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Reviews for The Heart of the Mustang

By : Yuukichan
  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 15, 2007
    *tackle glomps* That was great!! :D Roy's pet name for Ed, love, is very sweet! Ed has definitely tamed the wild stallion that is Roy Mustang!! :D Stud fits Roy so well! Not only does it feed his ego (and what an ego he has!), it reflects his horse-inspired last name! :) Ed couldn't have handled that harpy from the bar any better! She had some nerve thinking she was gonna talk all that shit and get away with it. Like her skanky ass could take Roy from Ed! puh-lease! :) The absolute best part of the whole chapter - Al and Winry's reaction to seeing a freshly fucked Ed! Loved it!! I can so imagine the idiotic looks on their faces!! LOL!! The hickey was a brilliant idea! If they couldn't figure out what was going on after seeing that, then there's no hope for them. Roy certainly doesn't beat around the bush! Just throw it in their faces, act like nothing's happened, and walk away. Roy saved Ed the trouble of having to find just the right words to say at just the right time to break the news to Al and Winry. Ya gotta love Roy for looking out for his love like that - shock factor be damned! XD They now know on no uncertain terms and it's completely up to them where things go from here. Dinner should be very interesting!! ;)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From yaoigurl06 on May 15, 2007
    OMG! I sooo don't like Winry in this fic. Calling Mustang a horrible man. But it was funny when they got off the train and scarred Al. That was funny! I hope Al and Winry understand their relastionship. I hate it when they make Al mad. Its not nice. anyways update soon!
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  • From TrulyWished on May 14, 2007
    Aww, that's sweet. Whatever would Al and Winry think if they knew exactly why Ed doesn't find a nice girl? *L*
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 14, 2007
    *smiles* You have no idea how much better it makes me feel to read a nice sexy story like this!! I love reading stories about Ed making it back thru the Gate to be with Roy! I always hoped that Ed would find a way and come home. I think this hope is what made it so hard to watch that one OVA with the little kids in it. That OVA only reinforced that Ed never came home. Totally broke my heart. *cries* Thankfully, I have wonderful authors like you who write wonderful stories like this that make the pain of that broken heart a little easier to deal with! (Yes I am quite neurotic! LOL!) You have brightened my day considerably!! :D Has Ed been living with Roy ever since he came back and rejoined the military? Why is Ed so restless? He's home, he has Roy, Al is human again - what's the problem? his auto mail? What is it that Ed is still looking for? the Philosopher's Stone? When Ed goes back to visit Al and Winry, will Roy go with him? I can't imagine how hard it will be for Ed to finally tell Al and Winry that he and Roy are together. Ed and Al were always so close. It must be so very difficult for Ed to be keeping secrets from Al now. Ed is eventually going to have to tell. Maybe if he admitted to his "secret" relationship with Roy he wouldn't be feeling so uneasy. Oh, and in case I haven't said it enough, thank you thank you thank you for this fantastically awesome smexy chapter!!! :D
    Update soon! (I hope!)
    Much love!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From anapana83 on May 14, 2007
    That was smexy! And very well written. Good job. I liked it alot. *thumbs up*
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