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Reviews for Obsidian and Lavender

By : Reigsihn
  • From TracyGirard on March 31, 2011
    Your story was ok but your spelling and pronounciation need tremendous help. Spell check would help with the spelling.
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  • From suzie on May 04, 2007
    if you need a beta email me ...
    other than that this is a great story

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  • From shevien on April 22, 2007
    apart from the grammer errors, i loved it!
    cute and hot^_^
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  • From Veggiefan2 on March 15, 2007
    I have to say, that was alright. Not great, because I couldn't really enjoy it because of all the grammatical errors. But, you have some talent, and I suggest you find a beta reader so that talent will show out more. This fic was kind of cute but it wouldn't have killed you to add paragraphs and seperate the dictations. Anyway, it was good over all, all you have to do is fic the spelling errors and you're good to go!
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