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Reviews for A New Life

By : CrimsonTide
  • From miezekatzi on May 08, 2007
    Hi!
    I just came across your story and I really like it very much.
    I'm really happy for Goku that he slowly starts to um ... heal (? - please excuse a poor girl whose mothertongue was unfortunately NOT English) and I am really looking forward to reading how Vegeta will make his fears go away *cheers them on while waving a 'Go Goku'n'Veggie'-Flag*
    I like reading stories with a bit (or a bit more) angst ^^, although I'm a hopeless Happy-End-Lover :)

    I hope you'll update soon, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

    Greets, Simone

    PS: I've always wondered why you say angst (so the german word) to a fearful story - I somehow couldn't help but notice as my REAL mothertongue (which sadly isn't English) is German :)
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  • From YamisAkuchan on May 07, 2007
    sweet nice this is coming along real good
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  • From mikuplantman on May 06, 2007
    Wow. This is exelent so far! I usually don't read Dragonball Z fan fics but yours sounded really good. I'm glad i've read this now. I can't wait to see future chapters! Keep up the good work! xx
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  • From Martine on May 05, 2007
    yay a new chappie!!! and today was such a bad one, but that made it mucho better. I wanna know what's in the bag. And Veggies in fear of sounding like he really LIKES Goku, hehehehe yay!!! Another good chappie, looking forward to the next!
    Your valient follower, snuggles, K.F.F.
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  • From Bunnykakarot on May 05, 2007
    I love this story, You surely did a great job. I think you deserve a grammy award for this
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  • From princessoftennis on May 05, 2007
    I am really impressed with this story. I haven't read a DBZ fanfic in ages and I decided that I wanted to get back into it. Sadly to say I was little disappointed with some of the stories that I read here so far, but when I started reading your story I couldn't stop reading. I love how you developed the plot and I can't wait to see what happens to Goku and Vegeta in the end. Keep writing.
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  • From YamisAkuchan on April 30, 2007
    I like it good story
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  • From Martine on April 28, 2007
    OMG I will come and take your finals for you, no promises on passing though lol, if it means a new chappie sooner. hehehe, me like a cocky Vegeta hehehe. Obviously Goku has some issues that need to be worked out, and I'm sure Vegeta will be a GREAT help hehe. Look forward to the next chappie!

    snuggles, K.F.F.
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  • From Veggiefan2 on April 23, 2007
    Hello there!!! What's shaking, Ms. Amazing? And by that I mean, what's going on with this wonderful fic here? I am dying for you to update and can't wait for more. You're very funny. I love your silliness through it all, even on the particularly distressing topic of Goku selling his body to support his demon bitch wife's gold-digging habit. Here are some of my favorite quotes that had me rolling with laughter:

    Goku glared at her. “You have a source of income. I suggest you put on something nice and hit the city streets. Prime hours are between nine and eleven. Have fun.”

    Vegeta looked back at his companion with a hint of amusement on his face. “Baka. I visited the woman’s wallet before we left. It’s covered.”

    ...among others.

    Thanks for writing such a nice fic, I most certainly look forward to more when you can update and hope that the next chapter is as good as the last.


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  • From Martine on April 22, 2007
    YAY!!! Comments back for my reviews make me happy lol. Anyways, Vegeta threating people for Goku is cute haha. Plus, i like fire. haha, jerk deserved it, and well, we really don't want to get started on ChiChi. Her name alone gives me a headache. Anyways, another good chappie and can't wait till the next. Much Love!!!

    Snuggles, K.F.F.
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  • From AkitoSouma on April 22, 2007
    I love this story sooo much! It is so rare to find a good yaoi DBZ fic, especially one with my favorite pairing (Vegeta/Goku). Usually when people write them they make them into completely mindless, lustful people incapable of even using correct grammar when they converse with one another. I am so pleased with this ("A New Life") because it has a lot of heart and it shows sides of the characters that we are only given brief glimpses of in the show. I love the tense but loving relationship between Goku and Vegeta and you have done an excellent job of capturing that here. By the description I thought the story would be stupid, but something told me to give it a chance--and I am so glad that I did! The plot is actually wonderfully exacted, and the story itself is very well written. I did think there was some character-bashing going on with Chichi and I don't necessarily agree with that--I certainly don't like the woman, and I think there's a small possibility that she might actually stoop as low as she does in this story, but still, I think if that were to happen she would be a little more clever and manipulative rather than outright abusive all the time. Calling him a filthy monkey seemed a little bit unrealistic; I think Chichi does love Goku in her own way although she definitely doesn't treat him right, and I can't ever see her going so far as to direct such hatred and disdain toward the one she fought so hard to marry in the first place. Everything else though is beautifully done and I am really loving where you're going with this. Please update soon! Thanks. ^_^
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  • From Martine on April 21, 2007
    yay new chappies hehe, i like this story. i hope they get together soon! so angsty ahhh anywho, update soon please!

    snuggles, K.F.F.
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  • From ultistarmon on April 21, 2007
    I've read the complete fic @ gotyaoi. However, some fics are just so good that you can read them again and again, but they don't get old. I believe that your story is one of those. Sorry that I don't review as much as I should. I tend to be naughty like that, finishing one fic and moving on to the next to see if its just as good. Kami, I'm such a fiend! Please, oh please, forgiiivvvve mmmmeeeeeee!?!? Pwease update SOON!
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  • From Tyrana on April 19, 2007
    This is an absolutely GREAT story. I’m glad that you’re posting again your stories, I’ve read them long time ago and, though I barely read about this fandom anymore, (just some fics of very, very few people), it’s always a delight and a pleasure to re-read your work. I love your style of writing, it’s so captivating and absorbing; you have that especial talent to make people live the story as it’s happening; reading your stories I’ve got the impression to form part of it instead of being a mere observer. I love how perfectly your stories are built, flowing so elegantly from the beginning, with a perfect tempo; always beautifully written, with great descriptions of the situations, using the precise words, and full of fantastic details. Another thing I admire is that your plots are always interesting and credible, for which I’m really grateful. (Some people tend to confound originality with being grotesque and absurd; and sadly, lately there’s a plethora of insufferable stories with ridiculous plots; so thank you for posting your stories again, it’s so refreshing!).

    But what I like most is how exquisitely you depict the characters, their personality, their emotions and reactions, how they interact; how real they seem. I especially love in this story Vegeta’s attitude toward Goku.

    Magnificent and brilliant work; bravo!
    (BTW, my favorite story is Never be alone, I hope you continue with it, I want to know how it will end.)




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  • From Martine on April 19, 2007
    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...continue...now...please...anything!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?

    Snuggles, K.F.F.

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