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Reviews for Where He Belongs

By : CrimsonLantern
  • From Kuromei on August 30, 2007
    Uh oh... That Shaffer's gonna be trouble. =( Please keep up the great work! =D
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  • From SadlerGirl on June 07, 2007
    This story is so sweet, I realy like it.
    Thanks so much for shareing it.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 07, 2007
    HI!! I was just rereading the last chapter here (chapter 6) because I couldn't remember Ed's reaction to seeing the play Brigadoon and noticed that most of it is gone. What happened to it? All that stuff about going to the theater and Mr Shaffer seeing Roy and Ed kissing. Hell, where's the part where Roy and Ed had sex?? I'm kinda upset that it's gone. Have you decided to revise the chapter/story? It is nice that you added chapter/theme 3 but it kinda spoiled it a bit for me since, when I read this the first time, Ed getting his pocket watch back came across as more of a surprise gift and a token of Roy's undying love, patience, and devotion for Ed than just something Roy had found and kept for old times' sake. The minute Ed asked for his watch back, all the sentimentality attached to the watch was diminished. I think this chapter as is cuts off before Ed even gets his watch back doesn't it? But, I'm not complaining; really, I'm not. I just wanted to know where the rest of the story went. Can't wait to read more!!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From Incensed on June 06, 2007
    Is there.. a chapter missing? I didn't want to read chapter four since there wasn't a three... but it's pretty good so far..
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 04, 2007
    *enthusiastic applause* This is awesome!! Your Roy and Ed are just amazing! Totally believable and realistic. I just loved how Ed confronted Roy and got him to admit his feelings for him - with a kiss no less! This is what I like most about your Ed. He doesn't beat around the bush or play the part of a confused scared little uke. This Ed knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it even if he's not sure about the outcome. Excellent! There's also all the sweet little things that Roy and Ed have done and do for each other that melt my heart. Roy keeping Ed's pocket watch in his nightstand was especially endearing! :) such a sweet gesture! I loved that! Cooking meals for one another is also very sweet. But, the best thing Roy and Ed did together (aside from having sex of course! LOL) was performing alchemy together! OMG! There was something so sensuously enticing about it since they were sharing such an intimate connection. I don't know if I'd call it erotic or not but it was damned good! :) The game of Twister they played made me laugh! Oh the fun that can be had with that wonderful little game! Ah the memories! ;) The only thing here that decreased the ever growing and oh so delightful sexual tension between these two was when Roy hit Ed. It was a totally understandable reaction from Roy but it still made me wince. ouch! :) Ed's line, "Well what are you standing there for? If you want to be forgiven then get your ass back in bed and warm me up damn it.", was the best! Typical Ed, breaking the tension as only he can! :D The sex scenes were perfect. Just the right amount of virginal timidity to offset the pure raw lust! Excellent!! I was simply floored that you chose Brigadoon as the play they went to see! You could not have picked a more perfect show for them! wow! Mr Shaffer worries me a bit. There's trouble on the horizon if he has anything to say about it! I just know this jerk will try and do something to ruin Roy and Ed. NOOOOO!! T_T
    Please update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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