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Reviews for Damn Traditions

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From ANON - Lina on May 16, 2007
    OMG!!!! Poor poor Kakkarot!!!! LOVETHIS STORY IT'S AWESOME!!!
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  • From ANON - Asha on May 14, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story! The writing is very good, and the story itself is fun, so far. I hope to read more of it soon. ^_^
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  • From ultistarmon on May 13, 2007
    Yet another great chapter. I do wish they were longer though, with my reading speed I usually finish a chapter that size in less than ten minutes. I'm kinda new to betaing, but I can assure you I wouldn't leave anyone hanging. That is just plain RUDE! If I couldn't beta someone's work properly then I would inform them and help them find someone who could. Sorry about the rant, but I would want someone else to give my work the same respect I would give theirs. I'm thinking about writing a story, but I'm a bit insecure about it. I'm notorious for screwed up time lines and huge plot holes. I also just don't know where to end a story, so they just run on and on. Kinda like this review, huh. I'll shut up and go away now. Update SOON!!
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  • From kitkit on May 13, 2007
    wow me like this chapter
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on May 13, 2007
    Another excellent chapter! Keep up the fabulous work.
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  • From ultistarmon on May 11, 2007
    I love your story and hope to see more soon. Do you have a beta, because I noticed a few mistakes in writing? I know someone who might know of some natural ways to help, if not cure your son of his illness. If you would like to know where to find the info, then email me at ultistarmon@hotmail.com and I will get in contact with them to help you.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on May 10, 2007
    hey, ^^
    good job. *liked it*

    poooooooooooooooooor kakarott.
    wow and what a really, REALLY poor guy,
    who has that "streching - someone´s- ass - job" XD !!!
    god. i wonder what the preconditions are to get that job XD *giggle*

    but your story is nice written and fluently readable.
    you have a good writing style, in my opinion.
    oh, and it´s very interesting that you´ve started with this tradition thing.
    it really existed such a rule, you know. in england, scottland, ireland, france, netherlands...
    so in different times through different aera´s.
    ummmh. no heck, i donno the english word for it, but it´s called "proclamation" ( i think! but i am not sure if it is the correct word for it.) lords and all the big cheese´s, were allowed to take the bride,
    in her wedding-night and of course all of those women were the king´s subjects.
    and it had worked, well. it had have two special reasons. the first : to get all the rich ones into the country. ( yay! rising taxes more money!) the second one: to "breed" the other ones out of the country... ~.~
    so, i really think your idea is interesting and also creative and it has also logic, if one thinks about it. ^^
    i am looking forward the next chapter! keep on, please! ^^ bye.

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  • From kitkit on May 05, 2007
    man i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Chaos_ruler1 on May 02, 2007
    You should write more. I want to know what happens next! Don't hold his story hostage for a certain amount of reviews, please! The plot might die in your mind as you wait. I look forward to reading more someday.
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  • From ANON - Hiketsu_Hitori on April 27, 2007
    O.O Wow.. that was hot. -passes out from a nose bleed-
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  • From ANON - Gemoore on April 27, 2007
    im not usualy a fan of Vegeta/Kakarot pairings...At all. Well to be honest i hate them. But MAN THAT WAS GREAT!
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on April 25, 2007
    I am so glad that you choose not to let people to login in order to review. This story is great and I cannot wait for more in the near future.
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  • From kitkit on April 25, 2007
    me love
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  • From ultistarmon on April 25, 2007
    A tad hard to believe that a Lord or in this case a King would be required b law to deflower the 3rd class. I mean, they're the lowest rank. If you gave some explanation on how this law came to be, then the story would be better. You know, some kinky King wants lots of action and passes a law that nobody feels the need to repeal. Anyway, keep up the great work and update SOON! On another note, that Piccolo/Nail story sounds really good.
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