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Reviews for Pure Evil 4: A New Evil

By : sefiru
  • From Robyn on July 06, 2007
    OMG...the whole chapter was well written. I can't say I loved everything, because I hate good-byes, but the 'stress relief'. ROFL.
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  • From ultistarmon on July 06, 2007
    I can't wait to see what the Saiyan dragon looks like! Green and red are kinda taken. Maybe it'll be gold with a teal mane. Better yet, teal eyes and a red mane of fur. Red spikes running down it's back and really sharp horns. Big teeth are required. This guy does have to impress saiyans after all. The dragon is suppose to inspire awe and maybe a touch of fear. You want his looks to say, "Don't piss me off, you wouldn't like what I would do to you."
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on July 06, 2007
    great chapter! i'm so glad you updated! please update soon! i wonder what vegeta gave kakarot?
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  • From Rowina on July 01, 2007
    A little plot never hurt anyone, but lemons are the spice of life! Still, I'm looking forward to the upcoming adventure.
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  • From ultistarmon on July 01, 2007
    MMMMmmmm, nothing like a really hot lemon to make one's day!! I swear these sex scenes get better and better each time you write one. Do you think you'll ever run out of lemon ideas??
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  • From ultistarmon on July 01, 2007
    Re-read chapter 2. "They must have died laughing."-LMAO "There is no such thing as too much sex with Kakarot."-ROTFLMAO Love your story more every time I read it.
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  • From ultistarmon on July 01, 2007
    Re-read chapter 1. Looks like Vegeta will have to face off against Brolli on his own. Of course, Bebi is a complete pain in the ass. I like the comic book line though. I'm extremely fond of the magna version of DBZ.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on June 30, 2007
    *droools*
    Vegeta in ropes, handcuffs, anything that's resticting is hot!
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  • From Robyn on June 29, 2007
    :D Rope fetish! You wrote this very well, especially for Vegeta tieing himself up.

    Now, if it were Kakarott tieing Vegeta up, I would expect there to be stratigic knots in erotic places. :P

    Excellent chapter. Thank you for the warning that there would be little contact with them for the majority of the story. I do have to say, though, that I like the plot that is building. *smirks*
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  • From Robyn on June 29, 2007
    OH! This is awesome! (chapter 2) I really liked how Kakarott handled Mr. Satan. hehehehehe


    But I really loved the developing plot. *smirks* ON to chapter 3.
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on June 29, 2007
    thank you for updating! i really liked this chapter! *grins* please update soon! poor kakarot and vegeta! there not going to be together! vegeta has to go and kakarot has to stay! thats horrible!

    ~Fly~
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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on June 23, 2007
    I agree with Macha that your writing shows a lot of improvement with this fic. I can't quite put my finger on the difference, but it's certainly there.

    I really liked Vegeta absently perving over Kakarrot's ankles -- that part seemed more emotionally true to life than some of your earlier stuff. Vegeta feeling stupid over it was a nice touch of characterization, too.
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on June 23, 2007
    thank you for updating! great chapter!

    ~fly-chan~
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  • From ultistarmon on June 23, 2007
    "Did the Earthlings send you a court jester?"-ROTFLMAO I always love the sense of humor you put into these stories. I could just see that WTF? look between Gohan and Mirai. Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on June 23, 2007
    Oooh! What a plot! And Vegeta and Kakarott separated, how will you work this out! ^^
    And Mr. Satan was a nice touch XD
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