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Reviews for Blind Obsession

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Pyris on January 29, 2008
    The dog scene... Hilarious.



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  • From Kuragari75 on January 29, 2008
    I don't know if I gave you my email or not but here it is again. Leobdollin75@yahoo.com. Love this story as always, curious as hell to see when the shit hits the fan and Ed finds out or something. lol, looking forward to an update!
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  • From Loquora on January 28, 2008
    I'm sorry it was so hard for you to write, but it certainly was fun to read. I think you did a wonderful job of it! I must admit I'm kind of wondering at what point Ed accidentally learns who it is he's meeting and everything hits the fan. A part of me wants to see that because everyone loves conflict, but their mindless sex sessions are awesome too. I don't care what happens next as long as there is more!
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  • From alleycat88 on January 28, 2008
    nice very nice. Poor Ed. I can see why he WOULD distrust him. I mean to him he's a complete stranger. I just wonder how he's going to take it when Roy finally tells him its him ya know? Thanks for the update!
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  • From Junshin on January 27, 2008
    Ah, this came a a lovely time. Was just thinking I wanted to read some good old-fashioned porn and checked my email for the hell of it. MOST excellent. ^.~

    Sad that this chapter was such a pain for you, but am certainly looking forward to an easier - and therefore, I hope, sooner - next chapter. *laughs*

    Alternately, and I just thought about it, I wonder what colour the dog ears were? Did Roy get them in gold, just for Ed? Or did he have to go with a more normal colour, like brown? (Somehow, in my mind, the ears were brown. Hm...)

    Cheers! ^.~
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  • From Afrieal on January 27, 2008
    *giggling wildly* oh goddess we can so see that happening... considering we live in a place with the most abundant liquid sunhine *grin* hmmm *twawp* oh yah no skyclad play i forgot rysh thanks that would've gotten us into real trouble... We seriously enjoy the story but wonder what is gonna go on if Ed figures out just who his playmate is... poor Roy is NOT gonna stand a chance in hell either he's gonna get his ass beat or worn out by the kid.

    Affie and Rysha
    who thank you for the update
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  • From ANON - Vegi on January 27, 2008
    Awesome story!!!!! It was
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  • From ANON - lingling on January 27, 2008
    Wow. I don't really know what to say to that. Keep writing, I'm ever waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From animegeik on January 27, 2008
    Just found this site and read your story. Wow...I laughed at parts, especially the dog stuff, but it was still hot! I have to admit, I think I learned something ;) Love this pairing, they are the best! Good writing too, very descriptive, allowed me to visualize it all really well O.O
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on January 27, 2008
    This was just wow! very graphic and... animalistic as the title. First time I read and even thought about a fight, or kind of 'dog fight', like the one you see when one wants to pick some of the other one's food, no bites, just... fight...
    I was wondering last chapter almost the same questions Roy asked himself here, how long would it take for it to finally end? I mean for Ed to realize who that mysterios man was or just for Roy to handle it without getting suspicious. I liked the 'trust' moment, but... this could be a double-edged sword, you think one thing, but, it can twist to the opposite so easily...
    You just take your time... bye
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 27, 2008
    omg, omg, omg! i don't know who's the bigger pervert... roy for wanting it, or you for writing it! XD i was almost embarrassed!! HAHAHAHA! though it was funny as hell.

    and, omg, when ed took his raincoat off, and you put in that it had been taken from the military storeroom, i was so expecting roy to confuse their coats at the end, and him walk off with ed's and ed walk off with his... dude.

    anyway, i really liked this chapter, simply for the humor it provided. i swear i was laughing the entire time! i don't know if that's what you intended, but it was good regardless. and i wonder what's going to happen for ed to find out about mustang, because after roy says he'll break it off before that happens, that's just asking for something to happen. and mustang's so worried about ed developing feelings for him, and i'm so betting he's the one that falls first.

    oh, and about al from the last chapter... i agree that he's often portrayed as too nice and innocent, and i think that's why i don't like him much. i even thought about writing a story where he's not a very nice brother, one i may still write. but i thought your portrayal of him in this story was awesome. thanks for that.

    anyway, keep up the excellent work, doll!!
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  • From ElegantPaws on January 27, 2008
    Honestly, I can see why it would be difficult. All of this started for the characters in a lovely sexually intriguing mode, but as they progress through the patterns of lust and eliciteness, one or other would begin to wonder beyond the moment about the other. Edward has started. They had to reach the ultimate in degridation first. Trust had to be found in the moment. It has always been there, but unspoken. Roy is now going to have a little more trepidation and Edward is going to start wondering.

    The next bit should be fascinating as they find their way through the sexual morass.

    I think you did an excellent job.

    EP
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  • From serpensortia on January 26, 2008
    i just read your story again and i'm still very sad that you haven't posted on it in a long time. but then i went to your lj and i was kinda struck dumb by how many stories you can write and keep straight in your head. i'm most certainly impressed!
    serpensortia
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  • From ANON - lovely spell on January 15, 2008
    ^.^ I was reading another one of your stories on ff.net and I decided to see your other stuff eventually I ended up here. This is very interesting at first I thought maybe it was a pwp but I'm actually curious/interested in what's gonna happen! I dunno if you can see my email but I'd like to be added to the update list. kittybomb2888(at)yahoo ^.^ well thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - bloody__rose on January 05, 2008
    Ooohhh I didn’t know Al was so bad. He must have hanged out with Mustang too much when he was younger. I like the why u keep avoiding Russell’s name it was killing me to find out who Ed was working with. Oh I have question is there going to be anything going on with Russell and Ed even if it not my favorite couple. I would my Roy getting mad. He he. Here is my email bonitastar500@yahoo.com. I love the way the story is going keep it up.
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