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By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on February 28, 2007
    -points and gasps- Riza and Roy in Munich!... Right? Ohh, yea, now I see... Ha ha, I kind of reviewed before you edited so... -sweat drop- Sweet, then. Creta emissary, creta emissary, Creta- Now I remember that! Ha ha. Wonderful chapter, Wrath seemed rather peeved at the German XD Ha ha
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  • From TrulyWished on February 28, 2007
    It's very interesting, I like it a lot.
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  • From ANON - Kuragari75 on February 28, 2007
    YAY!!! PART TWO!!! Love it so far, but then again, when did I not like you're writing? ;) nicely done and I can't wait for the next chapter! later!
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 27, 2007
    ROFL! Little Nicholas said a bad word! Ed's in trouble now! *giggle* Why is it that kids always know when to use bad words at just the worst possible moment? Ya gotta love 'em tho! :) Roy and Ed dancing with their children was just the best! Ah, I just melted. Gods I've become such a softie! I'm such a sucker for WAFF. The scene where they were getting ready to go to the reception and Ed brushed Roy's hair and then they just embraced one another - another melting moment! I feel a swooning fangirl moment coming on! LOL!

    You only made one little mistake with the Ed/Edward thing. At the end of the first London section, you said, "Ed looked down at the paper with an expression that practically contradicted those words." It's no big deal since you've made it a point to clearly indicate sections of storyline - London and Amestris - so don't worry about it. I know who you meant. :)

    I'm surprised Al and Winry aren't engaged by now. They've been sweet on each other for so long - possibly since when Ed and Roy went to Risembool to get Ed's automail fixed and she realized Ed loved Roy and not her. Hell, probably even be longer than that! :) Wedding bells are definitely in their future!

    I like Edward and Wrath together. Not "together together" but you know what I mean. :) Wrath is really making Edward question the values of his world with that last little conversation they had. Good for him! One thing about Wrath tho, if he is human now why does he still have Ed's arm and leg? Did the gate just change the homunculus parts to human leaving the already human parts alone? Does his new body's skin tone match that of Ed's arm and leg? *grins* There I go being a curious kitty again! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. I understand about Roy's bad back. I'd forgotten how heavy that automail is supposed to be. poor guy. I feel for him now. *hugs Roy* I wish he'd loosen up a bit and take that mask off every once in a while - especially in front of Ed. God knows Ed sees worse than that every time he sees himself in a mirror. *Ed glares at Koneko for hugging his husband. Koneko, unfazed, hugs Ed too! :D*
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  • From ANON - nette on February 27, 2007
    yay! another great chapter. i cant wait to find out wat happens next. i luv the twins. they r so adorable especially lil nicholas. XD/ i wonder wat will happen to wrath and edward and wat about envy. update soon XD
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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on February 27, 2007
    Aww, poor Roy! I feel bad for him and his "image"... Ha ha, stink bomb, Wrath and Edward got 'em good. Those kids are little monkies. They're evil. And that was so adorable, yay, Al and Winry are married! That's the only time I'll EVER accept Winry. Yay, GraciaxHavoc, that's adorable and... NICHOLAS CURSED!! XD That was funny, Ed's in trouble :3
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 27, 2007
    and the plot thickens. well, i imagine at least, since you've mentioned the thule society. and i love the little looks into roy and ed's domestic life. so cute!
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  • From ANON - nette on February 27, 2007
    again i luv this story and this chapter was HOT!. wow roy and ed and office sex what can be hetter than that XD. i can't wait to find out wat happens to wrath and wat's in store for our two fav men. update soon XD
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 26, 2007
    *big grin* I had wondered if Ed would ever get a chance to top Roy! :D very nice! I remember Ed saying that there were many things he'd love to do to his Roy. I'm glad he finally got his wish! :) Roy needs to stop complaining about his age! :) Some of us are well over 30 and still get around just fine thank you very much! LOL! Wearing the old outfit was a nice touch. Ah nostalgia! ;) You've got me curious now about what Ed is going to be researching. He has no need or desire for the Philosopher's Stone. So, what's it gonna be?? huh?? huh?? (Curious kitties can be such demanding creatures! LOL) Something to do with the gate maybe? Speaking of the gate, this is silly I know but, I get so confused trying to keep Ed and alternate-Ed straight. It's not you or anything but, in reading other people's stories, they don't always make clear distinctions between the two. Ed should be called Ed and alternate-Ed should be called Edward. *sigh* There just needs to be some kind of consistency for consistency's sake dammit! *calming breath* Anyhoo, Al and Winry have a little something something going on yes? It's nice to see Wrath making progress in making a life in the alternate world. :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. Glad the Armstrong/Raine thing didn't work out. whew! Neither Roy nor I could have handled that one! :D Yay for Havoc tho! w00t!
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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on February 26, 2007
    -throws fist in the air- THE SMEXINESS!!! Wonderful chapter :D And... Omg, Wrath is not Uncle Hohenheim's nephew?! Bwahahaha! This should be getting interesting. Update soon!
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  • From Niia on February 26, 2007
    Oh no no no! I didn't get to review chaper 1 so I'm doing it now, okay?
    CHAPTER 1
    *hugs you* you're back, and with a new fic, and so soon! The babies are so cute and Ed's like this wonderful teenaged father. And Wrath, I just knew that we would be getting more of that little cutie! The ending line, the fluffu thing, it had me laughing my ass off!

    CHAPTER 2
    Wohooo, another great chapter! And a lemon so soon! But it was hot, like yummy! The reporters were fun, poor Ed and Roy, so much publicity can't be good for the babies! And again, "Uncel Hohenheim" had me laughing. You are just killing me! *and it's a good death* I had almost forgot that Envy couldn't transform in the movie, how true.

    I have a feeling Wrath and Ed&Roy will meet again, as the title suggests, but the plot itself, the adventures and drama.....I SO NEED TO NOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT! Please update soon! *hugs* 4thCry
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  • From dancingpixies on February 26, 2007
    Yay! A sequel! This story great. I can't wait for more!
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  • From TrulyWished on February 26, 2007
    Looking good. Two things: How old is Ed? Cause if Roy is 30, that leaves Ed at 16, unless you changed it somewhere and I missed it. And, a bit over half way down, Ed got hit by Aideen's head, not Raine's.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 26, 2007
    are wrath and hohenheim going to find a way back to their own world? that would be so frickin' awesome! cause i was so very sad when envy killed hohenheim in the movie. (i didn't just ruin that for you, did i? you've seen the movie, right? yeah. of course you have. ^^'') anyway, great chapter, and i look forward to the next one!!
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  • From ANON - nette on February 25, 2007
    i llllllluuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvv this sequel. i see some potential in this one. wrath is so cute and funny i luv his ignorance to wat the older boys want to do to him. ed's life is so un-like him now but that scene wit aideen and him is priceless...i would luv to see a pic of that scowl too cute. cant wait to read more XD
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