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By : nomdeplume

From BishounenKrazed on May 08, 2007
would that be tucker? i can't quite remember if he died or not. anyway, this was a good chapter. i'm sad about pinako, and i'm sad for ed who just lost a member of his family and now he'll get word about dante. *sighs*

and that little thing about wrath ignoring russell after the blond kissed that girl... was he jealous, or was that just wrath being very interested in the metal thingy? well, can't wait for the next chapter!
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From Kuragari75 on May 08, 2007
O.O Tucker's coming back isn't he? DANG IT!!! well, keep doing a great job!! can't wait for the next chapter! later
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From Kuragari75 on May 07, 2007
YAY! I love this! it's getting really good... not that it wasn't good before, but it's getting amazing ;)! can't wait for the next chapter.
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 06, 2007
LOL!! I love Ed's revenge!! Take that, Ms Polce, and don't call back!! ;) Love it, love it, love it!!! Bet the old biddy thinks twice before she dials that number again!! I don't know what it is but it is fun to mess with people on the phone - especially when they're (a) talking to someone you don't give a damn about or (b) someone you know you can mess around with! :D [side note: Telemarketers are LOTS of fun to mess with!! *evil giggles* But I digress! ;)] It was awfully nice of Frank to give Roy that can of salve! One would think that after 10 years of marriage that either Roy or Ed would have discovered it before now - especially the way these two go at it!! Like rabbits indeed! :D

I'm glad Wrath finally got his voice back and Ed's reaction to realizing it was typical for him. "Holy shit! You�re talking!" *giggle* So much for not cussing in front of the kids!! :D I am slightly confused on one thing tho. If Wrath is completely human now, why did his body try to merge with the cobblestones when he got near the Gate? I thought he was only capable of doing that when he was a homunculus. I remember when it happened before in Munich and it seemed strange then too. Why and how is he still able to do that?

I'm hoping that Mustang will be the one to help close the Gate. (Remember: Mustang - Munich, Roy - Amestris. It's my own personal logic that more than likely makes no sense to anyone else and is probably more complicated than it needs to be. Same as Edward, Frank - Munich and Ed, Archer - Amestris. *sigh* moving on...) Mustang seems to be the only one who would be willing do it. If he does end up helping our side (i.e. the Amestrisian side. I SOOO just made up that word! There has to be a way to use Amestris as an adjective, right? *sigh* And look at me - "our" side. I just went and involved myself in this! :D) then the Gate can finally be closed and everyone saved! No one has to go thru the Gate to do it! yay!! Eckhart *wipes tongue to rid it of the foul taste that name leaves* will be furious enough to kill him but, Lord willing, he'll escape and she will bite the big one!! YES!! I like it!! I wonder if in the fallout of Mustang's betrayal (here I go assuming things again!) if he will suffer an injury much like Roy's. hmm... Oh gee, if the Gate closes Hohenheim can't come back to Amestris. What a shame that would be - NOT!!!! *evil grin*

It's true. Roy and Ed's lives haven't ever really been normal. "Normal" is just a matter of perspective tho really. *smiles and shakes head* pausing in the middle of sex to draw an array. Only you Ed! :) Hey! Since I involved myself in this drama earlier, count me in to help carry that burden too!! ;) w00t!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From SadlerGirl on May 06, 2007
I love this chapter.
I have been trying to find the proper way to say you do such cute lemons, It still sounds funny as I type it. For her and for him didn't have a lot , seemed to always make it all the more sweet when you do add them.

I am really feeling sorry for the Roy of our world, he really needs Frank.

I like your Fletcher and Russell better any other version out there including the anime. I never really liked them I guess I am just weird :/.
I really like yours.

On good days, he decided that meant those jobs weren�t part of the �wifely� role, and on bad days, he at least felt a step more manly than Al.
I just love that way too Ed and cute.
Thanks again for the great story and all the time you put into it.
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From BishounenKrazed on May 05, 2007
i had some catching up to do. but this is certainly getting interesting. and oh, that little scene between russel and wrath...! no, he didn't stop loving edward, no! sure, maybe russel's right that edward wasn't wrath's true love or soul mate, but that doesn't mean he stopped loving him!

and what does whats-her-face hope to gain by having all those men try to learn from dante's info? i guess they could learn it if you wanted them to, though... dammit, i hate bad guys. anyway, i look forward to the next update.
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From Malcara on May 05, 2007
OMG!!!! are the ppl in the real world place gonna be good guys or bad guys?? and yay!! wrath is getting over edward! now that he's working with russel i think they'd be a good pairing.......man this story has the most unusual pairings ever and yet they work so well.......i can't wait for an update!! ^^
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 03, 2007
Kimblee, Armstrong, Mustang, and Shou friggin' Tucker. Damn. What a bunch of losers! A "bishop" (WTH?? talk about giving the Church a bad rep!), a miner, and two right damnable bastards! (In my head, I refer to this world's Roy Mustang as Mustang and the Amestris Roy Mustang as Roy. It helps me to keep them straight much like with Ed and Edward. It doesn't matter to me how the others are referred to as I don't particulary care for them. ooo! bitchy! :D) Eckhart *blecch!* really doesn't give a damn who she uses as long as she gets what she wants. damn bitch. I guess since you've teased me for 29 chapters now that it was time that the psycho bitches finally made their grab for power. I've been dreading this like the plague *cries* but part of me is pleased that the opportunity to eliminate these two has finally come!

It worries me that there will need to be someone on the other side of the Gate helping Ed et al so as to finally close the damn thing. Who will it be? Who will be a hero and turn their back on Eckhart and save the day? *gasp* Oh damn! Here's a horrific thought!! Will someone from Amestris have to cross the Gate to BE that someone to help close the Gate? *shivers* I don't even wanna think about that!! *cries*

*still pouting* Yeah, I know. Everybody's gotta age and change, grow old and *winces and cringes* eventually die. *sobs wildly* GAH! Now I've gone and totally depressed myself again! WHAAAAAA! *throws self on floor and has a royal temper tantrum* I am hoping that Aideen kicks Dante's ass as a bit of revenge for when Dante threatened Aideen before she was even born. mmmm! I like this idea! I hope Wrath gets a crack at her too for how she treated him. Hell, everybody deserves to stomp her ass and I hope she is utterly destroyed in a blaze of alchemical annihilation! MWHAHAHAHA!

I'm glad Wrath finally got his voice back! Well, more like found the will to speak that is. I'm not really sure if I like Russell or not even tho he was a big help to Wrath. There's just something about him that rubs me the wrong way. He seems very suspicious like he's got a hidden agenda or something. He's arrogant and condescending as hell that's for sure! Obviously it took someone with this attitude to make Wrath admit the ugly truth and regain his voice. Wrath should still punch his lights out for speaking so poorly of the dead! poor Edward! *cries* poor Wrath too! Now he has to relive it all and somehow make peace with it in order to move on. How does one get absolution from the dead anyway?

Loved the little PDA interaction between Roy and Ed!! Roy is completely shameless groping Ed like that and I'm lovin' every minute of it!! Ed's not really much better since he blew Roy practically right in front of the prime minister! *giggle* They're totally perfect for one another!! Can't wait to see how Ed ups the ante!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From SadlerGirl on May 03, 2007
This was really great, thanks for the warning of little Roy Ed ;).
Seriously Great addition to the plot. Kimblee and Tucker back wow.

Poor Wrath losing his voice over the guilt of falling out of love with Edward that was just so incredibly sad. I am glad Russell got him to talk.

You are amazing , I love this so much. You really do update quick
I can't wait until the next chapter
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From Kuragari75 on May 03, 2007
and the plot thickens!!!!!!!!! getting really interesting!!! can't wait for an update! later.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 02, 2007
Sorry I didn't get a review in on last chapter. Technical difficulties on my end. *grumbles and grouses* I just 'love' my PC! :P Seriously, all I was gonna say about last chapter was that this growing up stuff is depressing the hell out of me! I know, I know. I've complained about it before (obsessive much? :D) but it really does bother me. Maybe I just don't want to think of Roy and Ed getting old. Hell, now that I think about it, Roy's just slightly older than I am! Oh damn, that's a sucky thought. Now I'm all sad again! WHAAAAA! *runs off and cries in a corner*

Whew. enough of that! :) Where was I? Oh yeah! The kids. Aideen was adorable when she blushed at her first crush!! KAWAII!!! Don't worry, Roy. You won't end up related to Armstrong. Few, if any of us, ever marry our first crush. :) Roy's reaction, "Ed, I don�t care if they don�t make them, I�m going to make a bra that locks", cracked me up!! poor guy! :) wanting to barricade her away from the entire male population for many many many years! Gotta love him for it tho. :) He knows what he did back in the day and doesn't want her to ever have to deal with someone like he was. It takes one to know one!! ;)

The scene with the photos was great! Personally, I don't like those candid shots. UGH!! I had an uncle who loved them and constantly kept a camera handy to catch all those moments you'd just as soon forget! :) I think I know the photo you're talking about where Maes and Breda are holding Ed up. I can't remember where I've seen it but it sounds familiar. The reminiscing of Riza did bring a tear to my eye! so sweet! :)

When I asked you last review why Roy rolled down the window, I was referring to when everyone was already out of the car and talking to reporters; not when he put down the partition after they got back in the car to go home. Ed and Roy got out of the car and talked to the reporters, Nicholas urged a crying Aideen out of the car, the reporter asks her a question, Roy tells her she doesn't have to answer it and then, somehow, rolls down the window. ?? It just seem odd, not mention impossible, for him to do that when no one was in the car.

What's up with the Tringhams? Why do they want Wrath? Could they act more suspicious? It was nice seeing Ed and Al traveling together again! Fortunately under much better circumstances this time around!! I liked how you explained away the armor. Shame Al couldn't have been somewhere else so Roy and Ed could have a bit of special alone time!! :D I was cheering Roy when he shamed the teacher! YAY!! What an idiot she was! She totally got pwned!! LOL! He can't help it if his kids are prodigies! (like their daddy!!) I feel bad for Frank. I wish that had gone better for him. poor guy. It's hard to have a dream shattered. Frank and Kain are cute together tho! :) I think I read the line "Lothian, Scotland" four times. ??? It didn't sink in at first that we'd jumped back to our world and that this was a different Armstrong. I wondered why he was covered in coal dust. (That's dangerous stuff that dust. It killed my grandfather.) I shudder to think what the Thules want with him.

Well, enough out of me. God I ramble too much! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From SadlerGirl on May 01, 2007
That was great! Poor Frank to find out his dad who's image he has worship for so long is such an ass. He was sweet to his mom.

I have always had such a hate for Archer but I must confess I just adore him in this. I love the fact that Kain is so strong the whole bit about him being happier on top was priceless.

I just loved the whole thing .
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From ANON - dancingpixies on May 01, 2007
yay, another chapter! **glomps**

I've been reading the sequel since you started on it. I like the Frank and whatshisname pairing..different..but I like it. At least it's with the [i]other[/i] archer and not the "real" archer of the FMA's world.

BTW, I think he was a bastard on For Her. For Him...^_^ I like this Archer better though.

Keep up the great work.

Stupid question - Is the other twin gonna get a paparazzi's scoop like Aideen did? That would be funny if something happened to him like Aideen did and her and Ed going shopping for training bras..**giggles at the plan the twins did**
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From Kuragari75 on May 01, 2007
lol, love Al making sure Roy knew he was in the hotel too. YAY! love the chapter! later!
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From SadlerGirl on April 30, 2007
I am so sorry I have been meaning to tell you for ages how incredible this is.
I love this story I swear I check for updates with my late night coffee every night.
It just flows so nicely, I loved the first one as well. For her and for him was just stunning.
I love that you still have references to Riza . Honestly I am not a Roy Riza fan , but I love that you really had a period of mourning and the twins know about her.
I look forward to each chapter you post.
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