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Reviews for When There Are Two of Me

By : chayron
  • From Robyn on August 01, 2007
    Well...that was a tense moment between Goten's boyfriend and Trunks. I can't imagine it was comfortable for either of them, and you wrote that very well. :)

    O.o Goten's not going to give Trunks much room, now is he. Can't say that I blame him though.
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  • From ANON - yugithecutie on July 28, 2007
    WOW, THIS GOT REALLY GOOD!! HOLY COW, PLEASE UPDATE MORE! So does Goten really feel strongly as Trunks does? Is Trunks going to accept himself? I wanna know! Oh, by the way, the romantic moment was one of a kind, I can't wait for more of them! ^_^
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  • From Robyn on July 24, 2007
    hehehehe, not necessarily smooth, but that last lie Vegeta told Goku was a good one. *smirks*

    Okay.

    The fight scene was intense and excellent to read. Don't see very many good ones around much any more. :)

    I feel very sorry for this Trunks to have to find out that information this way. Is he ever going to be able to forgive himself?

    And how much exactly do Vegeta and Gohan know?

    Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - Asha on July 20, 2007
    ...damn cliffhanger chapter ending. -_- very evil. Its not even like you NEED the cliffhangers to keep us coming back, every second of the story makes us ask enough questions we'll be back for the rest anyways! ^-^
    Things are getting even more twisty now, and I have to admit that I have NO clue as to quite where this story is going. I kinda like that. ^-^
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  • From cueball2 on July 20, 2007

    Oooh. I wonder what Trunks saw. Probably some sort of attack. The story gets better and better. :) Keep it up.


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  • From Robyn on July 20, 2007
    O.o Oh, no...what was the former Trunks doing that would lead to that?

    What was the former Trunks doing that would have Vegeta and Gohan plotting against him?

    and what the HECK does this sentence mean: The freaking Goten’s father knew from the beginning that there was something wrong with him.

    GAH So many questions, and too few answers!


    :D Which means it is excellently written!
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  • From ultistarmon on July 19, 2007
    God Damn It! Now I gotta know what was on that laptop, what the hell Vegeta meant by "the one before him", and what could be so BAD that it made Gohan and Vegeta act like friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aaaaahhhh, my brain is gonna explode soon if I can't figure this out!! So in light of all that, please update really soon!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 19, 2007
    I love your latest chapter, you've done an excellent job in strengthening the relationship between Trunks and Goten beautifully. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From cueball2 on July 15, 2007

    This story is your best yet! You are learning more of the nuances of the English language more. Just a few minor things to work out. You have really captured my attention with this one. Keep it up. :)


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  • From Achillona77 on July 15, 2007
    An excellent detective story ... a great whodunit!

    ...an edge of your seat thriller!

    ... just the right mix of intrigue and suspense ... as well as humor ^_^!

    Thank you for writing this... it's great! i just can't wait to read the next chapter...i am literally hanging on the edge of my seat!

    Keep up the good work and continue! I love it!!!
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  • From Robyn on July 13, 2007
    Oh, this chapter makes me worried. Goten is becoming attracted to Trunks, and from what I have seen as far as perspectives, I am uncertain Trunks will return those feelings.


    EEP!



    It was nice to see them dancing though. And Trunks sticking up for Goten (and possibly himself)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 13, 2007
    Thank you for updating this story. I'm excited to see how the relationship between Goten and Trunks changes now that they have more of a stable attraction between them. What will you do next.........
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  • From cueball2 on July 04, 2007
    This set of chapters gets more and more interesting. I look forward to more. Gotta run. :)
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  • From Robyn on July 04, 2007
    Again, so many interesting things going on, and I still have no clue as to where they are leading.

    So, I want to read more! :P
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  • From Robyn on June 27, 2007
    EEEE! What a roller coaster ride. What was Goku trying to do? Other than keep Trunks there long enough for the others to find them?

    Ah. :) I loved the cuddle moment between Trunks and Goten. *sighs*

    I think I like Gohan as the almost silent observer.
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