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Reviews for Possessions

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - jsinuyasha on September 04, 2007
    great chapter!!! i love this fic, plus--u kno, broli and goku don't seem that bath together lol--i still like goku/vegeta but u kno...its ok to keep an open mind lol but yeah great to see this fic again--peace!!
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  • From ANON - FOxxy Jones on September 03, 2007
    Thank you for updating! Cannot wait for the next enthralling chapter!
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  • From ultistarmon on September 03, 2007
    Yes, you're finally continuing this story!!! I actually kinda like Broli. Sometimes I wonder just what is father did to him to make him that psychotic. I mean, no one is born evil, they just get that way after a while.
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  • From ANON - Xx ChiChi xX on September 03, 2007
    My gosh, Firefly! As if I haven't said it enough - I LOVE YOU! Not only is this story filled with delicious VegeGoku action, but BuroGoku as well! -:: Tackles you and smothers you in love. ::- :D :D :D :D

    I love how Buroli handles Goku. It's so ..baaad....but in a good way. XD If that made any sense at all. AND YES. Angry Vegeta! I don't really like it when people make Vegeta...sad..>>; and sobby...when Goku goes with Buroli. No, no, no. If someone takes Goku away, Vegeta gets MAD and kicks ass! Which he seems more than ready to do in this last scene.

    My favorite part of the bath scene was when Vegeta told Goku not to say fuck anymore. Haha, he's right, words like that shouldn't be coming out of Goku - but after all that Goku's been though..>>; can't blame him for talking dirty.

    UPDATE SOON! Super soon! Reaaallllyyy ssuupppeeerrr ssoooooonn. ... =3 Please.
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  • From Achillona77 on July 30, 2007
    this is good, but i hope the issue is resolved soon.

    as for brolli: kill the bastard! very painfully and very slowly.

    he's truly evil.


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  • From ANON - clarissa on July 21, 2007
    not done i want to c what happens w/ goku,vegeta and broli. continue writing more i'm interested.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on July 17, 2007
    In chapter 7 I would love to see Brolly use a lot of his force in power to make everybody submit to him and I want a rape scene the kind that would of happened in chapter 5 in the woods.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on July 17, 2007
    Please update soon. i love to see this story finished during summer break! Brolly is such a cool character now.
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  • From ANON - HowlerFire on July 03, 2007
    I really hope you update this one! I LOVE it...fantastic plot...just...god wow. WOW. The story is amazing thus far and I screamed when I found out that chapter six isn't the end >< WAH! Please update it! I love your writing, absolutely amazing! Plus the pairing is just...wow XD
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  • From ANON - clarissa on June 20, 2007
    write more very interesting chapter u had me hooked the first chapter. very good not a very easy thing to do by the way i'm very picky when it comes to reading bot neways keep going.
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  • From ultistarmon on June 11, 2007
    You know, now that my hentai mind has had time to think about it, I wouldn't mind seeing some BrollixVegeta action. Maybe even all three. Now that would be HOT! Another thing, just how old are Trunks and Goten? Will Videl show ever show up? Will you be putting SS4 in the story? Anyway, hoping the next update comes soon!!
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on June 10, 2007
    bwoah. :) broly . i knew it! i never liked broly. no matter if he is able to speak or not. ( i prefere not, though *g* ) i really hope, that goku or vegeta , or both, will stop him soon. even if i was thrilled by the fact that you let vegeta wish the pack back. including even broly i have to confess. :) oh and it was a quite clever explanation you´d given geta to do so! explanations like that are always very helpful. at least for me, they´re. i really appreciated it, if someone cares about such things. it´s just nice and yah, as i said, helpful.^^ it forms everything what already had happened and what will happen next, in my opinion.
    this story is quite interesting written so far and also surprising in a way, after i´ve read already other stories from you. it seems that you´re very flexible and also experimentically / creative. i think thats excactly the reason why i already like your ff´s so much. and i do a lot! sooo, i hope you´ll update `Possessions` soon, if you find time and sense to do so. please, keep on!
    baibai. :D

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  • From ultistarmon on May 06, 2007
    I forgot to give my email address when I told you to contact me. Ooops, I'm such a scatter brain at times. Anyway, my email is ultistarmon@hotmail.com ! Drop me a note if you need any help.
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  • From ultistarmon on May 01, 2007
    How about you make Raditz and Turles useful? They always struck me as a schemers, but they lose their tempers too much. With Goku there to calm everybody down they could think up all sorts of things. When will we see Bulma and the rest? Also, you never explained how Goku separated from Chichi and got with Vegeta. Think of what nasty inventions Bulma could come up with to bring Brolli under control. A new and improved version of that thing Paragus used. While I'm thinking about it, why couldn't Paragus come back to life? Was it because, he didn't die on Earth like the others? Flashbacks aren't a bad thing, you just have to do them right. I wouldn't mind seeing some BrollixGoku action, but BrollixVegeta is a different story. Brolli could focus just on Goku for now, after all Goku is the one he really wanted. Combined the Z-warriors could possibly take Brolli down or better yet lets see Gogeta. Are you going to include that whole mental bond thing? If you do, you could use the fusion to straighten out the mess Brolli made when he marked them. There are tons of things you could do with this story. The most important thing is to do what you like and do it well. Anyway, I like it a lot and if you need more help with ideas send me an email. UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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  • From ultistarmon on March 31, 2007
    Yes, we are horribly impatient aren't we?! We probably should be more considerate and understanding. However, you're just so good at writing that we just want more. Then again if you were a bad writer then we would bug you about that. Mmmmm, the age old problem of speed vs. quality. Do your best and be quick about it and we shall reward you with lots and lots of praise and thanks. So in light of that, great work and update soon. Your truly devoted fan.
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