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Reviews for Blind Obsession

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2007
    Hello! Ok first thing I have to say is leather miniskirt! Naturally Roy would pick out a miniskirt. That and aren't you miss clever. The whole periodic table thing. As usual excellent chapter. Can't wait to see how Ed explains his new little "love mark".
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  • From ANON - YourSeme on October 15, 2007
    ultimate hotness!! ^^ thank you so much for updating!!
    oh god I loved the naughty spanking and ed playing as a hooker. X3 brilliant!
    Im also too curious what will happen when ed finds out who has been fuckin him.
    you're doing a great job! got me and my friends addicted! ^^ cant wait till the next chapter!!!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on October 14, 2007
    mhahaha ed's prostitute talk' was hysterical!! i loved it. and i was not expecting the package to be 2 kinky little outfits lol and of course ed would try them on and decide he looked hot LOL he so kills me in this fic hahahahaha good job as usual :)
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  • From alleycat88 on October 14, 2007
    Yay! you finally updated! Im gald...real good chap by the way! Loved it! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
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  • From Onyxlight on October 14, 2007
    Oh you never cease to amaze me with each installment of this fic. I am so enjoying this,
    and as per usual I am eagerly awaiting the next one. ^_^

    And KUDOS for squeezing in the periodic table!! SQUEE!! (that had to be hard to work in and how you did it was pure genius!)
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  • From yaoigurl06 on October 14, 2007
    OMG...that was really really HOTT!!!*drools*
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on October 14, 2007
    *grins* Nobelium. *chuckles fondly and shakes head* Only you, Ed. Only you. :D This was the hottest chapter ever! WOOHOO!! Is it possible to die of a nosebleed? LOL! Ed acting like a cheap slutty whore is the best! You are the best author ever!! *worships at your feet* You may have had some difficulty getting this chapter to come together *grins at the double entendre* but it worked out perfectly in the end! (Ooh! Look who checks the LJ story update page! Gotta keep tabs on my favorite author! :D)

    I'm getting really anxious about when Ed finally figures out that his mystery man is Roy. (Sorry, Roy. Ed will eventually know who you are.) I mean, I want him to know because he deserves to know who it is who's been pleasuring him so much but, at the same time, it will lessen the titillating eroticism of it all when all is revealed. *sigh* Damned if you do, damned if you don't! XD I know Ed will figure it out. He's slowly gathering clues and they will soon add up for him. I still can't believe Ed hasn't taken notice of Roy's cologne or soap or natural scent! (I wonder if the ignition cloth gloves would add a scent to his hands...) Being blindfolded should have sharpened his other senses and one would think that he'd be more aware of these things. *shrugs* Guess he's been too focused on the sense of touch to give the sense of smell much notice! ;) Roy won't be able to control himself indefinitely either. Sooner of later he will slip up and do or say something and then all hell's gonna loose! I'm just so nervous about how Ed will react when he finally does know! :[ I don't want Ed to become so horrified and disgusted with himself for letting Roy do these things to him that he shuts down and denies himself! ;_; (Extreme much? Yeah, that's me. Always gotta find the worse case scenario. *sigh*) I just hope Ed doesn't freak out too badly when he does figure it out! :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. "I’m ganna cum..." "You ganna get your money’s worth or what?" It's gonna not ganna. Ganna's not a word.
    P.P.S. You nose it. *groans and rolls eyes* That's the worst pun ever! XD
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  • From RizafromKeron on October 13, 2007
    You, know, i've loved the "nobelium" idea, very clever. These particular, these little attentions that you put even in the smut fic (usually "lighter", "funnier"), that's why I love so much all your stories, I think. For this, and because you write things for what I blush only in think them! XDDD My god, what a shy school girl I am, that dress that Ed hasn't worn would be good for me! I was wondering a thing: but Edward is always near the Colonel. He doesn't smell him? I mean: everyone has a particular, peculiar scent (or it is so, or I'm some sort of dog because the first thing that I use into distinguish people is their odor!!!! XD). Even over fragrances or aftershaves... It's a strange question? Sorry!!!! XDDD This review is for you to remenber that i'm a constant presence in your fics! XDD Compliments!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaz on October 13, 2007
    very gud...i like ur ideas and the fic is hot! be sure2 give me a shout wen u next update plz. very very good. Rock On! Kaz xxx
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  • From ANON - Al on October 13, 2007
    YAY! another update! *sooo forgot to review the last chapter* sorry! -_-; busybusybusy..and stuffs. xDDDD anyways, loved this chapter and I know it's a little late but I gotta say that the last chapter was my absolute favorite! Specially with the dream. xDD hilarious and smexy! Oh well, on with this chapter!

    Ed in a hooker outfit with anal beads out of his ass...... Mmm, if I could draw, I'd sooo draw that for you, cuz I'm crazy like a stalker like that ;) One question for you, does Ed have the blind fold on? *curious*
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  • From sasquatchsnake on October 13, 2007
    lol nobelium
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  • From BishounenKrazed on October 13, 2007
    i don't know why, but i foresee disaster with mustang's last thought there. and i had this insane moment where i thought ed's safe word would be mustang, you know, he doesn't like mustang so whatever he doesn't like sexually he'd call out mustang's name and that would ruin something or other, and since the man is mustang, that would just open a whole can of worms and stuff. so, yeah, insane.

    but i do hope that this trist mysterioso does evolve into love, because i'm a sap like that. anyway, keep up the awesome work! until next time!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 13, 2007
    Holy Fucking Hell in a Handbasket! That was incredible! My husband dosen't know it but he loves you because he get's laid more often becuase of your fantastic smut!

    I just love kinky Edward! I also though it was really in character for him not to pick the school girl outfit and the reason that he didn't want to look younger or be innocent.

    Roy is such a bastard! (and you do such a good Bastard!Roy) for marking up poor old Ed, cause it gets him off.

    SQUEE! I just love your fics so much I don't even know what to say! They make my brain melt and slide out of my ear!
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  • From ANON - serpensortia06 on October 13, 2007
    ARG!!! your killing me slowly and i love it! keep up the great writing!
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  • From squallstorm on October 13, 2007
    very yummy once again XD


    kiki
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