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By : nomdeplume

From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 19, 2007
Mmmm! Nothing like a little bondage to keep the sparks flying in the bedroom! woohoo! :D I sympathize with Roy. Sore wrists are why I prefer to be the tie-er instead of the tie-ee but it's fun either way! ;) I just hope he doesn't have bruises. EVerybody knows what you've been doing once they see bruises on both wrists - at least that's what I in my paranoia think everybody is thinking! ;) Naughty Roy popping Ed on his behind like that! *giggle* I'm so glad that Roy is FINALLY gonna get rid of that patch! :) I hate that thing. It just emphasizes the fact that he's missing an eye. Half faded scars are much less noticeable than that God-awful patch. I had all but forgotten Roy and Ed's middle names! Warren. Irving. *snerk* They make me laugh! Hey, did you realize that their initials spell out words? Roy Irving Mustang = RIM. Ed(ward) Warren Elric - EWE. cool! I don't know why but I just love seeing Ed in uniform! He just looks so good in that outfit! Thank goodness there are lots of fan pics out there to satisfy my cravings! :) Roy AND Ed in uniform together = major drool!!

I get the feeling that Nicholas is becoming more and more like his daddy every day as he prefers alchemy that is, as you say, raw and has impressive results. Bonding your hand to stone does draw a fair amount of attention! :) I wouldn't call the boy impatient but he does seem to like more immediate dramatic results.

Amestrisian rocket. hmm. I knew when I wrote that word, Amestrisian, ages ago in a review that it wasn't quite right. So, I dug around in my manga to find the word I wanted. In volume 8, page 146 I believe, Foo, one of Lin's bodyguards, refers to the people of Amestris as Amestrian. Therefore, accepting Viz as the authority on the subject, it should be Amestrian rocket. So, yeah, use whichever you want. Just thought I'd share this little tidbit of info.

I'll have you know that I barely breathed for the last part of this chapter! chimeras! *whimpers and hides under desk* Just imagining those snarls and other awful sounds gave me chills! Those poor soldiers who couldn't get away in time - I cry for you. I was really impressed with Ed's quick thinking and saving his soldiers. He's become a true leader. He could make that horrible choice in that living hell and still be able to keep fighting - something dear sweet-natured Al could never do. God what I wouldn't give to have one or two dozen of those chimera rip Dante to shreds!!! GRRRR!!! I hope Aideen's OK. The little hothead's run off into the thick of things leaving me in panic! *sigh* Maybe she's starting to become more like Ed than Nicholas is. *groan* These two are gonna be the death of me! @_@
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Roy's judging his age based on others huh? "Obsessed much?" Who? Me or him? *giggle* I'm not obsessesed. *looks around guiltily* Really! Not much, just some, a bit, barely noticeable at all. *looks around again to see if anyone believes her bravado* Ok, Ok, I worry over Roy all the time!! There! Ya happy now? *pouts* *sigh* I do feel his pain at text getting hard to read - and I'm already wearing glasses! :) Roy will be cute in glasses. He was wearing them in that pic I sent you. Did you like it? Photobucket is my treasure trove of eye candy! :)
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From ANON - kuragari on May 19, 2007
sorry about not reviewing for a while but my internet's been down. We were moving. anyway, great chapter! I really wanna know what happens to Aideen. I hope she makes it ok and nicholas too! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Hikaru_9 on May 19, 2007
HohShit!! Action, suspense! Mustang family kicking ass!! AND I FINALLY CAUGHT UP ON THIS FIC!!! W00T! I'm sure i havew oodles of things to say, but the cliffy has sucked my brain dry right now... the away message on it reads, "sklfhlasf slkf OMG!!!! gjasofh."
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From SadlerGirl on May 18, 2007
So good
action and cuteness :D!
I do love this story , thanks so much.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 17, 2007
I almost forgot! I found a totally awesome RoyEd pic on photobucket that I wish I could send you! Ed is even wearing a flamel necklace in the photo!! sqwee! I think you'd like it if you saw it. Just thought I'd share.
Koneko =^.^=
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 17, 2007
*smiles* Oh dear. I remember when I turned 30. I think I was razzed the whole day for it too!! :D Everybody just HAD to get in a dig about being old. *sigh* With friends like that who needs enemies! LOL! It's hard to believe that the twins are teenagers already! Time sure does fly by. First kisses, puberty, first little budding relationships. It's no wonder Roy is feeling his age! the poor dear. :) His babies aren't babies any more. :(

I'm surprised that Aideen is having so much trouble with alchemy. I had started to think that there was nothing she couldn't do but I see now that genius does indeed have its limits. If medicine and plant alchemy aren't her thing I wonder what she will try next. It was very sweet of her to give Ed the aloe plants for his birthday. very thoughtful! :) As clever and handy a trick as it might be, I can't imagine why Ed would want to use alchemy to bond himself to stone - unless it would be to smash Dante into little tiny bits! *evil grin* Metal I can definitely see because he could use that to further strengthen his auto mail. very handy in a fight!! :)

A jealous Russell is not a pretty sight to behold! "What I don�t understand is why he ended up with another little, passive guy like Edward." Um. Maybe because he likes that type of guy? jeez! bitchy much? Those comments about Jacob were really uncalled for. I get the feeling that Jacob won't be around for too long anyway. Wrath doesn't seem willing to let him into his life too much so this will probably just end up being a transitional relationship - kind of a testing the waters to see if he's really ready to date again type thing. hmm. If so, Russell might have a chance to make a move on Wrath after all. I'm trying to imagine these two together. It's no more implausible than Roy and Ed are I suppose. The sparks of animosity that flew between Roy and Ed that eventually turned into love could be the same ones flying between Russell and Wrath. Anything's possible! "Screw you, Russell." "You wish." I think you BOTH wish! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I would LOVE to know what it was that Roy whispered in Ed's ear that made him fly mad so quickly! I'd love it even more to know what he said to make him blush like that too!! *giggle* These two are so adorable together!! RoyEd forever!!!! XD
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From SadlerGirl on May 16, 2007
awwwww all the fluff so cute.
Hard to think of Ed being 30 (makes me feel old) Poor Roy.
I love the relationships, the foundation you are keeping. You have such a way with the facts and the back story. When they get to lab and Dante finally pulls her Tucker created army *shudder* out of hiding it will be bad. But chapters like these are great as well. Its 3 am if I am rambaling i am sorry I just had a feeling I would see a new chapter so I have been checking before bed. So cute and sweet I just love this story.
thanks for the quick updates they really are a great thing.

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From SadlerGirl on May 13, 2007
Thanks for fixing it. I will be reading it until the *sniffle* end (not that I ever want it to end)
I love the way your stories flow I would gladly read more stories you've written.

Kain and Frank are just so cute. You know I have totally distanced Frank from Archer at this point, That's how much I just love frank. I think they are one of my most favorite couples. They work so well off each other.

I am glad Wrath has Russell at least he won't be mopey the apple strudel was just perfect.

I really love how Roy was enlightened to how Ed was as young as their kids are now when he talked him in to the army , and now feel guilty.

Can you tell I just loved the whole thing.
Great Great Great!
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 13, 2007
Umm. Where's the story? One month later...what? Oh well, I'll just throw out a few comments on the previous chapter. Kain and Frank would make awesome parents. That's some powerful love Kain's sisters have for him to offer themselves up to make him having a family possible! :) Dante will wish she had never been born if she tries to hurt Aideen in any way!! There's more than enough people willing to grind her into dust if she does anything! grr!! Especially Ed when he thought about "how far he'd go without remorse"!! That's what I'm talking 'bout!! w00t!! It really hurts that Pinako is gone. *wibbles* She was a tough old lady who didn't take nothing from nobody. Rest in peace, Grandma Pinako. *cries* GAH!! Shou Tucker, the whispering chimera!! *runs and hides* Dante wants an army of chimeras?!? Tucker's gonna create a homunculus?!? *hugs self while shivering and cowering in a corner* Oh, I am afraid now. Things just went from bad to worse. *cries*
Update soon! (and maybe figure out what went wrong with chapter 33! :D)
Koneko =^.^=
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From SadlerGirl on May 13, 2007
Um Sweetie I think something went wrong with the post. I was so happy to see the next chapter(this chapter) and it just isn't there.
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From ANON - dancingpixies on May 12, 2007
yay another chapter...demo...there is a problem..unless my eyes/compy don't like me.
All the page showed for the chapter was this:

"Disclaimer: I don't own the characters and I don't profit

A/N: SadlerGirl, glad you're still reading. I've tried really hard to get the relationships the characters have right. Kuragari, definitely not good. Next chapter you should know how bad a combo it is.

Chapter 33

Exhausted Progressp>

One month later"

Is it me or did the site itself or you messed up? Nah, I kid. I still await for the next chapter. I've been hooked since started reading For Her. For Him. and I still can't wait for each chappy. You should have a plot twist (As either a companion or mini series) to this one, which would happen during this etc. ^_^
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From Kuragari75 on May 12, 2007
*shudder* Dante and a willing Tucker.... somehow not a good combonation. XD love the story! as always! later!
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From SadlerGirl on May 11, 2007
Another great chapter. So real and human , I love how everyone reacts and interacts. Poor Ed . Roy and Wrath, Dante showing up is going to be so hard on all of them.
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 09, 2007
*long loud uncontrollable wailing sobs* Carlida!! Noooooo!! WHAAAAAAAA!! *throws self on floor and bawls* My own kitty of 17 years passed away barely a month ago and it's all coming back now! *great lamentations* Auntie Pinako too?!? I can't take it!! *curls up in a corner and mourns pitifully*

*still sniffling* With all the different types of alchemy Aideen knows, she's becoming a bit of a jill-of-all-trades! Plant alchemy, medical alchemy, alchemy in general - there's no telling what this girl will grow up to be! Nicholas is no slouch either taking on the task of figuring out Wrath's weird abilities. Ah prodigies! Gotta love 'em! :) They make the rest of us normals seem so ordinary. ;) What it must be like to be that brilliant...

I agree with you about Russell. Russell was and is an annoying arrogant bastard who worked my nerves almost as bad as than that cursed wretched despicable damnable abominable Envy!!!! (Can you tell that of all the homunculi I detested this one the most? *grins*) Falman's daughter is a royal bitch. She's gonna be pure hell to be around once those hormones start raging! I feel for ya, "Grandma" Raine! *giggle*

Look at the little prodigies go!! :) Not only did they sense the Gate opening (a "how-the-Hell-did-they-do-that?" moment for me!) but with just a clap of their hands they were able to analyze the rocket and its contents and cool it down so it wouldn't explode! Smart little dickens aren't they? :) Favorite line: "Who's Dante?" D'OH!! *falls over with loud thud* Out of the mouths of babes. Nicholas my dear, your naivete is in for a rude awakening. The poor dears! *hugs Aideen and Nicholas*

I'm glad Dante's feeling the pressure! Her rotten old ass is going down!! w00t!! And OMFG!! Is this "old friend" of Dante's who would "jump at the offer of a real-life speaking, moving doll of his daughter" who I think it is? Are you bringing Shou Tucker in to help Dante?? OH MEIN GOTT!! That freaky SOB scares the hell out of me!! It's the whispering, man!! It creeps the bejesus out of me!! EEP!!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From SadlerGirl on May 09, 2007
Awwww Carlida and Pinako how sad.As usual great in depth story.
Valto a grandpa and Raine a kind a step granny. How sweet except the whole daughter hates her thing. I am glad you are keeping Raine and Valto in the forefront .
I actually felt sorry for Russell his first date in months and
Eckarthad to mess it up. Dante as a foe is never a good thing So I am sure it will be as interesting as it has been so far.
Thanks so much for the quick updates You always are fast .
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