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Reviews for Damaged Souls

By : Tyrana
  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 27, 2008
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww =(
    That's so sad!!!!!!
    I really do love the way you write, Tyrana.
    I laughed when you said you dont have as good a grip on the english language as you'd like- you have a better grip than me, and English is the only language I know!!!
    Fantastic story...will there be more?
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  • From ANON - Devoted on April 27, 2008
    I am amazed at how beautifully you write. Your style is flawless and unique and you give the characters a depth and complexity that makes them appear so real, so alive. It is a rather rare thing to find such quality in the fanfiction world so please do not abandon this magnificent work of art. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on June 09, 2007
    hey ^.~ *HUG*
    that was great! *-*

    but...
    gohan...
    no. *cries* >.<

    i get a little bit worried about vegeta either,
    as goku had enjoyed the sight of his hands around the princes throut.
    (one never know ^^ )
    but youŽve done a wonderful and great job with this chapter , as always!!! ^^
    i really like the passion you lay in this story. and
    you described especially goku very well again. you know i really admire
    the way you characterise him.
    what i mean is, that you never stay at the sureface, you let me see
    inside his heart by describing him the way you did.
    i like it when i can take a deeper look in a charakter.
    heck no. i love it! :) felling the pain, felling the desperation and
    everything...Žjust love it! d^^b
    soo, please keep on, cant wait for the next chapter! *HUG*

    PS: umm.just to inform you.i think that youŽve already seen that i am currently not at deviantart. so i cant do club challenges, writing comments and such things. i had been suspendend ^^°°
    / ha! oh joy/ but i dont really care much, though. ^^ no big deal. not at all. :) actually i only had have a little..."conversation"... with a "nice" girlie, with high level morals and an obviously serious head-damage, about my pictures. xD she reported my pictures to the DA Admins. heck, i really didnt believe, that they really would delete them. still donno why theyŽve done it exactly. or maybe THATS the reason, why i had been suspended at all. that i am an intentionally pervert, imean. who knows. *giggle* ^.~ but well. the pictures werent hurting anybody or something and i had have chosen the mature contend... ~.~ ngaah,whatever! ^.~ as iŽve said, i dont know really when iŽll be back thats all what i wanted to say. but weŽll see us around, right? ^3^ mail, here, doesnt matter when and where iŽm positive, weŽll. :) *hug* sooooo, hun. to cut off my own babbling about not really important things, let me end with this: please keep on writing!!! i just love the passion inside your stories and i am just enyoing to read them!!! i am looking for the next chapter!!! Please update soon, i f youŽll find the time!

    take care! *hug* see ya! ^3^
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  • From kitkit on June 08, 2007
    wow ths story is very emotional
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  • From ANON - Irol on March 19, 2007
    wow the end of this was intense! very very well done!
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  • From CrimsonTide on March 18, 2007
    Wow... This is quite different. I'm so glad you didn't throw a full lemon in at the end of this chapter. That would have been a little odd considering the situation, but you stayed true to the emotions one would feel at a time like that and everything stayed believable. Bravo!

    There's one thing that's bothering me though. A few times you used the term 'spitted'. I'm not sure that's a word ^.^; I believe you meant to say 'spat'. There were also a few sentences in there that didn't make sense with the way you worded them, but it wasn't a big deal.

    Otherwise, you did a wonderful job! It's clear you put a lot of time and effort into this story and I'm itching for more! Your skills are top notch!
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