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Reviews for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

By : sefiru
  • From kitkit on August 21, 2007
    love it i feel sorry for vegeta, he was just so close
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  • From Robyn on August 20, 2007
    EEP! I hate those sorts of dreams, when you think you are really awake, and doing something TERRIBLE. *sighs*

    Thankfully it was just a dream, and thankfully, Vegeta is one lucky S.O.B.

    Looking forward to plot! (although I have been enjoying the rest of this story immensely)

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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on August 18, 2007
    There are parts of this series that I'm not really all that keen on, like Vegeta's dancing shoes, but, you know, I haven't missed a chapter yet. I think the reason is because Vegeta's so *passionately*, fiercely submissive that it fits him right. There are a lot of uke Vegeta fics in which he's subby because he's a frail, injured flower deep down inside, and those always irritate me because the characterization is so far out there. Your demanding, bitchy Vegeta is just right.

    Also, in regard to an earlier comment -- I think I was trying to say that it was nice seeing Vegeta perv on Kakkarot's ankles because it's such an average, mundane thing to do when you're deeply in lust with some one. Since a lot of Vegeta's dramatic moments in your series involve him being in sub space, I liked seeing his goofy, everyday kind of adoration too.

    Whoever's plotting against the two of them needs to do better homework, it seems.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on August 17, 2007
    Oops, perhaps I shouldn't have been so fast on revealing my one and only (eeh?) weakness XD
    Great chap! Of course Kakarott trusts Veggie-chan ^^ I never doubted.
    Mm, whipped Veggie... XD
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  • From Dragon7 on August 17, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Katonie on August 11, 2007
    Hahaha.Mr. Satan is really stupid. Are you going to make him disappear soon or what? Because all he seems to do is make himself look bad. Although keeping him arround would be funny.
    I feel so sorry for Kakarot and Vegeta. They're so far away from each other! They must be so horny! Poor things...
    Anyway, this chapter was great, as usual, so keep up the good work.

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on August 11, 2007
    Really now, I can't even get the picture of Vegeta dancing like thta out of my head. How am I supposed to work now? Ah, well, I'll just tell my boss "sorry, I suffer from acute lack of Veggie look-alikes and therefore simply cannot work until you get me a hunk of my own". That's sure to get me what I want, ne? ...or perhaps not XD

    Great chap! Interesting what they'll do about Tuffles and a dreaming Veggie sounds promising ^^
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  • From Robyn on August 10, 2007
    *purrrrrs* The first part of this chapter was just lovely...and I am sure you know that! *winks*

    I liked the second part of the chapter and the conversation and interaction between Kakarott and Bardock. *smiles*

    hehehehehe, yeah, Mr. Satan has his hands more than full with the fusion. :P
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  • From Dragon7 on August 10, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on August 06, 2007
    Mmm, Veggie dancing *drools*
    And honestly, messing with Vegeta is always a favourite ^^
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  • From ANON - Katonie on August 03, 2007
    Nnnnnnnnoooo!Motherfucker! I hate you! A Cliffhanger?! ARG!!!!
    Okay, I'm good. I don't really hate you. I love you, really. Please update soon though, because cliffhangers likie this slowly cause peole to suffer mental damage...ya know?
    Update soon and keep up the good work!
    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - Irol on August 03, 2007
    oh evil evil cliff hanger!!! sigh...its so frustrating but anticipatory at the same time! can't wait for the next one!
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on August 03, 2007
    wonderful chapter! i loved it! great job! stupid girl! leave vegeta alone!
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  • From Robyn on August 03, 2007
    *chews on things* I love the way you describe this Vegeta dancing! *pouts*

    Okay, that one female sayian needs to get a CLUE! I wanted to smack her the instant Vegeta thought, "She tells me her name every time she talks to me" (or something like that.)

    Hmmmmm, Gohan in black vinyl. Yummy.


    I like the tension you are building in this chapter. :) Looking forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on July 28, 2007
    That was cool, shapeshifters deserve a spotlight now and then!
    And an annoyed Veggie sounds promising ^^
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