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Reviews for The Heart of the Mustang

By : Yuukichan
  • From KansouAme on June 10, 2007
    Wow.. what a ride! (ok bad pun) Excellent story though and many many kudos to you from those of us who love Roy and Ed! Thanks from one New Mexican to another! (although I have been displaced and miss the green chili horribly *sniff, sniff*)
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  • From Onyxlight on May 31, 2007
    The ride was excellent!!!

    Can I buy tickets for another???
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on May 27, 2007
    weeeeee!! i FINALLY got to read this story, was worried about reading it since i hadnt seen the movie yet but saw it couple days ago and decided to a) read the end of at fifteen (u said there was a spoiler, thanks for noting it btw, so i didnt read to the end) and b) read this story see how it all worked out. And yeah! i was sooo not disappointed. this was a really good story plus it was so smexy too! *grins* ed's bum deserves a medal for surviving thru all that LOL
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  • From yaoigurl06 on May 26, 2007
    AWWWWWW! That was so cute! Although Jean has no chance in hell with Ed and Roy should have rosted him alive for his comment at Eds tight pants.lol.
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  • From squallstorm on May 25, 2007
    nope eiplogue is still missing...now there's even more missing O_O
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 24, 2007
    Oh no! The whole chapter's not here!! The ending is missing! Ya gotta fix it ASAP! I gotta know what Roy said to Ed at the threshold (as if I couldn't guess!) and how Ed responded!! :) Hurry! I'm waiting on pins and needles here! XD
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 23, 2007
    "I hope that the last chapter is as well received." What?! Are you saying that this is it? No more? *wibbles* Aw man! This has been such a good story. I hate to see it go if indeed this is the end. :( Well, if it has to end, so be it. I was just surprised by how quickly it ended. It was so sudden. Ed tells all his secrets about what's been bugging him and, BAM!, the end. ouch. I was fully expecting it to be a while before Ed revealed why he was always on the move, what he was searching for. He'd held on to his dream to have his natural limbs back for so long that I didn't think he'd just up and tell everything and then give up his quest so easily. I guess that's what happens when you find what you're looking for. It would be nice tho if Ed kept researching just to find out if it was even possible to get his limbs back. But, whatever. They say it's a good thing to leave your audience wanting for more. It can also be said that it leaves the audience feeling unsatisfied. It's a double-edged sword.

    The lunch scene was...awkward. A lover's quarrell is not a pretty thing. Ed was definitely acting out like a three year old. Roy was like a frustrated parent with a recalcitrant child. It got weird there for a few moments. I half expected Ed to call Roy 'sir' or 'master' after Roy told him he had to stay put and "eat and be civil". It was like watching a D/s scene being played out. kinda kinky! It was no surprise that Roy, being the uber dom he is, got Ed to cave in and admit he was wrong. It's not really all his fault tho. Winry harping on and on is enough to drive any sane person to distraction! LOL! I do wish Ed hadn't let Roy ravage him like that. That was bad. Poor Ed's head is so messed up. :( I have great sympathy for Ed in his first foray into oral sex. He's a better person than I am for not raising hell with Roy when he held Ed down and all but forced Ed to deep throat him. Damn Roy! What are you trying to do? kill him?? sheesh! :) Roy did make up for it with all his sweet loving words at the end! "This is what makes you my FullMetal Alchemist and I don’t want you any other way. I love you just the way you are." *sigh* I knew I loved Roy for some reason! ;)

    I would ask for an update but I don't know if that's gonna happen. *pouts* Hey, I can dream can't I? ;) Oh, about the milk in the coffee thing, you'll notice that I didn't catch it at first so in a way you kinda did pull a fast one after all! :) Also, it's 'fuhrer' not 'furor' that Roy wants to become. Just thought you'd like to know! :)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From TrulyWished on May 22, 2007
    Damn Ed has some screwy ideas, doesn't he? Very nice, lots of sweet parts, which I like. :)
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  • From Afrieal on May 22, 2007
    Oh goddess that was WONDERFUL thank you i needed a good cry and Affie has just forgiven me for waking her up to read this (it's after midnight and i called her *snicker*) thank you again and please share more writing i'm looking foreward to reading other works by you as is Affie

    Ryshandra for Afrieal
    (hey this is fun usually af writes these)


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  • From yaoigurl06 on May 22, 2007
    Now that was so cute! I like that Roy doesn't want Ed to change. He is so sweet!
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 18, 2007
    Hey! I just reread this chapter (Can't get enough of that ring!! "All of my love, forever, Roy" *dreamy sigh*) when I realized that Ed asked for milk in his coffee! OMFG! Ed? asking for MILK?!?! He certainly has changed hasn't he! XD
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 18, 2007
    *fangirl squeals* Roy gave Ed a ring!! SQWEE!!! *happy dances* Uncork the champagne and let's get this party started! w00t! Will Roy be wearing a ring too? That would be so awesome! Surely the mighty Mustang should have some new tack, I mean, jewelry to show off! ;) (My knowledge of horse gear is quite pathetic so sorry if that line made no sense!) I was cheering Ed the whole time he was telling off Al and Winry! YAY!! Good for him! Those two had it coming. I'm sure Ed feels better now, and probably quite exhausted, for finally getting everything off his chest. Have I mentioned how much I love your Roy? He's so powerful and commanding, so dominate! *drools* Me likey that lots! Sorry, I tend to get incoherent when I'm around a strong dom! ;) Hey! Since Roy and Ed are essentially married now, that means there should be a honeymoon happening soon! *more drool* YAY! More RoyEd smex!! :D Love it!!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From TrulyWished on May 18, 2007
    I hope you don't take my criticism the wrong way, I'm not trying to be rude or anything. Again, I don't necessarily agree with every direction you took it, but it was nicely written, well thought out and articulated (ooh, big word!) and a pleasure to read. I'll look for more chapters.
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  • From yaoigurl06 on May 18, 2007
    Oh, that was so cute! Roy and Ed are 'married'! And I'm glad Al and Winry are ok with them. I love this fic. I hope you update soon! Wait, does the military know about them? O.O
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  • From TrulyWished on May 15, 2007
    Oh dear, Al adn Winry didnt' take it that well. of course, Roy acting like a bit of a jerk didn't help. Etiquette for introducing yourself to a significant other's family does NOT include banging them in the car/bus/train right before meeting them! *L* Excellent chapter.
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