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Reviews for Sometimes it hurts

By : Salza
  • From ANON - Amaniachwen on April 11, 2009
    This fic makes me happy. The scene in the cave was my favorite. : )
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  • From VampireHaku on March 29, 2008
    Awww I usually hate first person fics, but this was so sweet! I really loved it, you do a great Piccolo. I want more of these two!!
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  • From dreamsofcrows on October 30, 2007
    this is actually really cute- I like the cave+sogy clothes+goku's head part. cute. nicely done ^^
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  • From kgemeni on June 08, 2007
    Wow. It touched me very deeply, the gradually build up of emotion in Piccolo's narrative. He's my favorite character, too, and the story just about him and Gohan and Goku is my favorite part of the whole series.
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  • From nahleili on March 29, 2007
    This is really excellent. I dont think its rambly at all.
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  • From ANON - SonSofia on March 27, 2007
    Wow. You know, I wasn't even going to read this but I took a look anyway and sure am glad I did. It's great. I love Piccolo's introspective and the plot is lovely. Man, it actually left me speechless , luckily I can type ;)
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  • From ANON - SonSofia on March 27, 2007
    Wow. Oh man, you know, I wasn't even going to read this but I took a look and sure am glad I did. It's great. Lovely plot and all. I am just about speechless, luckily I can type. ;)
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  • From Pixelgoddess on March 27, 2007
    You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite Piccolo writers. :) I love how Pic thinks and thinks, his thoughts just whirring him around, but his feelings remain something he either cannot acknowledge or doesn't understand. Great simple moments without an overload of drama or any resolution.
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  • From ANON - Lina on March 27, 2007
    WAAAAAAA!!!!! It's such a beautiful story!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE NOT FINISHED!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!
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