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By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Athena on March 03, 2008
    Poor Ed! Hehe, i have nothing more to add, i've told you how i feel about this chapter already. :D
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 03, 2008
    yup yup yup mustang you is gonna get yourself found out meng! This was kind of a 'downer' chapter. i guess cause ed is feeling so depressed with his current situation thats why... mmm sad. wonder what will happen tomorrow between ed an russel. I actually thought we were gonna walk in there on some trigham (i cant remember the spelling right now) brother incest lol i reeaaallly swore that was wat was gonna happen LOL
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  • From Merkswinter on March 03, 2008
    Yay! I was worried Ed was going to get together with Russel (nooooo!). Ace chapter! Oooo Mustang accidentally dropping hints, can't wait till nex chappy! Loving it!
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  • From ANON - lovely spell on March 03, 2008
    ^.^ another great chapter. I am wondering how Ed will take it all in when he pieces it together or just finds out in general. well thanks for another great chappy!
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  • From saint2sinners on March 03, 2008
    God I hate Russel. what a douche. look at the opportunity you hand hi and he scurries off like a scared bunny. sigh. moron. although am curious to how roy will react. will he be possessive and jealous or intrigued and interested his "pet" is starting to branch out. oh look pretty picture of Russel and ed both kneeling naked side by side blind folded in front of roy. yum. thanks for this story. i'm going to miss it when its done but i am very very curious to how it will end.

    later
    saint
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  • From ANON - thara on March 03, 2008
    OMG!!!!!
    I really love every stories you write, you know that, but this is well, too much attractive to read, i love royed,and this ed i love him,i just wanna give him a hug , but he probably kickme out,=P and roy be more a jerk seems imposible =P, please i wanna be in the update list. padfoot_21@yahoo.com.mx. its a possibility to turn a happy ending?? =)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 02, 2008
    O_O!! ZAKAI!! What are you doing to me?!? XD Aw hell! Ed gave Russell a blowjob!! *dies* :) I suspected something might happen between these two. Ed was watching Russell's ass a bit too much in the beginning of the chapter. Bad Ed! :D That and the line, "unless the opportunity jumped out at him and bit him on the nose" was foreshadowing if I ever saw it! :) I am glad there's no real attraction between them tho. (God I hope not anyway!! Russell drives me insane!! Arrogant ass doesn't even begin to cover it!! :D) Ed was clearly using Russell. Ever the scientist, Ed experimented with Russell just to see what seeing your partner was all about. I wonder if Ed is pleased with the results. Seeing your partner adds a certain something to it. It can also form and/or strengthen an emotional attachment to your partner. Ed is trying to avoid this with his mystery lover but his efforts may be in vain. Russell, I think, just got a wake-up call that he likes guys - assuming he wasn't fantasizing about guys to begin with when he was jerking off. Russell jerking off. ugh. I need a bath after that thought! LOL! Ed or Roy wanking, fine; Russell, uh, no thanks! :D And why Ed wiping his cum off on Russell's chair and carpet was funny to me is beyond me. :) I can just imagine Ed looking at his messy hand and thinking, "OK, now what am I gonna do with this? Oh, I know. I'll just use the upholstery to clean up." LOL! Ah, gotta love mental theater! :) Oh, the fact that Russell was smaller than Roy made me smile! :)

    Well, lookee here at all the plot! Roy's messing up again getting himself in deeper and deeper touching and whispering to Ed like that. He's gonna screw around (no pun intended) and give himself away. This is the moment I'm most waiting for. The moment when the truth comes out and they either accept it and have a better relationship for it or it all goes to hell in a handbasket with both of them left devastated in its wake. There's not much middle ground here. Given how volatile Ed can be, it could get messy. I'd like to think not but one never knows.

    I'm saddened to know the end is approaching. *sigh* All good things eventually come to an end don't they? :( Oh well, better enjoy it while it lasts! :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - lingling on March 02, 2008
    w00t! New chapter! It's really funny because I was just thinking about this today, wondering when you would update again. I laughed at some parts, especially at Russell. X3 I can't wait for the next chapter, and it makes me sad that you said we're nearing the end. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on March 02, 2008
    Okay dear ZaKai, here's one of my most hidden secrets... aside of the RoyEd pairing, RussellEd is my second fave one... you made my day! and this was the first time I've seen them making something.
    But of course, the scene I've read was not as good as the previous ones, but that's okay, at least I had my breaf moment... thank you.
    Ed fantasizing over his lover, well, that's obvious, and who wouldn't? I mean, you can't see him, you only use all your other senses. You know that sight is one of the most treacherous senses, because you can get the wrong first impression, but the other ones don't do that... you understand my point, don't you? And I kind of envy Ed, because if Ed finally ends knowing his mysterious lover, he could add the sight to his equation, and of course, depending of what you're going to do with the fic, well, Ed would accept or reject... the dream and fantasy would finally end, and the real person would be in front of him.
    But between you and me... who would reject such a gorgeous colonel? ah?
    Pity this fic is coming to an end, it's very interesting watching Ed using his senses and instincts... as his mind is full of eagerness and memories... and after what they both have done till now, well, Ed's mind will always compare, always... no matter who's the other person.
    Well Roy+Ed+Motel=a bed at last, unless you want them to do something more, hehe ... bye.
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  • From radcat on March 02, 2008
    Interesting...Nothing does stay the same which Roy is starting to learn. Secrets usually do come out..no one can keep from leaving some type of clues. Feel sorry for Ed...it is difficult to be at a crossroads in your life. Nothing makes you happy. You know you need to make a change but what change should you make and what will work?? Life can be difficult. And now Russell is thrown into the mix....Well, it will be interesting to see how this story ends.
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  • From ANON - Your Seme on March 02, 2008
    woooot! cant wait to see what happens if ed finds out its roy!
    loved the part where roy whispered in eds ear!!^^
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  • From serpensortia on March 02, 2008
    arg. what a way to end a chapter. you give us just enough to keep us reading and loving it and then cut us off at the knees. ah well. i can't wait for the next update.
    serpensortia
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  • From Merkswinter on February 23, 2008
    Oh my god...That was so hot...I'm amazed at how you're so creative with your ideas and its all so..well, yum :D Please update soon, I want Ed to find out its Roy soo badly eep suspence!
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  • From ANON - Sero on February 18, 2008
    I liked the chapter 7 more than any other chapter this far. I think you described both Ed's and Roy's feelings very well. It was cool that Ed tested the safeword and that Ed was cautious enough not to trust to a complete stranger completely. I thought earlier that Ed trusted his unknown sex-partner too much, that Ed was out of character. But Ed's slight fear that "stranger" wouldn't stop even if he said the safeword repaired the OC. I really liked this chapter. Please continue the story. I will be watching for updates from you.
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  • From ANON - InkHeart17 on February 12, 2008
    Seriously, I was up until 4 a.m. reading this when I came across it. I could not stop. This is THE best Roy/Ed I've ever seen. The kinkiness is dead sexy! I was really getting scared/nervous for Ed before he blurted out Nobelium (which is a genius touch of trivia by the way.) Is Ed ever going to remember to mention no more hickies to his secret lover? I need to be on this mailing list for updates! Just an awesome story!

    I'm waiting for Ed to notice the ribbon of Mustang's typewriter or something and see the order of the letters used read the same as the notes he's received.
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