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By : ZaKai
  • From radcat on February 07, 2008
    Chapter 7. Damn. What can you say? I think I would have said the safe word also. I think your chapter was fine. Well written. Definitely graphic. I do not think I could have gone through with it like Ed did. Oh, I do not think this is going to end well...at least for Roy. Wow...how did Roy get this kinky? Going to war too early and killing? Or something else? As usual your work is well done.
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  • From ANON - Edan on February 05, 2008
    I was really surprised at how much you had here Zakai-sama. I think the rough kinky sex my hit a bit close to home in my own liking so I really liked this chapter.
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  • From ANON - lovely spell on February 05, 2008
    You know I never anticipated being interested in this story. I took it as a PWP ... but here I am again and I think I'm addicted ^.^ well hope to hear from you soon! Thanks for sharing you have a great talent and it is nice to see some well written scenes.
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  • From miirage on February 05, 2008
    Zakai, I have to tell you I absolutely love your story. You’ve an excellent author, and after reading this last chapter I just had to speak. I can’t imagine how hard that was, yet you balanced it wonderfully. The entire time I read I kept trying to imagine writing it while keeping such a fine line. You’re story is delicious in the fact I am eager for Ed and Roy to find each other out, and yet each chapter is so interesting I don’t necessarily feel the need. You’re waltzing through such a wonderful web of suspense and excitement, it’s rare. For a little smut, this has more plot, effort, and is more fun to read than many others. Every time I see an update here I am excited, and the day I find a compliment from you on one of my own pieces I will truly be honored.

    Please add me to your update list. (this is a kind feature you’ve offered by the way) mirage0egarim@aol.com--and thank you for the read.

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  • From Jerica on February 03, 2008
    You might think you have plenty of time left but it's all going to be gone before you know it.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 03, 2008
    a DOG mustang?!!! WTF seriously has problems! seriously kinky problems ha! I was feeling ed's fear when the were in the mud so couldnt really enjoy the smexing this time :( but i loved this chapter for the sole purpose that this experience in particular is going to make it SOOO much worse when ed finds out it's mustang LMAO, whenever that may be. Oh its weird, i know i shd be all about the sexing but i kinda want to see things worked out between ed and al. i get sad when they have problems. Is al really a bastard playing all those girls??? couldn't 'connect' my ass!
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  • From pipdfunnybunny on February 03, 2008
    Ooooooh...I hope Roy regrets not wanting any emotional attachment. I hope Ed decides to break it off before Roy can. I foresee Russell stepping into the picture and making Ed want to end it with the mystery man...

    Or maybe I just want Roy to suffer and am trying to hint oh so conspicuously at that fact. (~.^)

    Loved it, regardless. Please update soon and drop me a line: pip_dfunnybunny@yahoo.com (~.^)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2008
    Ahh, I've been gone working with my own fic problems. I just got caught up!

    Let's see first, oh my innocent little Al! He's become a mini-Mustang. Just. Can't. Be. Haha, this is why I love this story eveything so twisted.

    As for the latest chapter I can see where this would be difficult, but you did great. I'm not much for dogs, but hey this still worked. As the rough play . . . hmm . . yeah that was my favorite part. Especially with the way you worked in the saftey word.

    My goodness I think this story may actually be developing a plot (well beyond Ed finally figuring out its Mustang). Poor little Russell. I have a sneaky suspicion that once again he's interested, but isn't going to get anywhere. Fanfic writers are rather cruel to him.

    Looking forward to next update.
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  • From ANON - Jaden on February 01, 2008
    I know you said that you had a hard time with this chapter but I really it. Ed realizing that this (from his point of view) has nothing to do with his life with the military and that he should just enjoy it was perfect. I always think that a lot of people look at the things in their lives and try to connect all of it instead of letting certain aspect exist on their own.

    I hope the next update comes soon and maybe a little work on Training Edward Elric too. That story is incredible, I dread reading every chapter since things steadily get worse but i keep hoping that things will turn around. Just don't give up on it, I can't stand the thought of such two emotional characters being left in that room; even if it is just fiction.

    J_
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  • From ANON - athena :D on January 30, 2008
    :When he and Al had been trying to find a way to repair what they’d done, he’d felt like a fucking blind dog on a leash that was held by Mustang...: i love the dramatic irony in this line, it really cracks me up >D

    My favorite portion of this chapter has to be where Ed uses his safe word and the addmission he makes during that scene and after in the disscussion. Hormonal me actually got a bit teary when he used the safe word... ^^;

    Roy is an ass, and it works so well. :D
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  • From SammyD on January 30, 2008
    Once again, dude you are awesome! I gotta say that I got a little riled up at the thought of end with dog ears, tail and a collar! H-O-T-T!!! Keep it up man!!!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 29, 2008
    I don't know why but this chapter isn't my favorite either. Roy was a lot more brutal this time around than he usually is. He was seriously power trippin'. Still, the chapter was good overall tho. I had to do a double take when Ed managed to suck himself! O_O! I didn't know anybody could do that! Roy is a complete fool if he thinks he can do this up to a point then just walk away from it like nothing happened. He can't seriously think he can get away from this unscathed once Ed knows he's the mystery man! Even if he does break things off with Ed, I still believe that Ed is going to figure out who his mystery man is and it will be either really really good or really really bad when he does. I'm afraid of how Ed will react once he knows Roy has used him like he's never done before. Hell, Roy's already starting to slip up! He made sounds twice this time around! He sighed once and he mmm'd once. Sure they're not words and he probably made those sounds softly enough that Ed couldn't really figure him out from them but he still made noise. And whether he likes it or not, Ed is already too addicted to this, dare I say in love with this, to give up his mystery man without a fight, a real one this time! :) Roy's not the master of control he believes himself to be. He let the game get out of hand and he's making noises. He's going to blow his cover long before Ed's assignment is complete and it will be then that either Heaven or Hell will come knocking on Roy's door! :) Beware the wrath of Ed! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Your Seme on January 29, 2008
    rawr! omg so awesome! ^^ thank you so much for posting.
    Its very addictive! cant wait till you post the next! :3
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  • From ANON - Briryan on January 29, 2008
    That was an interesting chapter. I can belive that Ed dressed up and acted like a dog. That was funny though. Mustang is sure one strange character. Poor Ed. I can't wait to see what Mustang has in store for Ed next, it should be interesting for sure. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Pyris on January 29, 2008
    I forgot this...

    dark_pyris@yahoo.com

    Can't wait for more. *grin*
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