being more little children running around the house and Roy, for a moment, thought Ed was pregnant again!! :D I did laugh out loud when Ed suggested that "Fuhrer Bastard" carry any future children for them! (Love the pet names!!) *dies laughing* The mental image of a very pregnant Roy is hilarious! XD I'd pay money to see that!! :P I had to cheer for Al when he beat the hell out of that little lying would-be assassin! It just goes to show how good a daddy Al will be. Nobody messes with his family! w00t!

Ah, you do love to tug on my heartstrings! :) Being the sucker for fluff that I am (I really am deep down. I just fuss every once in a while!), I practically melted when Ed was sitting with Aideen listening to the radio and, of course, when the kids were in bed with Ed and Roy. *sniff* so sweet! I completely understand Ed's hesitance to teach the kids alchemy after what happened to him when he was still so young and innocent. Hopefully they learn from his example and NEVER do anything like that! It is something they need to know tho. *sigh* poor babies.

I didn't exactly have a heart attack when Edward and Wrath kissed but I did damn near pass out! LOL! It was just so unexpected. I guess in my deluded little mind I thought that since Ed and Wrath had developed a sorta kinda almost relationship (probably more like a truce tho) when Wrath sacrificed himself to the gate to get Al back that I perceived them as being like brothers so, when Edward and Wrath kissed, it was a bit weird for me. A bit too much brotherly love for my taste. :) It's my problem and I'll deal with it. no biggie. I'll just sit back and go with it for now. My other delusion was that I had wondered if there would be anything between Edward and Roy. I kinda knew nothing would happen between them since Roy was apparently happily married to Riza but I couldn't help but wonder if there would be a sense of, I don't know, deja vu maybe?, when they saw each other and be sort of drawn to one another. eh, nothing but a pipe dream. illusion. fantasy. wishful thinking! :) Not to get all transcendental or nothing but what is it called when two people meet and feel like they've known each other since always? It's like their souls remember one another but the people themselves don't conciously know each other. It has a name I know. whatever. Too much philosophy makes my head hurt! :) I do agree with you that Riza would go Lorena Bobbitt on Roy if he cheated on her! LOL!

Last thing I swear! :) You're doing a great job of making me hate, loathe, and despise Dante and Eckhart even more! Opening the gate and sending information thru it?!? GAH!! I can't stand this bitch!!! grr!!! *deep breaths* Ok, I lied. This is the last thing! :) I have no idea for baby names. Riza and Maes are definitely out and I'm thinking that Tricia would be bad too since, even tho Al loves his mother, it was because of her death that Ed and Al began that long road to hell and back for the Philosopher's Stone. That fact alone puts a black mark on the name. a constant reminder. I think ya gotta go with something original. Give the child a name with no history to live up to or to live down.
I'll shut up now! :P
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From ANON - nette on March 13, 2007
trisha if its a girl i think i spelled their mother's name right and if its a boy how about phillip or winston. i dunno im not good wit baby names but those sound ok to me at least. luv the chapters and sorry i havent been able to review, things been a lil hectic for me XD but great job and how did i see that coming wrath/edward i mean great! that was just genius even though i kinda figured that would happen XD. cant wait for the next chapters. gosh so much to say but so lil time. oh one more note...whoooo for al kicking ass i mean whooooo! im glad the twins are ok esp. lil nicholas. XD
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From BishounenKrazed on March 13, 2007
man i had a lot to catch up on! it was so awesome though!! i'm already getting weepy and hysterical from dante's plan to work with the blonde lady, but i keep hope alive knowing that she doesn't know wrath is trying to stop everything.

as for names, i've always been partial to genevieve, either the english or the french pronunciation, for a girl. have no clue for a boy...
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From ANON - kuragari75 on March 13, 2007
okay, I have a feeling Dante and Eckhart are going to open the gate. NOT GOOD!!! at least... It doubt it is. sorry, I don't have any ideas... that's why I'm not writing this ;P! lol, anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on March 12, 2007
O_O
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
im in love with both of your stories....i loved for her. for him. unbelievably so...and i must say i couldnt wait for the sequel...
i was shocked to hear about al and winry having a baby (extremely happy about it though) and im also dreadfully glad that edward and wrath are together ^.^
anyway....as for the names....it sounds as though al would name his child after a famous scientist...like einstein or something....(just an example)....other than that i can only think of things like alex, amelia, raven, domonic, christopher, james, i dont know.....theyre all kind of neh....except alex...favorite name..^.^....i hope it helps a little bit....awaiting another wonderful update! ^.^
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From ANON - Hikaru_9 on March 12, 2007
Hmm.. names for Al's kid... um you could do 'Eric' for a boy or "Lina" for a girl....

I wonder... it Stephen supposed to be Alter!Havoc? It's been bothering me...
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From mistysmysticrose on March 12, 2007
Well if it's a girl he could name her after his mother.
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From TrulyWished on March 12, 2007
James and Katrina are my favorite names. Yay, Dante makes a move. Aren't people strange, to claim actions as their own?
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From ANON - kuragari75 on March 11, 2007
PHEW!!! they're ok! awwwww, That was cute with Ed and Roy when he started crying. HAHA!!! TOLD YOU!!! I KNEW IT!!!! lol, love the chapter and I can't wait to see where this goes!!! later!
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From ANON - Elvish Lady on March 11, 2007
Wow. That was amazing. When Ed began giving out orders and thinking of things that needed to be done and Roy sitting numb I was kind of worried it was almost as if Ed wasn't dealing with it, and then he had the break down. Very well written Lovely. I especially love the twist in the plot with Edward and Wrath. I was wondering if you were going to put Edward and Roy together, especially with Risa being alive. I have to say that I prefer this road better!
Thank you so much!
Elvish Lady
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From ANON - hikaru_9 on March 10, 2007
Ah! I finally got to read the 4 new chapters. I'm so behind on my fanfic reading it isn't even funny.

Love how the plot is moving foward, though i was a little confused whenDante showed up. I suppose we never really did find out what happened to her. I'm also curious as to how she was controlling the suit of armor from the other side.

I was also curious as to when you were gonna have Ed and Wrath 'share affections.' the way you were going, it could have been brotherly, or more, what with lack of family or loss of close family to use to your advantage. okay... i'm gonna go to sleep now, i look foward to the next chapter, and hopefully i'll be able to read it right away like i wan to next time! :D
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 09, 2007
O_O! OH MY FREAKING GOD!! :D Edward and Wrath kissing?!? *jaw drops to floor* I had been thinking for the last little while that there was a certain closeness between Edward and Wrath but the clues were subtle and easily dismissed so I wasn't sure if there was something there or not. Oh wow! I was all, "*gasp* Oh shit! Did that just happen?" I so did not see that coming! :) I thought for sure that when Edward met Roy that there would be sparks between them but, oh man!, when Edward said, "I don't like older men.", I was like, "Oh hell. not good." and then the kiss! O_O Man, you could have knocked me over with a feather! Edward and Wrath. serious relationship or desperate need for human contact. just kinda boggles the mind. damn. whew. wow. It's not a bad thing that you've surprised the hell out of me. I may develop a new interest in the Munich part of the story after all! LOL! ;)

You do realize that you're seriously killing me with this chapter right? I went from panic thinking the babies were gonna die to afraid because Ed didn't seem to react to the situation to fury because that bitch did that to those sweet little innocent babies to the afore mentioned shock/surprise of the kiss to crying my eyes out when Ed finally did break down. Good Jesus! You put me thru all kinds of hell in just one chapter! :D Aideen sounded so pitiful when she woke up and said her belly still hurt. GAH! I can't take it! *cries* poor baby! I just wanna hug her and make it all better! Whew! awesome chapter!! one hell of an emotional rollercoaster! Loved it!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From TrulyWished on March 08, 2007
Poor Ed, he's not very good at handling emotions.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on March 07, 2007
Oh hell no! Oh no she didn't! I forgot all about Dante! dammit! I totally forgot that there was an "old evil" that was gonna come back to haunt Roy and Ed. ARGH! I hate when I do that! :) Those poor babies having to suffer because of that bitch. I hope she hasn't done anything too horrible to them. Oh man! I just thought of something. Now I've got TWO skanks to wish horrible gruesome painful deaths on - Dante and Eckhart. *sigh* I was looking for there to be more action and less fluff and look what I got - two frightened fathers, two sick children, two worlds in danger, and two megalomaniacal biotches. (Hey! Look at the all the twos! freaky. :D) As they say, be careful what you wish for because you just might get it! :D

Oh, before I forget, I really do like the Munich part of the story even tho I almost never mention it except in passing. I'm just a huge Roy/Ed fan and everything else tends to fall by the wayside. I like Wrath and Edward. Wrath was so sweet to try and comfort Edward like that. :) The death of Alfons will hurt Edward so badly. It's a good thing that Wrath will be there to help him, someone to lean on. I hope you forgive me for always calling Wrath Wrath and not Ulysses. Ulysses is just too hard to spell and is just plain awkward. (I had to look back at previous chapters to see how to even spell Ulysses just so I could put it in this review!) Anyway, I wish Wrath the best of luck trying to block the gate. With any luck, Wrath will find out about Dante and ruin all her plans! Ah, sweet revenge! She was as mean as the devil himself to him and deserves ruination. (Eckhart too! :P) Then, Envy can get what he/she's got coming to him/her!! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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