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Reviews for The Forgiven

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Heather: aka Yaoi_girl69 on March 15, 2007
    Gah! The angst the crushing angst! Yeah I get you about seeing a fav character die. It's like a tooth ache that you push at to make it hurt more. Then when you stop and the pain gets less, the relief fells even better.

    The ending was really good. I love the part where Roy confesses his love to Ed. The part where the fake Roy and Alphons turn in to bad guys was kind of confusing though. Were they the doctors that were holding Ed? Was he dreaming all that because they were giving him drugs? I think the part where it goes from Ed dreaming to Hawkeye waking him up needs to be a little clearer, but otherwise it was very clever.

    *Runs off to look for fluff*
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  • From TrulyWished on March 13, 2007
    *pout* sad! Very nicely written though, an original idea for sure.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 13, 2007
    *sobs uncontrollably* That was the saddest thing ever!! I completely fell apart when Roy said he loved Ed just before he died! *more wailing and sobbing* I have no idea what you meant by "let's see if you can see where this is going" or why Ed was being brainwashed or why Roy sacrificed himself or why Riza thinks that "when this is all over, whether we win or lose this battle, we will all be forgiven" or what this sad feeling of losing a favorite character being good is all about. Guess I'm just not that smart. All I know is you've broken my heart. *cries* Oh poor Roy! Nomme de Plume was so mean to you!! *whimpers* T_T
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on March 13, 2007
    Rooooooooooy! No! -sobs-






    ... loved the story, by the way
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