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Reviews for The More I Learn to Care For You - Roy's POV

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Taryn on February 05, 2008
    Bah, I didn't know it would hide my email.

    It's runt@meowmail.com
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  • From ANON - Taryn on February 05, 2008
    You gotta add me to the update list! I'm so addicted to this story right now!! @_@
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 30, 2008
    O_o? Not again!! sheesh. I'm never gonna get my point across at this rate. *sobs*

    It was sweet that Ed wanted to hold Roy's hand while they talked. I was hopeful that they'd work some things out but it didn't happen. Roy's a jerk. He's too convinced he knows "what's best" for Ed. idiot. Roy is in for it now that Ed has decided to focus all his determination on him! Roy should just surrender now because he's already lost to the force of nature that is Edward Elric! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. If this doesn't post this time, I give up. :[
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 30, 2008
    WTF?? My review is half gone again!! I spend all this time and effort to write the damn thing and it doesn't post?!? Damnation and hellfire! UGH! All that wasted effort. T_T Let me see if I can remember what I just wrote. *sigh* Why me? ;_;

    Having it (the book) under the pillow is Ed's way of having a little bit of Roy there with him at all times. I can't wait to see how Ed will react when he finds that book in the bag!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 30, 2008
    As I read about Roy and the mess he's making of his life, this little scene plays in my head:

    The deviously smiling fangirl sidles up beside Roy who is too busy trashing his life to notice her or the wrench in her hands. Before Roy can react, the kitty fangirl cracks him over the head with the wrench. Roy hits the floor like a ton of bricks. The fangirl, with her hands on her hips, leans over Roy and proceeds to give him a piece of her mind. "Roy Mustang you are a complete idiot! Stop being such a jackass and just accept the love Ed is giving you! Stop trying to live his life for him! You said he's an adult so how about you start treating him like one! Now, go make up with Ed if you know what's good for you. Don't make me have to come back here and have to knock some sense into that thick head of yours again!" She glares her best death-glare at the dazed prostrate man to emphasize her point. She then turns and walks away disappearing into the twisted imagination she sprang from.

    *shamed* Yeesh. Yeah, well, I never said it was a 'good' scene. That thing needs a warning label! :)

    Anyway, I very much enjoyed Roy arguing Dr Maple! :) The doc's not scared to tell Roy exactly how it is! It was funny too when Roy tried to convince himself that he was NOT going to go to Ed's place and get his things for him but ended up doing it anyway! :D Roy being in Ed's room was my favorite part of the chapter. The dried-up flowers, the book under the pillow, the well-worn boxers - all these little things standing in testament to Ed's devotion to Roy. If only Roy could accept it. The book is especially telling. Having it under the pillow is Ed's way of having a little bit of Roy there with him at all times.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on September 13, 2007
    OMG! That was almost even more painful than Ed's POV! Roy is such an idiot! IDIOT! Oh please let him come to his senses! Please. please let Ed be stubborn and not let him go! OHHHH! I'm ont he edge of my computer chair!
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  • From ANON - YourSeme on September 11, 2007
    :_; just when I thought things were gonna be allright.. aaah! how much more will they suffer...*clings to the story* *still sending prayers to the great yaoi-god to make everything allright~~* XD let me know when it continues~~(oh yeh ^^ and dont forget your story "blind obsession" still especially checking my mailbox for that one every now and then :3 )
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2007
    gah! this is so good! I can't wait for the next chapters!
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  • From anapana83 on September 10, 2007
    Ah man. Roy, Roy, Roy. Why couldn't u just say what you were really thinking before you added, go find someone else?? A very engaging chap. I loved it. :)
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on September 10, 2007
    review for chapter 7

    that was...that was...oh my gods, that was intense. you wrote that so well. i absolutely ached with roy. that was actually painful to read.

    wonderful work!!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on September 09, 2007
    Even tho I reviewed this over at ff I just want to say that I love this fic! I cried just as hard reading it this time as I did the first time at ff. ;_; (I just skimmed over the review I left at ff and I'm still hoping that Roy and Ed get a happy ending! :D No, I'm not expecting any fluff. I know better than that! :D I just want them back together where they belong!) I could kill Roy for screwing up his own life like this! idiot. Why does Roy think their relationship is over? *sigh* I need to go back and reread. I can't remember. You'd think that having something this traumatic happen to him would make him see things more clearly and want to hold on to what is most precious to him. He knows Ed drank milk for him, he's thinking and dreaming of Ed all the time, he's going out of his way to keep tabs on Ed, he visits Ed every single day and yet somehow he thinks that what they have is over. He wants Ed, he needs Ed, he LOVES Ed! Why won't he admit it?!? Dammit, Roy, be selfish for once! What is there left for you if you don't? Lonely nights, booze, and self destruction that's what. *sigh* I love Roy but he's absolutely killing me! T_T I don't know how Hakuro is getting away with how he's treating Roy. Sounds illegal to me.
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - YourSeme on August 26, 2007
    waaa omg you got me crying behind my computer ;_; like I was having that fight and all roy's troubles myself!
    roy's not the bastard..his pride is, thats all, just get rid of that XD. I so really hope they will be oke together!
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  • From anapana83 on August 10, 2007
    Wow, i just read this whole POV and it was soooo good! Truly engaging. And it seemed very real. I myself can sometimes be a bad communicator but only in relationships for some reason. I totally wasn't expected the end part there. Wow. Roy. You fucked up lol. BIGTIME. Do update soon. I'll go ahead and read Ed's POV now. Nice job!
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  • From Afrieal on August 10, 2007
    we're giving you and your cohort the same review
    AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!! that's meaner than usual. please come up with the next chapter soon!!!!

    Affie and Rysha
    whimpering pittifly
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  • From ANON - Christina on August 09, 2007
    OMG DO YOU WANT ME TO CRY TOO :( i hate Roy and his over thinking bastardness!!!
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