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Reviews for Blind Obsession

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Lynn on July 16, 2008
    oh...my...gosh! Ed's blind!? oh no...that sucks, but i love the chapter and it was well worth the wait!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2008
    Onylight was me OnyxLight...my x key is on the fritz!

    Any way this fic rocks and it only seems to get better as it goes along!!
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  • From ANON - OnyLight on July 16, 2008
    OMG that chapter was probably your best yet!! So much Angst an emotion flowed from you words. PLEASE PLEASE dont let Ed be blind permenatly . . .I couldn't take it if he was *sobs fo Edo* I hope the teaches Russell a lesson about being such an ass to Ed. I hope Ed can work things out with Al...poor Al when he finds out this accident happened he is goning to feel so guilty...


    Great job and I can't wait for the next chappie!!
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  • From ANON - Lovely Spell on July 16, 2008
    Wow this chapter was so incredibly emotional. I really liked it and I can't help but feel bad for Ed at the end. It seems like that hope of his eyes clearing is really easy to understand...and feel. Awesome chapter ^_^ as usual.

    ja
    LS

    thanks for sharing.
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  • From serpensortia on July 16, 2008
    are you shitting me? honestly you end the chapter there? WHY? i need more than than for a fanficfix!!!! >.< please hurry with the next chapter. i need more
    serpen
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on July 16, 2008
    well, i didn't expect that twist. but i like it!

    and even if it was a bit of a wait, i was delighted to see this update. :D
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on July 15, 2008
    Hey, so you passed from a super-hot scene to... wow... a movie-dramatic-like scene. Poor Ed. This fic is so psychological...
    Anyway, let that mystery man appear and hold Ed again... he deserves everything he wants after what he's just done...
    And if you don't find him, just tell me, okay? I can hold him too... bye
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  • From Alima8314 on July 15, 2008
    No way! Has it really been that long since you last updated? It sure doesn't feel like it.

    Awesome as always!

    This chapter was pretty much amazing. I love plot, and your stories are the best mix of plot and smut.

    It's so sad that happened to Ed! I hope his sight does come back... eventually. And, I hope he and Al make up.

    Keep up the good work! I look forward to future chapters for all your stories.
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  • From Arimikoe on July 15, 2008
    Oh. My. God.

    I know EXACTLY what you're doing with this, and GODDAMN.
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  • From ANON - tshapo_chi on July 03, 2008
    It's so hard to find a good FMA fic that keeps Roy in character. I think this is one of the best I've read. I'm hoping that you will continue to be able to update, even if it is a little slower than you want. I can't wait until Roy's identity is known. If possible, please add me to the mailing list. My address is attached.

    patiently waiting,
    chi
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  • From Sheidow on June 25, 2008
    Wow. I love this story! At first I was sceptical as I'm not a fan of the Roy/Ed pairing, (much prefer Envy/Ed NCS as it just FITS) but this really has me hooked. I really never thought Ed would be the kind of person to openly accept this kind of attention, but the way you have written it has changed my attitude completely and I really don't know how I thought otherwise. As much as I like the story though, I feel that things progressed a bit fast for my liking. Some of the things that Roy had Ed do (the Hooker bit sticks in my mind here) would be things that I would see Ed going 'The hell? No way!' even if it did mean getting laid. Then again, I'm not particularly into that myself so who is to say that he wouldn't? Doesn't matter, point is that this story rocks and it extremely well written. It's sad that you are having trouble finding time to write this, but in my opinion, as long as you are happy with the story and things are progressing as you want them too, take as long as you like to bring out the next chapter. People with thank you for the extra effort! (At least they SHOULD be thanking you...)

    Anyway, keep it up and I'd love to hear when you get the next chapter out. Here's my email: sheidow.dragon@gmail.com

    Thanks again for a great story! I'll be checking your other stuff out so expect more reviews from me! :)
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  • From nelorae on June 21, 2008
    hey, i love the story so far. Please put me on the update list? I want to know what will happen.

    neloraven(at)gmail(dot)com
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  • From ANON - hikaru9 on June 15, 2008
    I loved this chapter. I'm actually embarrassed to admit that i cried when ed was laying himself open like that. ^^; I'm such a terrible sap, that's my dark little secret, i'm a sap! XD
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  • From yellow22 on June 04, 2008
    I re-read ch 9... Aahhh!! it's great. Please update soon!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 03, 2008
    It was a fantastic chapter, except, I WAS EXPECTING SEX AND DIDN'T GET ANY! GAH!

    I love how tense this chpater was! It built up so well and it's going to make the next chapter oh so good!
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