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By : fyrbyrd074

From saiyajinxyz on August 14, 2008
At least Cold is smart enough to know when to back down in a fight. If Freeza were still alive, I doubt he would be as intelligent. I'm excited that Vegeta is king and I can't wait to see what will happen to Kakarrot.
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From Zofo on August 10, 2008
Kakarot must really love Vegeta if he was still thinking of him during the DP between Nail and Picollo. That would be enough to sway most people so his feelings for him must be very strong.

Loved the confrontation with King Cold. They really showed him didn't they. Sent him home with his tail between his legs. I was like a cheerleader, cheering them on! Vegeta even ascended. Wonderful stuff.

Interesting point as to what is he called now? Queen Kakarot doesn't sound right and he can't be a king as well. Wonder what you will come up with.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on August 09, 2008
Been a while since I read this, thank you so much for all the updates. You've done an excellent job on this story, and for that I applaud you. It seems like the declining action is starting to occur and thus i'm a little sad about that. Nevertheless, I will continue to R&R, so please update again when you have the time.
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From kitkit on August 01, 2008
wow me love
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From ANON - Kit451 on July 21, 2008
Wow... Amazing! I loved it! The plot kept me interested and I didn't want to stop reading! When I reached Chapter 37 I looked at it like O.O NUUUUU! This is an amazing story and I just can not wait to read more! Oh please update soon! I usually don't read DBZ and when I do I rarely if ever review... So PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *will be waiting for the next chapter*

Kit451
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From navajo on July 06, 2008
love the story cant wait for more
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From ANON - MewMew2 on July 01, 2008
Thank you for updating once more. You did an excellent job in writing this chapter and picking up wright where the last one left off despite the gap in which you updated. You have nothing to apoligize for, it's your story and you can update it at whatever pace you choose.
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From Zofo on June 29, 2008
Is Paragus dead? It looked like Vegeta was going to let him live, so I hope the last blast got him.

Glad Kakarot can still bear but also glad that's he's getting a forced vacation from it. He's had too many cubs in a short period. I want to see him back to his true strength for a while.

The Nail/Kakarot sex was hot! Wonder if Piccolo will get a go, or maybe all three of them. I'm worried about when Vegeta finds out, he doesn't seem the sharing type.
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From kitkit on June 03, 2008
wow, another wild turn.
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From Zofo on June 01, 2008
Oh how I hate Paragus. I hope Vegeta finds him and rips him limb from limb for what he did to Kakarot. I fear some of the council may side with him though, but in that case I hope he gets them too.

Now with Kakarot's injury, at least Vegeta is showing he doesn't only want him because he can bear him cubs. Hope Kakarot will be alright.
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From ANON - Chibi_Dilandau on June 01, 2008
Paragus must die!
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From amelia87 on May 23, 2008
P.S. Sorry If I seemed -Excessively Fangirl-ish! It's just that I get that way;p, when I get so Caught-Up in R&R-ing such A Superb story as Ur's -So I Sincerely hope U'll forgive my (at times perhaps Excessively Enthusiastic) behavior ;D!!- (Also the being at it for -OMG,@_@ now- 14 hours straight o_O, combined with the lack of sleep O_o, probably doesn't help any either*_* & More Often than Not, tends to have that affect, +_+ -So even though my friends r probably going to get rather annoyed at me"_" for being a walking zombie the rest of the day#_#- 4 me it was worth it;D, if I managed to -by some miracle^_^- get across even half of, how much I Truly LOVED Ur Stunning Story^_~)!!!

P.P.S. I Especially wanted to Thank u 4 this chapter, becoz it had THE 2 things I MOST wanted to see answered^_^ Bocoz I�ve been dying to know who Radditz would end up with & So I can�t IMAGINE HOW I could have completely forgotten to tell U how Much I Absolutely ADORED the Radditz/Turles pairing! (To tell u the truth, I was even secretly hoping 4 it, from the Very Beginning ;3) -Since U 1st hinted at his �Kakarott fixation� ;D-!!
Also �from the start- I had been rather puzzled by the kind of bond Kakarott & Vegeta seemed to have, (4 every other fic seems to describe, a sayijn mating bond as a 2 way experience, so that NEITHER can stray from the other) So when I finally realized Kakarott hadn�t bitten Vegeta -& as ur helpful explanation from Bardock (THANK U btw;D), Confirmed in this chapter what I had Suspected (& wanted to happen from about chapter 10 chapters ago, -since I was hoping that turning super �in chap. 25- might trigger some dominant instincts- ;p) I now find myself rooting 4 Kakarott & hoping that he�ll Just go & BITE Vegeta -SOONER, rather than later;D- (But I have a sinking suspicion that Turles & Radditz might be A LOT More Cooperative & in tuned to each other & might just get there before them;D. Coz Vegeta seems to be getting rather stuck on this 3rd class thing & instead seems to be developing even more Hang-ups & totally freaking out over this Power-level-Dominance thing. Which = giving me A REAL Baaad feeling, about Kakarott�s chances of getting through to him on time �before his patience runs out- (Or Worse yet MINE *Smirk* -Sorry patience = NOT 1 of my virtues;p- It�s just that there�s only So Much Kakarott bashing a girl can take & I don�t really know why but I�m getting a baaaaddd feeling about this upcoming conversation, about Vegeta being in a bad mood �especially after the stern talking to his father gave him & that 4 some reason he seems to dislike it when people draw his attention to the fact, that�s he�s being A Royal ASS, like his father just did;p- So taking All that into account I just have a Really REALLY Baaaddd feeling, about Kakarott�s chances of NOT ending up Heartbroken �AGAIN-) But on the other hand I�m hoping I�m completely being totally paranoid about this (& Vegeta�s going to be So SCHOKED to actually walk into Kakarott, infront of his door �Just when he�s about to go out & find him to �Demand to talk about this�;p-) that he�ll just accept his offer 4 a spar (in a Daze;3) So that things can Actually Progress from there ^_^ (Perhaps towards the general direction of some lust filled lemons *lecherous look to be inserted here* ;D, that might be somewhere in the -NEAR- future, before/after&/or During their "Spar" *HintHintWinkWink-Gentle-Nudge* ^_~)

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From amelia87 on May 23, 2008
NOOOOOOoooooo!!! O_O (U C-A-N-T END There @_@! What is Vegeta goinna do &_&?! Will he get Finally GET what his father told him & make use of this insight when talking to Karaott *_*?!? Or will he Just SLAM his ARROGANT Prince MASK on MORE Firmly -while reeling from his father's words of wisdom- effectively Pushing him AWAY even Further T_T?!?! Or -4 once in his life, do the sensible thing &- try the "go with the flow" attitude -& in doing so- Also giving himself enough time to just listen, observe & assure himself of the truth, So that he can finally get OVER A-L-L his hang-ups & let Kakarott into his heart, to be able to treat him as he Deserves -As an EQUAL-, As A Lover & As A TRUE MATE ^_^ (Like EVERYBODY -but him- knows he really WANTS to^_~)?!?!? Or maybe...?!?!?!)

*Grabs A hold of self, when realizes I must regain some -Semblance of- Composure$_$, to Even ATTEMPT to Assemble A half-way Coherent Review* #_# (after such A TRULY! E-V-O-L!! Cliffie "_", leaving me Shocked into SPEECHLESS-NESS!!! ;D)
(Yes, this = me Speechless ;3 -Kinda makes ya glad, that I'm unable to fulfill my fangirl-ish duties & provide the Appropriate amount of Praise required to describe the GEM of Sheer B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-C-E, that = this FABULOUS fic- Doesn't it;p)

But I'm afraid that, Since the very moment I started reading @_@!
I fell So MADLY in LOVE, with Ur Completely CAPTIVATING characterizations ^_^!! Ur COMPELLING story-lines & ENTHRALLING plot developments ^_~!!! Not to mention Ur Wicked-ly WITTY- Writing Style ;D!!!! & -at times- Hysterically HILARIOUS sense of Humor;3!!!!!
That I got so Absolutely ADDICTED to this Amazingly AWESOME -& Utterly FASCINATING- fic O_o, That I now find myself -Having just spent the last 12 hours reading this Stunning Story- In a kind of a Daze of sorts o_O

& thus Utterly UNABLE to describe to U; My sheer JOY -utter AMAZEMENT- & Endless Gratitude ^_^, 4 Writing such A Wonderfully Enchanting^^, Outstandingly ORIGINAL:D, Not to mention Deviously DELISHIOUS;D -HOT As HELL;3- & Simply STUPEFYING -at the Sheer AWE-Inspiring ability of this- Story ;> (which I personally think might have some direct correlation, with Ur OVERWHELMING Talent & EXCELLENT writing abilities) ^_~!!!!!!

So instead of even Trying to express my unyielding Happiness, Exhilaration, Enjoyment & Delight ;D! I am simply going to say: "THANK You" 4 writing such a WONDERFUL -in EVERY way possible- work of FANTASTIC fiction^_^!! & I Sincerely hope that U'll write Many, MANY, (M-A-N-Y) MORE, such Stupendously SUPERB stories -& when U DO update or write anything else, I'd be Extremely EXSTATIC, If U could PLEASE let me know at amelia_1987 @ yahoo. com - (So that I can come bother U with more Random Ramblings/Rantings/Ravings/ALL of the above, disguised as an ACTUAL Review ;p) *Gives U the Patented-Pleading-Puppy-Eyes-INNOCENT-Kakarott-Look ^_^ topped off with the TM-U-KNOW-U-W-A-N-T-To-Vegeta-Smirk ^_~!!!*

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From LadyWolf on May 15, 2008
DAMN! DAMN!! DAMN!!!!!! Why stop there????? Just when it was getting good!!!!!

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From LittleMustardSeed on May 15, 2008
major cliffhanger there! i hope Vegeta and Goku kiss and make up soon and that they kick the councils and Paragus' butts! and King Cold's when he arrives XD
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