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Reviews for Beautiful Insanity

By : Madu
  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on May 27, 2007
    whoa! didnt expect THAT! ^^ but i can say that it thrilled me to read it,
    even if i have to rub my eyes and read twice, after goku told her that he´s in love with another person...
    yeah. i was shocked AND thrilled by that. :)
    to be honest, i still dont know if i liked the story. cant put a finger on it.
    maybe thats because i wanted to read more. more before the highlight and more after it. but i have to blame myself. i need some time to get warm with a story and i think oneshots aren´t the best choise to get that feeling, while reading. but anyways. ^^ i like your story and i cant say much about your grammer - or i wouldnt dare to say- because my grammer is also very...creative. err. i´ve to confess that, actually even my grammer in my mother tangue is still very creative. ~.~ so i cant say much about that. but i think a beta is always useful, no matter if grammer problems or not. you will get a second opinion and so on. not bad. ^^
    oh and whats more: noone, believe me, really noone, will HATE you, only because of a fanfiction. N*O*O*N*E . if someone will ever say to you, that he hates you because of that, then trust me that this person has serious problems with his mind. or just nuts. and bad. :D
    and i think flames, or to give a story intentionelly only one cross, is nothing but the result of bored, jelous, or bored AND jelous people. dont take it to heart. dont worry about it and take it too serious. it´s not worth it after all. just do your thing, dont care and ignore if you will ever get a flame. it´s the best you can do in such a case. ^^ such people are just longing for someones attention or whatever. trying to be cool and stuff. ~.~ donno. *shrug*
    sooo, keep on writing, please. i´m curious to read more from you if you feel like writing again.
    bye d^^b
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  • From ultistarmon on May 23, 2007
    Please keep in mind that this ISN'T a flame! You're grammar needs some serious work. Also, you should either work on characterization or put up an OOC warning. You should probably put up a PWP warning as well, because I couldn't find the plot with a magnifying glass and a flashlight. Do you have a beta for this? If you don't you should seriously consider getting one. There is great potential in this story and I would like to see you reach it. I'm not putting you down or anything like that. It takes a lot of guts to put a story up like this and that is something to be proud of. Best of luck in future ventures.
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